THE LOCKET(5) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED 1

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#481

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Dev is something LOL! IStar falling 4 his charms..well written

He certainly is😆

Glad you liked it..

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: heytal

You don't need to thank your friends Avi
ur effort truly shows and it was a treat to read it
Believe in yourself and your baby(story)
Rest all will fall in to place
Jaadu ki Jhappi
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dreamy4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#483

Dev the real devil that too very clever one 😆. Enjoying this i-star and I-m-2clever attitude wala cat fight. Fantastic update. Loved it

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: dreamy4ever
Dev the real devil that too very clever one 😆. Enjoying this i-star and I-m-2clever attitude wala cat fight. Fantastic update. Loved it

Thank you!

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#485

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

today darlingsss...😃

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honeygrape

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Posted: 12 years ago

#486

She may have given in if not for the slight red lipstick mark leftover on his cheek.

for once i thot may NT was jealous imagining him so close to other gals...but guess its too early for her to feel that way...

lovly choclate house...

ohh i love this Dev...have i said that before...kya attitude hai bande ko...poor nt...now what ll she do..

tiffin chor 😆😆 how do u come up with such innovative and hatke names?? loving all those names...1st it was Istar...😆

aha and she s getting affectd by him...thats nice to see...

loved the last part where he saw another version of Istar...guess his approach towards her will change a lil atleast now...

lovely part...continue sooon

Edited by honeygrape - 12 years ago

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CrabbyEntity

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Posted: 12 years ago

#487

Tiffin chor... seriouslyyy...u had me rofling with this one🤣 ..where do u cum up with such schemes...had a gala time reading the update...just luvd ur characterization of dev and naintara...dev's character is so so interesting and so is naintara's even while reading i wd try n guess abt their reactions and responses to the situations presented and boyyy i'm left sweetly surprised every time...both of them r like tom n jerry always up to each others neck and the ending was superlicious i enjoy reading them as much as i enjoy reading maneet...just luvddd d whole update...

thank u for the update and for d thousand smiles that the update brings along!!!😃😊😛

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JeevanaP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: dqno1

Geet and Tara live in an apartment not in KM.

Daadima has an office in the outhouse also for her foundation work where Geet works as her part time PA.

Sorry for the confusion.

ok... mera confusion clear hogaya...