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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan is such a pig. I mean it. He is a dog, donkey, monkey, dumbass all rolled into one. Okay Maan now that you apologixzed, you want her to understand your oh so sincere apologies and leave it behind and cocoon you in her embrace? Right. And what about her you idiot gadha? You think she is out there giving free hugs? Gadha kahinka it is her who needs that reassurance. More than you probably.

Okay now that I got my anger out, I will explain why am I mad? I am mad at him not because of all the hurtful words he caused her but because whatever he tried was not worth the hurt she faced. I felt his saying of sorry was mechanical. Okay let's get done with it, and move ahead of sorts. He always thought about what after he apologizes and she forgives, but never thought about the task at hand. The actual process of earning her forgiveness. He didn't earn it.

See I am not saying he didn't try. He did. He went out of his way and it is difficult I understand but you don't go saying time and again being never accustomed to planning surprises for others, I did all this for you and you aren't forgiving me. Are you asking forgiveness or demanding it out of her? Yes you are a personal man and never do things like this Maan but you hurt her so no one would cover up for you. You ought to go out of character for things which are out of your reach.

I understand Geet here. As I said at the starting of this fic, she intrigues me. The woman has such strength of character that amazes me. She did all that because she thinks at least he will be happy with all her "doing her duties...the routine"

Geet, take a bow. And you Onir, take two bows. That was one move which she did with her genuine heart, believing that he wouldn't notice and which in turn snapped his insides into two.

I may look like a sadist here for bashing him right left center but Onir, thing is Geet has her insecurities and they have a reason. This drift...this void..this not knowing if you have right on the other person, this happens in almost any relationship. There comes a stagnant point, and you both need to cross that, if one isn't coming, you got to drag them out of the point. You need to run the extra mile...for you..for that person. Isn't it?

Now go Maan baby get your shoes ready for running🤣

I know that was a lame joke but oh well...

Might add more. Depends😆

Edit:

Okay I read the next part and my thoughts took a U-turn. One's upbringing effects one a lot. So I do understand he is really really new in expressing his feelings out and how much it would have bothered him. Yes I forgive him a little though I still keep a kick for him for voicing it out that he was not used to it and she should understand that. He is still a Gadha for that.

But you know the entire update where you first gave us a background info of why Maan and Geet are what they are, how their upbringing affected them, and all...is so beautifully written. Maan is insecure too. When he said is she love with him at all, I don't see him doubting her but him. I know where he is coming from.

Because your partner wishes you to be something more than what you are, it is natural but to wonder why will your partner love you? But the answer is a tricky one. They love you for what you are. All your idiocy included😆

And the snap was so beautiful. I could almost see the shy smile on her face and the smirk on his. That bought a smile on my face too.

You know why I want to kick you? Because look at this... you make me be a rational person which I am not😆

I would've supported the girl at any cost but you made me feel for him. I almost felt bad for calling him with all sorts of names... you know?

Onir lady, you already gave me a favorite OS and now this... and yet you call you write so so? Can I kick on that oh round bum of yours please?😡
Edited by .Maggie. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shika did you really write this comment?? 😲

Jokes apart, seriously I loved the comment ❤️

There's so much you've asked i need to sort it out and get my thoughts together to reply it to you...

Give me some moments ... will get back to you. shortly. 😊

🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Maan is such a pig. I mean it. He is a dog, donkey, monkey, dumbass all rolled into one. Okay Maan now that you apologixzed, you want her to understand your oh so sincere apologies and leave it behind and cocoon you in her embrace? Right. And what about her you idiot gadha? You think she is out there giving free hugs? Gadha kahinka it is her who needs that reassurance. More than you probably.

Oh my I can actually imagine fuming hot air coming out form your ears while typing oh so lovely manes for Maan. 😆 Don't worry agar is gadhe ne sab kuch behtar nahi kiya toh I'm definitely going to send him to you for treatment in kicks and punched to bring him in line... but till then give him sometime to sort this all out. 😳

Okay now that I got my anger out, I will explain why am I mad? I am mad at him not because of all the hurtful words he caused her but because whatever he tried was not worth the hurt she faced. I felt his saying of sorry was mechanical. Okay let's get done with it, and move ahead of sorts. He always thought about what after he apologizes and she forgives, but never thought about the task at hand. The actual process of earning her forgiveness. He didn't earn it.
Maan hadn't realised the extent of damage his granted behavior has done to his beautiful cherished relation. He his someone like this who couldn't see beyond the normalcy. But then there's something more that has led them to this stage. Believe me I will reveal it all soon, hopefully then you will be able to relate to him.

