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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: sweetkj

avi.. tune nahi kaha.. par mene avein bata diya, 🤗

onir pehle mazaak udaati hai.. feer bus 🤗 chipka deti hai.

Tu meri hi hai... toh haq banta hai... 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

congrats for the new thread dear...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi
Superb Update Avi 👏
Loved the Song very Much 😉
Cable car ride was Awesome😳
This Upd is dedicate to me
🤗

Aaj kaisa hai Sheen... were u able to eat...

🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: CrabbyEntity
i had a gud hearty laugh reading d update and enjoyed a lot seeing maan cribbing and sulking like a kid...typical teenage traits...poor boy was on a spree to impress his lady luv instead has gone and messed up the opportunity at hand bt being a teenager he z bound to b impulsive and do mistakes and i guess for teenage boys getting familiarized with their ego is the first step to get the maturity of a man...luvd all his actions to gain attention..to thnk abt showing geet the world n noticing little thngs abt geet her liks and dislikes and mentally planning to avoid and add thngs according to her taste was so so sweet of him...luvd all maneet moments they were so sweet... and the song ws so beautiful luvd the whole feel it provided with the update!!!
thank u soo much for yet another beautiful update!!!👏

Thanks Gitu.

Typical teenager hai... falling in love madly but also acting madly at times...😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: love2_soma
beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Thanks Soma. Glad you liked it

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: honeygrape
love the way they speak thru their eyes...bina baath kiye theey understand each other...hayee,...are there people like this in real???

"Main tumhare saath hoon. Darne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai".
i can imagine maan saying this...😃
haaw this much ego is not nice maan babu...i thot he ll hold her close atleast aftr seeing her so much scared...but no , yeh toh baba maan singh khurana hai na😆 but glad that he made her feel better with his words😊
and why are they not speaking to each other??
nice song selection dear...i love ths song😊

They don't talk much. That is the way I want to write their characters. I was like this too before marraige, with the nodding and the silence..😆

As for the dialogue, that is what I love best about GHSP Maan.

I wanted these to be his first words to Geet.

His ego will only grow as he does.. after all he has to become MSK.

Glad you liked the song...

Meri Purvi itni badi comments likhne lagi... waah... BHBs ka jadu at work...😆

Thanks Purvi

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: sweetkj

avi.. tune nahi kaha.. par mene avein bata diya, 🤗

onir pehle mazaak udaati hai.. feer bus 🤗 chipka deti hai.

Chalo acha hai... kabhi kabhi update ke baare mein bhi toh bata do...😃

Tere time pe lagaya tha.. hope you read it...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Onir
I just read the note at the start...😕
Kya hua... why thinking of wrapping up??

There are many of us who love your writings...me being one of them. .. 🤗

Struggling a bit at this time.. but I know you are all here for me.. that makes me keep going..🤗