If Only You Saw Me (10) - Page 102

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

nahi toh... lol kya yeh new way for bringing out the bakra in me huh?😆

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

i didnt spell it out... people wont get it until you state it. and you just did🥱😛😆

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

gosh sab kuch bulwana padding😕😆

Originally posted by: dqno1

Not just playing along ... Poore rang mein rang chuki hai .. just go back and read the update if u don't believe me ... Last 2 para... 😉

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Em not finding Madhu nywhere 😭

Originally posted by: dqno1

Woh aayi thi... Late aati hai 😊

Originally posted by: Onir

Can you believe I typed a reply earlier and it all went for a toss thanks to power-cuts!

Mayyo lovely update! It was worth the wait. So many beautiful moments those were a treat to read.❤️ 😳😳

I'm glad I could make it worth the wait. 😳

Somewhere deep down Geet has accepted her feelings for Maan. Her though flow, actions & some unsaid gestures do convey that deep down she is aware of her attraction & feelings for Maan but is binding herself in order to avoid the pain that may be caused to Mann as well as her later.

Geet is aware of her attraction towards Maan but only partially. And she's trying not to let the attraction take over completely.

I loved the way you showed the beautiful bond between Mother-daughter ' especially the line where her Mom tells her that she trusts her daughters & knows that they can never hurt their parents, and then Geet internally promising her of it.

Trust is what parents have on their children when they send them away for studies.

The whole date postponement was very well done by you. (Smart Twinnie') It went with the flow of the story. Maan's gesture of wanting to do it for her on his own as that would mean more special' this thought itself make me admire the person he is. I'm slowly falling for this persona. Lovely transition ' be it Geet forgetting about the date or Maan being disappointed, sulking in front of Ayush or Geet having a talk with Maan about it & then finally sorting it out.\

Thank you hai ji! 😆

Personally, I prefer people who do things themselves. It shows that they actually mean it when they do something for someone else.

Maan was seeing Green when she danced with Blue boy, but then what a beautiful compensation to it all with the first dance. Lovely description of the moment of surrender between these two through dancing. She will always have this dance with him etched in her mind and not that with Neil as when she was dancing with Maan there were no inhibitions & she trusted him. The whole J feeling experienced by Maan & Anya on seeing their partners in clutches of others was good one, & what added an icing to it all was Ayush's subtle but conscious revenge. 👍🏼

Can anyone ever forget their first real dance? 😳 And this dance was the biggest reason of my nervousness. Never wrote about a dance and I hope I never have to do it again. 😆

The whole group studies, the environment created with the time limits was reminding me of my studying days' what fun it used to be. We used to even keep giving each other long missed calls night time which is our preferred study time so as to see that none of us are sleeping but are busy studying. Sia-Pia made an appearance again. I like the way you make them all dreamy & starry eyed (Planning to give one of the roles to Noodles kya? 😆) The whole eye contact scene between M-G while viva was so beautiful'. Loved it very much. The appreciation Geet showed while reading & analysing Maan's writing style & content briefly was another indication of her unconscious acceptance.👏

How did the person who gave a missed call know that the other person was awake when the call wasn't to be answered? 😆

I doubt Noodles would want to take the role of one of these two. She'll prefer replacing Geet in the story. 😆

Dream again, with experienced moments' but this time with a twist. Maan dreamt of it all while taking a nap' showing how active his mind is. 😉

At this I thought which dream and then remembered the non-descriptive part where Maan is supposed to be dreaming. Gosh! You guys notice everything so minutely! 😆

Yes, he has an active mind while asleep and a closed mind while awake which makes him think people in front of him are figments of his imagination. 😆

I loved the scenes which you exclusively wrote of M-G' I don't know how to describe them as I love them all'- The trial room scene Maan without SBV, helping him get rid of the button stuck to the watch; the dance; viva answers'. Each & every scene & description was beautiful & teasing.

Onir, Maan without SBV is referred to as NPM. 😆 I'm glad you liked the scenes though. 😊

Raya has greenish brown eyes' I love that coloured eyes... rarely seen (I remembered one of our earlier discussion on eyes' do you remember it?)

Both my brothers have greenish-brown eyes and I love that colour! I sometimes wish I had eyes of that colour rather than the dark ones.

Umm... I do remember we had a discussion about eyes but I've forgotten the gist of it. Can you remind me what it was about?

The last scene ❤️ ' hayee, no words to describe it. Now I know why you write the end first & then write everything else.

