~MG SS~ ADHOORI ZINDAGI~ PT12/PG150 /Thread 2 added pg 157 3sep - Page 50

Rtdtz pov : I don't know what relation they were sharing I don't wanted to know also as a doc my goal is to keep her alive and happy to see her playing like normal children. She know she was at her last stage she will leave this world at that little age itself fir bhi she was hoping to do some miracle and to keep her alive with "GK" as she know's how much "GK" loves her she is "Gk's" breathe and soul.

Her thoughts were broken with "GK" scream

"Mansee uto kya hua tuje mansee plz" geet was crying bitterly seeing her unconscious

Ridtz ran to them and checked her was trying to get hold on the tears that was ready to flow in her eyes as a doc she cont broke down at least in front of patients she have to save this little angel "Mansee kapoor" who was still kid with five years age only.

But the next incident shocked her when mansee whishpered in unconscious state

"M"mansee dekho mai yahi hu teri maa yaha hai ankeho kholo beta"ansee dekho mai yahi hu teri maa yaha hai ankeho kholo beta" geet pleaded while crying bitterly

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Maan without seeing the caller id just received the call and was thanking the caller for saving him from his family. He was not able to with stand their questions but he cont hurt them by saying anything to them who were very happy because of his arrival. The call was running with silence but some disturbance was coming bringing maan back to reality.

"Hello Maan singh khurana speaking" said maan with attitude

But there is silence lingering out he checked the id ones thinking it may be any wrong number was shocked to see khurana hospitals number. He wondered why he will get call from KH

"Hello who is that speak something" said maan

Driver said in one go and call went off leaving maan to tremble with fear while tears wetting his cheeks he was numb to react to anything he felt like his soul was slipping from his body leaving him to live like statue. His dad was one who gave him soo much pain at his childhood but no child can hate his father that extent that they will give damn when they were in critical condition. A man like maan cont take it easily he was still in shocking state was in deep thoughts hoping for his dad safety when aniee called him asking him to join with them

He have to inform to his family but how he can they were soo happy up to now he didn't want to see tears in anyone eyes . He thanked kaka for informing to him not to any one, his baby sister was staring at his direction hoping at least he will join with them. Maan just assured her he will be back soon and just left from their running like manic leaving his family wonder around questions of his hurry while naina just nodded her head in disbelief seeing her son who is workaholic the remaining grinned ear to ear as they want it only (ok don't stress your mind cherries will tell you about it later)

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Ritdz was shocked to the core was standing like statue seeing turn of events happening around her she really don't know how to react also.

She was treating mansee form last six months only but the bond she was sharing with mansee was unbreakable. When she asked about GK why she didn't take her to the hospital at first place when she met mansee "GK" just shows her cold attitude, but she guessed some hidden "raaz" was there. But she didn't want to peep in others life that's what is her nature, so she kept quite all the while. More over geet just asked her not to reveal it to anyone that she was taking care of mansee as she didn't want any hardships. At that time ritdz was only bothering about mansee so she just assured geet saying she will take care of her. But she didn't expect "GK" to be mansee maa is will not be true she was trying to assure herself.

Ritdz was sure of one thing the attitude geet was showing to all was only show off as she was seeing geet very near whenever she came to visit mansee . She got to know soo many things about geet, she was very quite girl was hiding soo many things in her heart. She tried to ask her soo many times but geet just keep on saying none of your business. At times ritdz got angry but as time passes she got used for it more over mansee is imp for her as she was her patient.

Geet kept some rules for her and the most wondering part was GK successfully convinced the dean also who was very strict to all. At hospital no one knows who is mansee geet will came to visit her at night times only and also very few times. Mansee won't allow any one near her she likes to be alone in dark room which was arranged by the dean especially for her.