See I am not saying he didn't try. He did. He went out of his way and it is difficult I understand but you don't go saying time and again being never accustomed to planning surprises for others, I did all this for you and you aren't forgiving me. Are you asking forgiveness or demanding it out of her? Yes you are a personal man and never do things like this Maan but you hurt her so no one would cover up for you. You ought to go out of character for things which are out of your reach.
Bold: This is what is the nature of many individuals that harms their relation, and what I wanted to bring out through my writing this part. Glad I could do justice to it as its noticed. 😊

I understand Geet here. As I said at the starting of this fic, she intrigues me. The woman has such strength of character that amazes me. She did all that because she thinks at least he will be happy with all her "doing her duties...the routine"
Geet has layers to herself, but mostly she's the woman I admire so she will be there all string but yes she does have her own faults and weakness. I believe that a relation is made by two individuals becoming one in all aspects so even a phase like this equally to be borne and responsibility of both. She too allowed this routine to get set in for him...


Geet, take a bow. And you Onir, take two bows. That was one move which she did with her genuine heart, believing that he wouldn't notice and which in turn snapped his insides into two.
Oh I did take a bow. 😳 This coming form you means so much to me. This is something that was needed for him to realise the damage, this caused the stirring.
I may look like a sadist here for bashing him right left center but Onir, thing is Geet has her insecurities and they have a reason. This drift...this void..this not knowing if you have right on the other person, this happens in almost any relationship. There comes a stagnant point, and you both need to cross that, if one isn't coming, you got to drag them out of the point. You need to run the extra mile...for you..for that person. Isn't it?
I completely agree to this point you've raised and that is what I'M TRYING TO BRING OUT. Love you for this analysis. That extra mile is all it takes... it takes effort to build your lives stronger & better following the happily ever after.
Now go Maan baby get your shoes ready for running🤣
Shika you cracked me up with this joke 🤣
I know that was a lame joke but oh well...

Might add more. Depends😆


Will reply to the remaining part later... but thanks for taking time to read & comment... it means a lot 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohkay..

if you want you can kill me for this...

i will catch up soon...

and jitne bhi padhne baaki hai.. i will.. asap.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetkj

ohkay..


if you want you can kill me for this...

i will catch up soon...

and jitne bhi padhne baaki hai.. i will.. asap.

Sweety 🤗 I missed you... i won't kill you aaram se padh lena koi jaldi nahi hai... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Sweety 🤗 I missed you... i won't kill you aaram se padh lena koi jaldi nahi hai... 😃


i missed you too..

yaar kuch bhi kaho.. if toh if hai..
kahi bhi baat kar le.. par ye toh yahi rahega... 😃😃

and i will try my best to read it asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.



Okay I read the next part and my thoughts took a U-turn. One's upbringing effects one a lot. So I do understand he is really really new in expressing his feelings out and how much it would have bothered him. Yes I forgive him a little though I still keep a kick for him for voicing it out that he was not used to it and she should understand that. He is still a Gadha for that.
Yes one's upbringing does affect a lot. Maan has baggage which has turned to be causing a wedge in his most treasured relation. Gadha will improve, trust me . 😊
But you know the entire update where you first gave us a background info of why Maan and Geet are what they are, how their upbringing affected them, and all...is so beautifully written. Maan is insecure too. When he said is she love with him at all, I don't see him doubting her but him. I know where he is coming from.
Glad that the whole background info was taken well, I was apprehensive about that detailing. Love majes you insecure because you give your all to it, so fear of losing makes you so. Yes he is doubting self. More of it in next part. 😊
Because your partner wishes you to be something more than what you are, it is natural but to wonder why will your partner love you? But the answer is a tricky one. They love you for what you are. All your idiocy included😆
Yes, love means accepting it all, and Maan has to get that grilled in him . 😉
And the snap was so beautiful. I could almost see the shy smile on her face and the smirk on his. That bought a smile on my face too.
Glad you liked that snap... it has an important role further on... 😳
You know why I want to kick you? Because look at this... you make me be a rational person which I am not😆
I take that kick gracefully. 😆 You're quite rational Shika 😊
I would've supported the girl at any cost but you made me feel for him. I almost felt bad for calling him with all sorts of names... you know?

Onir lady, you already gave me a favorite OS and now this... and yet you call you write so so? Can I kick on that oh round bum of yours please?😡

Don't kick😆 ... but honestly thanks for the encouragement & support always 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
THAP THAP THAP!
😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
wen u gonna update. waiting waiting waiting

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