MG (FF) : Back to You (Updated #II link: Pg 141) - Page 16

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

Sigh. I live in Delhi and Yamuna nowadays is anything but tigress of a river! Though documentaries still can be made but on pollution :P. But I liked your description of Yamuna, years ago it must have been the way you described.

Water being connection between them-nice ! But Yamuna doesnt drain into Arabian Sea :D :D, nahin toh sone pe suhaaga ho jata :D :D.
Did it make sense?

M-G (Y).

Your writing has a different touch, royal and elegant kind of.

I know Yamunaji is anything but forceful nowadays;

Originally posted by: frostedstarlit

</div>I know Yamunaji is anything but forceful nowadays;
<div>The industrial froth and waste is culminating the holy river slowly...

But this is how I've always visualized her, Yamunaji; the tigress of a river!

Any ways, thank you so much darling!

Well, the water connection thing isn't original offcourse because in the show too water linked them.

So...

Yeah, true; had Yamunaji drained in Arabian sea then their connection would have got a holy closure. But nevertheless.

Your idea was great but...!😳

Yamunaji! I like the sound of it. Reminds me of stories I read in my school days. :)

It is almost a visual treat to read your work.

I never wanted memories...always wanted you ! beautiful ! so, they met again...and no hesitation...no shyness...just got back to their original stance ! worry written allover her for his injury ! and their first meeting...why so much...pain in his eyes...? loved your description of sea in the moonlight...looking calm and composed hiding many stroms within it ! waiting for maan's action and geet's reaction ...

more than awesome dear

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

Yamunaji! I like the sound of it. Reminds me of stories I read in my school days. :)

That's the way we rever our rivers... I guess when I refer to the river in first person then Yamunaji is all I can refer too...

Originally posted by: love2_soma

<div align="center"><font color="#003333"><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">lovely update...

</font><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">loved it very much...

</font><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">thank u very much fr d lovely update...

</font><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

</font><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">continue soon plz...</font></font>
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Thank you darling!!!
Glad you liked it 😃

Originally posted by: dqno1

It is almost a visual treat to read your work.

The encounter at the river a jolt from the past of GHSP. Loved it..

Contrasting with the pleasantness of the sea.

Two people who have endured the fierceness of the waters together in a much calmer place now

They are mesmerizing to read and I wonder what fate or you will bring their way.

Do continue soon.

Loved your writing.

Thanks for the update.

Thank you so much darling!!