Ritz thoughts were broken by geet screaming who was trying her best to get attention of her. With shocking expression ritdz just kept staring at geet and mansee with dazed state she just asked at matter of fact

Geet got startled with her question she just forgot presence of ritdz in the fear of losing mansee. Geet just turned other side facing her back to ritdz not wanting to hurt ritdz who was saving her soul up to now. She respected ritdz more than anything and ritdz didn't questioned her about anything not to forget didn't try to take advantage of her which geet believes this cruel world will do. What else she wants only mansee safety whenever ritdz tries to ask her anything she keep on hurting her showing cold hand, but in real sense geet was crying in her heart silently to hurt her like that.

She wants only mansee safe and ritdz was doing that but what she was doing hurting a girl like ritdz she hates herself for doing this. Hiding all those emotions that were reflecting on her face like mirror she just turned to mansee who was lying unconscious on bed as geet placed her

It just hits ritdz like a tight slap on her face tears rolled down from her eyes wetting her cheeks which were trying to flow down from long time. She gives a painful look to geet, who was just threatening mansee hair with full of love was trying her best to ignore ritdz hurtful expression. Geet knows very well it will hurt ritdz but she didn't want any questions from her which have some bitter truth. Ritdz was hurted soo much, is it only the thing she was treating mansee only for money that's it there is nothing else she questioned herself not believing her ears which she just listened from geet. She knows there is no relation Gk with her but she accepted her as sister she have any one in this world as she was orphan it hurts her soo much her heart was bleeding. To get clear off the things she just stares at geet eyes which were saying something else

"Ritdz plz just save her she is my soul plz" is the only thing she can listen form geet eyes.

Ritdz blinked her eyes couple of times to make her believe and she decided just go on with her heart. Its better some questions not to be unanswered thought ritdz but her mind was scolding her for doing this saying to her you were not any slave. She just gave way to her heart just leaves from there taking mansee in her arms not uttering any word.

After ritdz left geet just slammed the door shut kept her head on the door while tears rolling down she thumped on the floor. She cont go with mansee or she can't sit their silently she hates everything that she was doing hurting ritdz who was showing concern on her. She doesn't want anyone help nor anyone pity god had given her the most painful life anyone can't expect she don't want anyone got suffered along with her that's why she was doing this. Suddenly question came to her mind what if sheela came to know about "mansee?" no the thought itself was her scaring her to death she was helpless can only cry seeing her fate. She was now just praying to god to keep her alive.

As ritdz just coming down skipping few steps while descending hurriedly servants were seeing her with questioning eyes. The head maid knows ritdz well than others as he saw her few times visiting "GK" but with small girl he was confused as ritdz didn't told him about her. The other servants were new they don't know anything about Kapoors mansion the head maid signaled everyone to leave.

Ritdz can understand everyone questioning eyes she just informed to head maid that girl was orphan was patient of her she was sleeping because of seductive she pleaded him not to inform to sheela as she hates outers presence in her house without her permission. Maid was not convinced but he assured her he will take care of everything ridtz left to hospitial with soo many questions running in her mind

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Khurana hospitals (KH)

Told ridtz to Dr.Armaan malik 26yrs old Sr.doc who just examining mansee reports.

Armaan was best friend of maan they were best buddies from their schooling at London, he came to India from London to meet his parents two days back the dean just gave him this case saying it was very tough case only you can help in that. Armaan was very calm going person but when it came's to work he was very tough to handle

"Being junior how can you treate this case more over it was looking like mansee was having problem with brain"

said Armaan stressing the word brain too much scanning ritdz from top to bottom

He can guess she was giving smile to everyone but the sadness was there in her eyes he was trying to distract her mind

Ridtz didn't appreciate this how he can say she was not capable when he doesn't know anything about her. Dean himself given this case to her as mansee matter was very confidential she tried her best to treat her by consulting different specialists but at end they given up saying just hope for the best. Here he is saying what exactly she was saying to all specialists but they brushed off her talks saying she was Jr.Doc she doesn't like his attitude. but was impressed with his professionalism

