Okay now that I got my anger out, I will explain why am I mad? I am mad at him not because of all the hurtful words he caused her but because whatever he tried was not worth the hurt she faced. I felt his saying of sorry was mechanical. Okay let's get done with it, and move ahead of sorts. He always thought about what after he apologizes and she forgives, but never thought about the task at hand. The actual process of earning her forgiveness. He didn't earn it.
See I am not saying he didn't try. He did. He went out of his way and it is difficult I understand but you don't go saying time and again being never accustomed to planning surprises for others, I did all this for you and you aren't forgiving me. Are you asking forgiveness or demanding it out of her? Yes you are a personal man and never do things like this Maan but you hurt her so no one would cover up for you. You ought to go out of character for things which are out of your reach.
I understand Geet here. As I said at the starting of this fic, she intrigues me. The woman has such strength of character that amazes me. She did all that because she thinks at least he will be happy with all her "doing her duties...the routine"
Geet, take a bow. And you Onir, take two bows. That was one move which she did with her genuine heart, believing that he wouldn't notice and which in turn snapped his insides into two.
I may look like a sadist here for bashing him right left center but Onir, thing is Geet has her insecurities and they have a reason. This drift...this void..this not knowing if you have right on the other person, this happens in almost any relationship. There comes a stagnant point, and you both need to cross that, if one isn't coming, you got to drag them out of the point. You need to run the extra mile...for you..for that person. Isn't it?
Now go Maan baby get your shoes ready for running🤣
I know that was a lame joke but oh well...
Might add more. Depends😆
Edit:
Okay I read the next part and my thoughts took a U-turn. One's upbringing effects one a lot. So I do understand he is really really new in expressing his feelings out and how much it would have bothered him. Yes I forgive him a little though I still keep a kick for him for voicing it out that he was not used to it and she should understand that. He is still a Gadha for that.
But you know the entire update where you first gave us a background info of why Maan and Geet are what they are, how their upbringing affected them, and all...is so beautifully written. Maan is insecure too. When he said is she love with him at all, I don't see him doubting her but him. I know where he is coming from.
Because your partner wishes you to be something more than what you are, it is natural but to wonder why will your partner love you? But the answer is a tricky one. They love you for what you are. All your idiocy included😆
And the snap was so beautiful. I could almost see the shy smile on her face and the smirk on his. That bought a smile on my face too.
You know why I want to kick you? Because look at this... you make me be a rational person which I am not😆
I would've supported the girl at any cost but you made me feel for him. I almost felt bad for calling him with all sorts of names... you know?
Onir lady, you already gave me a favorite OS and now this... and yet you call you write so so? Can I kick on that oh round bum of yours please?😡
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