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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyharika

haye di whenever i read this story main kisi aur happy wala duniya mein chali jaati hoon šŸ˜†


haye maan and brownie ki bonding i am loving it so much šŸ˜‰ and the chase of geet and brownie its like a tom and jerry wala scene šŸ˜†


but y do i feel a negative vibes of maan leaving as a heart broken man??😭 aise hone mat dena please geet ki high head attitude se toh lagta hai aisa hoga 😭

maan speaking his feelings to brownie haye 😳




haila itni jaldi negative vibes.. dont think much darling

its just the start

the story is still to go further...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, cute beautiful amazing part

loved it
maan's love geet is increasing and how sweetly he confessed
loved the convo with browny so cute
loved it
continue soon



Thanks Rakhi...

i hop u shower the same love every time

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_smily

awesome update

oh geet again disturb there play nd brownie takes revenge frm her
luv the bonding b/w brownie nd maan
maan confess his love in front of brownie nd now he says that it's their secret
i think geet nd brownie will become frnds
continue soon



Thanx dear

yes brownie did take his revenge

and maan did confess his love for geet

and geet and brownie frds.. lets see

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ashmaaneet

awsum updateā­ļø

aww geet feeling sad n annie cheering her up😃
ooppsss geet make brownie angry n now revenge time šŸ˜†
brownie stole geet bunny n came in maan room n geet angry n giving galiyan šŸ˜†
maan shocked n thinking that geet was telling hin all thatšŸ˜²šŸ˜†
oohhh nooo brownie tore geet bunny
hayeee maan called geet mishty 😳
aila maan telling brownie abt his mishty n how much he loves her šŸ˜†šŸ˜³
hehe secret between maan n brownie 🤣
hmm maan telling brownie to say srry again to geet soo sweet😳
continue soon 😊




Thank u for such a long comment dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aditimaan

M in love with this ff.it was really a cutie ud.aww i luv Brownie.Maan nd Brownie's talk was really lovely.Maan confessed to Brownie.amazing.bt Brownie was bad to tore Geet's bunny.bt i love him.plz plz next update jaldi dena




Thank u for loving the ff...

i hope u love it more

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -padma-

Amazing update
Geet running behind brownie...to kill him as he destroyed her bunny...maan consling geet...he said mishty...how sweet
Maan confessed his feelings about his misthy with brownie...




thank u sweety for ur wonderful comment

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: amita5

Awesome update

loved the crazy and ferocious geet
maan who is calm shocked to see geet like this
running behind his dog brownie
maan makes geet understand and opens his heart to brownie
want to see more explosive geet
I have laughed so much reading this F/F
please continue and update soon



hehe.. me too loving to write this ff

its something diff from wat i have written earlier

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mani24

Hey di I'm falling in love wid this new FF of urs it sooo beautiful,warm & refreshing geet royi apne parents ke jaane par aur phir how cute ke annie was there to come & speak to her to make her feel better aur phir annie telling her ke she shuld be frnds wid brownie aur rabby aur geet ka reaction was amazing di aur phir annie telling her ke both of them are a part of khurana family aur especially maan bhai was cute aur phir geet wanting to know abt khurana family aur she started to know abt maan aur geet ka pehle sentense abt maan ke he's weird made annie angry di there's something jiski wajah se sab are sensitive towards maan di mujhe darr lag raha hai ke kahi hamare maan sick to nahi as in maybe heart disease kyunki di aapke banner main bhi heartbeats aati hai na me only thinking di aur phir jab geet ne kaha ke have heard he's a business tycoon lekin having dog & rabbit as pets is weird aur phir annie ka hasna aur geet ka uspar chillane ki wajah se rabby darr gaya aur brownie ko gussa aya (not gud for geet)šŸ˜‰ aur di annie ka answer was just perfect when she says to the outer world he's THE BUSINESS TYCOON lekin at home to his lovedones he's only maan aur yeh pets are a part of our family aur di sachi animals bhi sensitive hote jab unhe pata chle ka hamara pyaar share ho raha hai brownie actually starved for 2days when he saw ke maan was giving more attention to rabby but now both brownie aur rabby are BFF aur annie warning geet ke brownie apna revenge liye bagair chup nahi bathega aur di brownie ne bhi sherni ko lalkar diya uska fav bunny pakad liya aur geet k behadd gussa aa gaya aur dono chale maan ke room main ufff aur jab geet pyare words use kar rahi thi brownie ke liye to maan ko laga ke woh uske liye hai was hilarious šŸ˜† aur jab geet buhut gusse main baatain kar rahi thi maan se to brownie really got scared aur geet ka bunny to kharab hogaya hayee ye kya ho gaya aur geet to aag bagula ho gayi thi aur maan calmed her down by putting his hand on her cheeks aur she did calm down aur maan bedhiyaani main geet ko mishty bolgaya but later covered it too aur promised her ke he'll get her a new bunny aur tht brownie is really sorry for his deed aur di maan ne brownie ko apne dil ki baat batadi awww di tht was sooo perfect aur di brownie did not like it hoping ke geet aur brownie can become BFF tooo di but me liking precap more brownie ka sorry geet ko hope she accepts it aur di loving this story aur hamesha ki tarah I know di this FF will be a BLOCKBUSTER like our loves L&H aur DL,DHL aur Destiny ki tarah(ameen) waiting for the story to progress further di

LOVE & ADORE U eversecond of my LIFE meri pyari di ā¤ļø




mani i cant say anything but just tat i loev you for your love

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ashvinisharma

superb part...
i loved browne and rabby...
they are sooo cute...
and geet is acting like a junglee billi...
entire update is awesome...




hehe.. hope u love it more
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...RIDDHIMA...

Awesome cute part
Poor geet's bunny...
Bechara browny k haath mein shaheed ho Gaya
Very bad browny... But I loved his appologisation ;)
Omg maan confessed his love to browny!!!
Than taking promise!!! Lolzz he's a kid yaar!!




bechara brownie...

but very bad brownie na

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