"she likes to live in dark room right and was not allowing anyone to touch her also" said armaan while seeing mansee who was playing by herself by clapping her hands in air sometimes touching nurse face was but when nurse tries to hold her she will start cry slapping the nurse laughing loud for ouvhing her with innocent oozing out. Ritdz kept gaping at him while he was saying all those with mouth wide open

Said armaan it was time for ridtz to get embarrass the pain she was bearing was still there in her heart but after seeing mansee getting conscious she was back to normal. She believes work is god she wants to give best, when she was in hospital she will keep all her personal life away with smile adoring on her lips.

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Maan with jet speed reached the khurana hospital his face was firm but his heart was crying only he knows that. He straight away goes into hospital without glancing at anyone who were wishing him goes to receptionist enquiring about his dad

"Where is Ranjith singh khurana?" asked maan with authority voice

("Sahib Sir Come with me")

said driver who was waiting at the entrance itself seeing maan state he can understand he was soo much scared for his dad

Said driver revealing him from his scared thoughts. Maan was soo much revealed after listening this but why he was stressing himself like that when they were at no.1 position in construction business and in London also KC was at top not in these two cities whole over the world dev is there for him also. He signed there is nothing to do thinking about him he will keep on doing things like this only he wants perfection in all things so he will do all works by himself not bothering about anything.

Stated maan while going to the room where his dad was

said driver standing at the door after reaching the room where Ranjith was there while maan nodded assuring him he won't say anything to anyone

Maan just watched his dad who was dirking some juice while discussing something with dean a tear escaped from his eyes seeing him fine he listened there talks they were discussing about KH , meeting in that condition also he won't change maan smiled remembering his childhood days how his dad works like robot for his family

Asked Armaan while hugging maan startling him with his tsunami entry. Armaan saw maan while he was going through corridor he just followed him saying ritdz to follow him with mansee files while she did that cursing him for halting the discussion

"Amy shuuu don't shout I will kill you"

said maan while hugging him back pointing at his dad

Said armaan while looking at roof to make him smile while maan chuckled seeing his antiques

Said maan with annoyed face

"maanu language this is hospital yaar temple for patients so no jokes" said amy with serious tone

"Ok you won don't start your soo called drama again" said maan with irritating look

"maanu what happen to uncle I came here now only is he fine?" asked armaan with concerned tone looking at maan's dad through window

"Kaka told me he is fine but you ones check him and dare to say him I am here ok" threatened maan answering Amy

"Amy no more arguments on that did you get that" said maan with serious tone

Amy knows maan and his dad have some things to sort out but he don't know what exactly was as maan didn't told him anything. Maan just loves his buddy much but he didn't tell him as he doesn't want any one interference in his life which has soo many hurdles and bitter truth.

Ridtz and kaka were silent spectators there but buddies got disturbed by some sounds which was going on in corridor

Mansee was crying and by the help of wall taking baby steps coming in their direction and nurses was trying to hold her.

After amy and ridtz left nurses tries to give her seductive as Armaan ordered them as she needs sleep but seeing needle mansee got scared and just slapped the nurse with her tiny hands nurses was used of it also. But mansee just pushed her and got down from her tiny bed was trying her best to go away from them. Maan, Amy ridtz and kaka were present at side by room of mansee trying to save her from them glancing back at nurses with the help of wall mansee just holds maan's leg as he was leaning on wall talking to armaan.

Maan just admired her seeing her he can say she was very small looking like star in that white frock her hair was messy but flowing with air rhythm she was looking soo cute and innocent. He knelt down in front of mansee seeing tears in her hazels which oozing out innocence his heart pained a tear escaped from his eyes seeing her cry. he wipes away her tears nodding his head for no while mansee cries out loud seeing his tear she wipes away maan tears with her tiny and hands laughed out loudly just hugged him while maan embrace her welcoming her whole heartedly.

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