MG (FF) : Back to You (Updated #II link: Pg 141)

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Shefali16

@Shefali16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#761

yo!

a sensuous encounter huh 😉

luvd it!!!!!!!!!!!

interesting 😃

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Aphrodisiac

@Aphrodisiac

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#762

Omg angry Maan on Geet ☺️ ❤️

Dev is Maan's bro but he wears short & t-shirt to office 😆

loved it

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tanya94

@tanya94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#763

hey...i loved loved this ff of yours👏👏...the way u are mixing the past and present is amazing...both the tracks are equally exciting and interesting...i so love this ff 😳

what i like most about it is it is simple yet very well written and interesting...read it all in one go that to frm 2 am at night till 5 am😆...

ive sent u a buddy request so i wud be obliged if u cud pm me...i promise to give my feedback as long as my vacations are on..that is about maybe 2 weeks more...after that ill be going to my hostel where i dnt have net access😕so i wud read the pending updates when i come back for my next vacations in a month or two...so my feedback for them wud be delayed (although i wud love to read the enitre ff before going this time only but i know thats nt possible for u😆😆)

also cud u give me link for ur other works...😳

lastly...u r an amazing writer dear and this ff is one of the best ffs ive ever read👍🏼..great work..keep it going👏

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mhappy

@mhappy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#764

WHAT A TWIST

THE INFORMAL ENVIRONMENT OF OFFICE WAS REALLY COOL

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Diva7

@Diva7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#765

tan ta na ...here comes again our caveman maan 😆

hmm somehow i had dis feeling dat DK is none other thn maan's bro...d most i luvd in dis chapter is d way u portrayed whole picture of Dev n his personality 👏 m loving dis Dev already.

awesome chapter dear

eagerly waiting fr nxt😳

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#766

geet boss is maan's brother..he he..geet got another shock..cant wait for next update..wonderful

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#767

when we will get next update..?

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lizzy84

@lizzy84

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#768

HIII FROSTY I KNOW U MUST BE SOOO ANGRY

GUILTY AS CHARGED'😆

BUT WAIT A MINUTE FIRST ME ANGRY WITHU 😡

I THOUGHT U WOULD HAVE UPDATED 4 TIMES 😆

BUT STORY IS DIFFERENT HERE 😆

NOW I WANT BACK TO BACK UPDATES 😉

I KNOW MY COMMENTS ARE PENDING

ACTUALLY MY LAST PAPER IS ON THURSDAY 😃

SO WILL RESUME READING FROM THEN 😃

TILL THEN U PLAN UR UPDATES AND ALSO WAIT FOR MY WAITINGSSS POST😉

AND YES THANKS ALOT FOR SENDING ME PM 😆

SO NOW MY ASSETS ARE UR UPDATES AND COMMENTS ARE MY LIABILITY😆 (ACCOUNTS IS TO BE BLAMED )

LOVE AANYA

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dqno1

@dqno1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#769

loved it.

Dev sounds cool 😃

Maan is so possessive now but what kept him away then.

as you said a hot hot one 😃

Thanks Frosty 😃

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#770

Originally posted by: priya111111
oh god dev is none other than maans brother. Loved it very much. Oh god really maan scared dev and geet by barging into the cabin suddenly. loved maneet moments and maans teasing

Hahaaa

I guess the twist payed off😉

Maan is the sher; he ought to scare his brother out for once; Geet...well doesn't seem scared but appalled at the discovery😆

Thank you darling!