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kirti

@DevilClan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Awesum and lovely os. It touched my heart.

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maanluver

@maanluver

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

a beautiful story

n the message u gave at the end was truly a line every person should understand

life is short so live it fully

but not with work

its relations those undying relations which make our life worthwhile

the pure and unconditional love we give to people which will always be remembered

n same is with maan his undying love for his mishty

his guidance his love was all that mattered in the end

he always taught to geet to live

n even after his death

he taught geet the most important lesson

how to move on

everyone goes through pain

but a person who can move on after it is really the person who can handle any hurdle that comes their way

beautiful story

luved it

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CrabbyEntity

@CrabbyEntity

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

that was so heart wrenching 😔 and with ur words u made sure that the underlying meaning z sent across and z understood well... but still liked it so much...

i had read this quote somewhere so thought of sharing it here

"you get a job so u can afford to hv a life, But thn u spend all ur time at work and end up with no time to live the life u r working for"

kuddos to u for writing another story and yes i learned the lesson well that we cannot put our arms around a memory so we should avail the time to its best!!!😳

Thank u so much for sharing this story!!!!😊

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: anupm04
Awesome

Thank you dear!

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: DevilClan
Awesum and lovely os. It touched my heart.

Glad it touched your heart.

Thank you!

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: maanluver
a beautiful story
n the message u gave at the end was truly a line every person should understand

life is short so live it fully

but not with work

its relations those undying relations which make our life worthwhile

the pure and unconditional love we give to people which will always be remembered

n same is with maan his undying love for his mishty

his guidance his love was all that mattered in the end

he always taught to geet to live

n even after his death

he taught geet the most important lesson

how to move on

everyone goes through pain

but a person who can move on after it is really the person who can handle any hurdle that comes their way

beautiful story

luved it

Thank you darling!

Actually that one message translated into this story, one line unfolded into the OS..."What if..."

Regret and guilt after departure of loved ones is the worst form of grief. And Geet went through that day in and day out until Maan came back to her rescue in the form of his letter and then their baby.

Not every person is that luck!

Glad you liked.

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: CrabbyEntity
that was so heart wrenching 😔 and with ur words u made sure that the underlying meaning z sent across and z understood well... but still liked it so much...
i had read this quote somewhere so thought of sharing it here
"you get a job so u can afford to hv a life, But thn u spend all ur time at work and end up with no time to live the life u r working for"

kuddos to u for writing another story and yes i learned the lesson well that we cannot put our arms around a memory so we should avail the time to its best!!!😳

Thank u so much for sharing this story!!!!😊

Hey!

Good to see you here. Thanks for the comment.

Your quote is really good, very relevent to the story!

Thank you for liking.

And you're welcome. Will share more stories as and when I write!

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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Yaar aise dangerous os per tu warning honi chahiye
My mood wnet off lolzzz
But the message is so beautiful
And the way you written it its remarkable
And touched my heart
I really prefer happy ending os
But its ok I love , message
And writing way
And next time give us buket also for crying hehhehehhehe

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: BULBUL.A
Yaar aise dangerous os per tu warning honi chahiye
My mood wnet off lolzzz
But the message is so beautiful
And the way you written it its remarkable
And touched my heart
I really prefer happy ending os
But its ok I love , message
And writing way
And next time give us buket also for crying hehhehehhehe

Hahahaa!

Next time a tragic one will surely come with Warning Sign! LOL.

Thank you for appreciating and glad you liked the message.

Sorry for putting your mood of dear. But the story was meant to make a sad chord strike!

And yeah, I'll make sure next time to provide buckets too; just in case!

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

ahhh, what a beautiful OS...i have always had a fascination for tragic OS...and the talent of a writer can be easily gauged through their sd OS writing skills...coz sad stuff not only has to emotionally connect with readers but have to make the readers feel sorrow and pain, anguish for the characters..making them go teary eyed...and i must say, i couldnt but fall in love with maan, his love and then that beautiful letter...and that great message , that goes so with this OS, something which is so relevant and makes us realise what are we missing , by going behind success, at the cost of our personal life...

u just made my day with this beautiful OS...a must read for all👏

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