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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

hey kk kise ho tum maje boolmat javo meri jaan hehehe

wise mera comment tho bantha hai abhi ye lo

i had red upto 7th part only

maan ki pa such a cute and cool gng

maan ko phasa diya in that wooing programe as per geet

maan was fallen for no1 per thank god she is not his types what if he accepts her and no 3 mai usko sisterly feeling aaya

give me break yar he came to hunt his bride not sis i thought

there bonding was really sooo cute

and our sherni ka kya hai what is her mystrey re

looking like u wonna give a big tuhd to me

babaji mera raksha karna i hope i wont get faint i got to know the mystery re

finally they met that too in unique way have to confess that

after that startled maid u started this per u didn't even tell me re

chal hat teri explanations nahi chahiye ab

chalo comment dediye kush hojavo

tum aur teri stories huh


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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: lovebirdsmaneet

hey kk kise ho tum maje boolmat javo meri jaan hehehe

wise mera comment tho bantha hai abhi ye lo

i had red upto 7th part only

maan ki pa such a cute and cool gng

maan ko phasa diya in that wooing programe as per geet

maan was fallen for no1 per thank god she is not his types what if he accepts her and no 3 mai usko sisterly feeling aaya

give me break yar he came to hunt his bride not sis i thought

there bonding was really sooo cute

and our sherni ka kya hai what is her mystrey re

looking like u wonna give a big tuhd to me

babaji mera raksha karna i hope i wont get faint i got to know the mystery re

finally they met that too in unique way have to confess that

after that startled maid u started this per u didn't even tell me re

chal hat teri explanations nahi chahiye ab

chalo comment dediye kush hojavo

tum aur teri stories huh





Thanku yaar.. ab jaldi se read the whole part, k?
u r not in my buddy list??
so sorry yaar.. *puppy face*


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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
@laks: kahan ho?
lily went for a vacation??
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Finally mission Geet's hidden Identity successfully completed by great spy Maan Singh Khurana.😃

Wow,Trust is thickening day by day. Dora shared two important moments of her to her doraemon, that so sweet.😆

Shri , nice name. But one thing came in my mind, ... ...
Her name after mairrage will be Shri Maan (Shrimaan) Khurana where as in reality she will be Shrimati khurana.😉😆

Barbie doll called papa ka chamcha her fiance, Oh, I am too loving it.😃

Awesome update . Loved it very much.😊
I hope you are well now, if not then my wishes are with you that you get well soon.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

@laks: kahan ho?
lily went for a vacation??



how r u rems??? feeling ok na...

lils is busy with guests... she had told na...

miss u...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
so the suspense is over...geet is navy officer...at last maan could find her secret ...omg she introduced him as her fiance..
she is known as shri handa at her work place...still it was hided from his dad and her sis know it...geet dont worry now maan also is there to help you
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77


@divzi: i forgot to reply for ur prev part comment. that was really a shock for me. but i m glad i was able to write a part that is close to ur heart.

@AKSashadow : Loved ur interpretation about Shri. thanku..

@maansee : hw can i forget my pies?

@lils : jaldi aa jao dear..

@all: thanku guys.. i really enjoyed reading ur comments. my fever is ok, now. but still there is throat infection. thanku guys for the wishes..😃




Pls add "Remyapms' to ur buddylist


10. Fake Fiance

After the initial shock, they all greeted me except Mr. Williams. He was glaring me at now and then. His eyes and hair are light brown and looks like he is in mid fifties. We all took seat and intentionally I side hugged geet earning a glare from her.

So as u noe ur father's life in danger, we..

Wait! What!! Uncle's life is in danger!! How?

Gentleman, can u keep ur mouth shut for a sec. we r discussing an..

To hell with ur discussions.

I roared unable to keep my anger. my uncle's life is in danger and he is.. I can easily guess William is not at impressed.

U r not supposed to talk to an officer like this.

I ignored him and turned to geet.

Whats happening geet?

Pls calm down maan..

She caressed my back in a soothing manner that calmed me immediately.

U noe abt the govt project, rt?

Ya. We both r working in that.

Yes. We hav kept this project in a low profile. But terrorist somehow came to noe about it and they r trying to steal blueprints of that warehouse. Mr. Williams discussed about his protection, but dad discarded it. That's y I decided to step into this project so that I can watch him and the project closely.

I felt sudden protection towards my uncle. I have seen a fatherly figure in him. he always guided me in every matter and I won't cause any harm to touch him.

Nothing will happen to dad..

I saw a surprised look on her face. She squeezed my hand tightly and gave me a small smile. Then she turned towards William who had baffled expression on his face.

So whats the current status?

he glared at me and I gave him back my evil smile.

A bomb has been planted on the ship in which the materials where transported. We somehow caught them before it reached there but we were unable to diffuse it. so we had to call u back.

I gasped and looked at geet who held a very stern expression.

Okay. I vl go with Mac.

But geet, what r u going to do?

Matlab?

U noe hw to diffuse it?

Maan.. that's my job , remember?

She said quoting the word remember. This girl is seriously dangerous, but I m so proud of her.

She is my tigress. Not some weak businessman.

The way William said my made me gag!! Whats the problem with this man?

Of course she is MY dora, the beautiful explorer. And my one and only fianc, rt geet?

Then I placed a passionate kiss on her cheek leaving my dora and that gabbar in shock!!

Come on Dora babes.. Bomb is waiting for us.

U r also cumg?

Of course. Wherever u go, ur love will follow u..

I said tightening my hold on her waist making her gasp. Max led us outside and I gave a smirking victory at William. Something in me told that William is a threat.
When we went outside Geet threw my hand away making me pout.

What was that?

What was before that?

Hu-h?

Fianc and all?

I raised my eyebrows intimidating her.

That I did to avoid the outsider thing.

She said not meeting my eyes.

Oh really? Then u cud have said that I m ur cousin, bro etc..

She glared at me and crossed her arms across chest. My heart screamed Sexy!!

Come on Shri, tell him the truth.

Mac's words made me look at him. what truth!!

Mr. Williams likes Shri.. as in he really likes Shri..

What!!

Yeah. He is a perverted man. He continued his advances but shri never encouraged him. she kept their relation strictly professional. But when this project came he really became a disturbance. At times he will blackmail her about the job and insisted on going date. Till now she avoided it somehow.

Oh! No wonder my heart gave me wrong signals about this man. That's y they says never turn ur instincts down!! I turned to geet and saw her wearing bomb squad outfit. I dint realize when I reached her cabin!! She handed me another pair of outfit and told me to change.

And when we all came back we all looked like Neil Arm Strong's duplicates. This is going to be a long night and I dunno what I m going to do!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



how r u rems??? feeling ok na...

lils is busy with guests... she had told na...

miss u...



throat infection is there along with heavy cough.. hw is ur fever?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh therefore Geet was handling the project becoz of the terroist attack .
Maan J of Mr. William & he likes Geet 😲 but me happy Maan showed all his authority on Geet, his Dora the explora 😆
I Knw Geet gonna defuse it , Bravo gal

Loved it ❤️ Update sn .!
Edited by .bloom. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
william is a real pervert
he wanted to nd was trying to flirt with a girl of his daughter age
but love the way maan kissed geet in front of all nd said MY dora
that was really a lovely part
oo geet character in this is really hatke
geet's dad life is in danger
nd maan is also feeling protected towards him
loving their bond
waiting for more

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