Ha ha! No, it was only by chance that this scene came as a concluding scene. 😳

Let's see what's more in store' with both of them living in the same house for a week. I hope his last action & words uttered don't cause much awkwardness.

Awkwardness is bound to be there. What we have to see is how they cope with it, especially being caught by Raya. 😆

Thanks Twinnie for such a lovely & awesome update. Loved it & love you more. 🤗 🤗 😳

Thank you for everything twinnie! Love you more! 🤗

Originally posted by: heytal

Beautiful banner Maari

just loved it

❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Thank you so much Heytal! 😊

Geet apprehensive about her Mom's decision and her Mom statement relieves or may be adds on to her responsibility as her daughter to redeem her trust😳

Let's see which way it's true, whether the statement is a relief or a reminder of her responsibility...

Exams, portions, revisions and

The Hanging date😒

Maan upset and Geet 😕

Maan wants to plan something special keeping in mind Geet's taste and preferences

but again hard luck😔

Good things come to people who wait

hain na Maari😉

Exactly! All good things to those who wait. 😉

Loved the sangeet practices

You know actually more than the rituals or the performances its these moments and time which is the most memorable😊

the teasing, shararat and ofcourse settling scores in between is so much fun😳

Yes, this is the time which is even more enjoyable than the actual function. Glad you liked it. 😊

Jess😡 and Neil🤡

but Aayush took the cake😎

Ayush wouldn't let a chance go, you see. 😆

Ladies dance with dandiyaas and no garba

not fair Maari garba toh hona hi chahiye😭

Haww! I have very limited knowledge of dance and the type of dances performed in weddings so I just wrote what I have seen happening around me.

Group study went off well but what I loved was Anaya's sisters hitting on Maan 😆

Bechaara Maan ek anaar sau bimaar 😳

and Geet

Hard luck for the two sisters, Maan ka dil toh kahin aur hi hai. 😳

Maaneet dance ☺️

haaye dreamy

Maari jo vaada kiya woh nibhaana padega😳

Glad you liked the dance.

What vaada? 😕

Geet's wardrobe selected and packed but Geet not keen on the pink lahenga

Maan ko bola ek accha outfit gift kar de aakhir Geet ke jeth ki shaadi hain...haque banta hain uska😉

Idea accha hai. Dekhte hain wo kuch gift karta hai ya nahin. 😉

Finally trial room moment 😉😆

Geet's dream comes true😎

and Maan bechaara sharam se paani paani😳

Geet's dream didn't completely come true. According to her, reality was better than the dream. 😳

Geet comes to her future sasuraal

Raaya instantly gels up with Maan's mom

So I guess more of embarrassing moments coming up

Raaya's open statements and Geet😲

With Raya around, I'm hoping for more embarrassing moments for Geet as well as others. 😆

Maaneet moments was truly awesome

I was grinning like a fool trying to visualise the whole scene along with their expressions

Hope Geet ki dimaag ki batti ab jal jaaye😕

Raaya wrong timing😡

ek cheek kiss toh milni chahiye thi na🤔

And what if Geet ki dimaagh ki batti gul ho jaaye aise moments ke baad? 😳

Na na! Raya has perfect timings! No kiss wiss. Yet. 😆

Loved the update

shaadiwala ghar yet u fitted all the side tracks perfectly

Now looking forward for saali meeting her jija😉

Continue soon

😃

Thanks Heytal! Will try to update sooner. 🤗

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Awwwi date's pontponed till the wedding, Poor Maan 😳

I'm surprised you didn't put the delay on me. 😆
Jealousyyy yo ! 😆

Green is the colour! 😆
Jess deserved that , dumbo, Ayush 👍🏼

I know! 😉
Their joint Study reminded me of my colg days, was refreshing 😊

Those were the days, weren't they? 😊
Ah ! First ever couple dance... like Wow 😃 both seemed in oblivion, only aware of each other , beautiful it was 👏

Thank you! 😳
Dressing scene was toh 😳 She actually thought so ! 😳

She couldn't help thinking it. 😳
The imagination in reality scene was ufff , utterly romantic 😳 To tell yew the truth, I rechecked if em reading The Maryam 😳 😆 Maan toh chhaa gaya, aur Mayyam toh aisi waisi chhaai hai k bas 😆 Loveddd the chapter , Thanx buddy 😃

That's embarrassing! I doubt iss se zyaada kuch hoga aage. 😆

Thanks Naureen! 🤗