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ritvi_mg

@ritvi_mg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#751

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

ab karna to kuchh aisa hi padega.
wait for some time Ritvi things will come automatically in place

ok di m waiting

when r u going to update di???

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Dona

@Donnaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#752

loved the update

finally maan's mom able to know abt maan;s love

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#753

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio
loved it

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#754

Originally posted by: ritvi_mg

ok di m waiting
when r u going to update di???

May be tomorrow at the max on saturday

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Rashmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#755

Originally posted by: goldenmoon
loved the update
finally maan's mom able to know abt maan;s love

thanks Dona

ya priya knows but I dont think she will be able to do that

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pmatrash

@pmatrash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#756

New Teaser

They heard a knock and saw geet at the door.

Priya -Geet come in do you need anything?

Then she saw the gifts in her hand which salma gave her-why have you brought them here?

Geet-I have brought them to return them to you.

Priya-But ye to Salma ne tumhen diye the na?

Maan and Ram were watching them.

Ram-Geet priya is right These all are for you.so keep them.

geet-nahin uncle, these are not for me but for the girl who is going to be bride of maan.and I m not that girl.Pleas give these to Sameera.saying this she kept all the gifts on bed and turned to leave.Priya's eyed were wet to see Geet.she wanted to say that it was their wish to see her as their D-I-L.but couldn's say a word.

After Geet left Maan too took his shirt and went from there.

before the last update i posted a wrong teaser so now I m giving you a fresh teaser hope you will like it. Next update may be tomorrow night
my next update will be the 50th update. and I m too happy for that as your response converted my SS in to the FF
Thanks for that-Rashmi