MG SS- STILL WAITING part 13 pg115(25-6-13) - Page 33

still waiting for still waiting😆

Part 6

@Dazzlingdivz maine aapko reply dia tha, aapne shayad dekha nahi , its happy ending dear...mai aapko pura SS padhane wali hu n comment v lene wali hu 😛

@Kiran dii ur guess is ri8 😛 but u dont revel it let them keep guessing plzzz 😭

Present

"Maan it is not tym for gulit, it is tym to save her, save my sister" soo u all look every corner after searching for each n every corner maan only find things which make him guilty, but at last they found her report n all rushed to hospital.

Aniee arjun was speechless seeing her pale, lean n thin form'he has loosed more from their last meet, they used to meet her regularly, talk to her to make her light atlast, they know they can take her pain which a small girl is suffering losing every bit of happiness, parents, husband n sooo many things.

Sometym god gives soo much punishment to innocents without their deed, this gal is alone from the day her mother left her, her dad make her week to face the world, aloof from everythings but with high hopes n positivity, some dreams to become something, to help people, but her destiny was like kora kagazz(blank paper) everybody wrote it for their benefits her father keep her with him till he gets her married beocz she can't transfer her money n property as like her mumma know this soo will making her will she added the point she can transfer her money, her property after her marriage n that too with her n her husband will otherwise property will be on her name after her whole property will be transferred on her children name not also on her husband name ...it was quite long process of transfer n it never happened. Geet is still the owner of all handa property but as she didn't know it, after her 18^th birthday she got married only n after that as from her mother's will maan is care taker soo whenever handa's need big amount they have to come maan n maan sign the paper's or cheques for them as he is least interested in others property he have his own uncountable which he make with his works n efforts, he didn't joined family business of hotel where he started a construction firm n arjun was his school frnd, like maan a hardworking man who in small age started working as his parents died in a accident n he have no one so he is owing punj construction n interiors, which is of his father n now own by him n aniee.

Maan n arjun were bestest buddies so arjun used to visit often to khurana mansion n at that tym he fell for aniee n aniee too, they talked wid aniee parents n they accepted it as he is also rich n all who can take care of the only daughter of khurana's n before one month of maaneet marriage they shifted to KM as aniee was expecting their 1^st child n no one was there to take care of her n after that circumstances never make them to return punj house where geet was living.

( ok this was spcly. for those reader who want that maan should make geet's parents realise what mistake they have done''..soo I added n more will come latter, hope u all will be happy)

They all went to meet doc. n doc. checked her reports where aniee was restless to meet her to see her but she wanted to know also which stage of cancer she is suffering

"She is in 1^st stage I think due to some infection she got this disease n if she was cared that tym she must be cured at that tym only" specialist said

"Doc. just say can u cure her, will be alri8" arjun asked worriedly

"It's all dependent on her will as the intensity of medicines n therapy are soo painful if she will go through all this we can, if she can't then I cant do anything n more than that it all depend her on status ri8 now she is unconscious from 5 hrs if she won't gain it under 12hrs we think she will be in coma"

"No doc. do something plzz, she have to fi8 for them plzzz doc." maan said almost in broken voice

"We are trying out best mr.khurana to make ur wife out of coma, its all depended on her will, her skills, n her jine ki iksha(wish to live) as we have observe her, she don't want to respond on any medication n more over we want her all medical files till now " doc. said

All nodded n left

Aniee runned toward geet ward where she was unconscious sleeping on bed n lots of wire was attached to her n saline n blood too as she have blood cancer soo she is in need of blood

(1 more thing guys I have never heard about the treatment n m not gonne to explain too but whatever m writing if it hurts anyone them really big wala sorry as I really fear from this all soo better to be untouched as this is about her waiting for love n all, hope u all will understand)

"See na arjun, what she have done with herself, I told u na she is hiding something from us, see ' how can u hide it geet u always said na m ur elder sister then y geet, I don't understand y god is soo cruel wid her, can't he see her leaving a simple life, her life is full of miseries, that was not enough that he gave her disease too" aniee was breaking every minute to see geet like this she just run toward outside only to see maan standing their n now she can't control her anger her pain more, she is same like maan in anger attitude but soft hearted.

"U r happy na bhai, u must be the happiest person in the world know to see her like this, u did everything to break her inside, snatched her happiness, now see god is too wid u he is snatching her breath n life" she started laughing n then again said " what are u doning her bhai go n distribute sweets nah not ur style u must throw a party at last she is really dying ur wish , her parents wish n ur soo called girl wish is gng to come true u all must party celebrate"

Maan roared "aniee u r crossing ur limit"

"Wow maan wow, but I didn't understand from where u got soft corner for her, doc. Said u bring her here, y u brought her must have left her somewhere to die, that was only ur wish na, which is fulfilling n dare u shout at my wife, for u husband wife relation must be only physical but I respect, care n love my wife n can't hear a word againt her" arjun said angrily

Maan was speechless, n left from there

Maan st- yes they were ri8 I was the one who wished it only 2 years back that she should die, ooh god I never realised how much mistake n pain I have gave her, arjun was ri8 for me mine n geet relation was only my need of her body which was always there for me waiting for me with no expectation in eyes. Longing for my one lovely look, longing for my mere lovable words n what I gave her not a single thing, always hurted her till eternity, what I have done god plzzz give me chance to rectify, to repent my mistake I want to give her life, her breath, her happiness n my love too plzz god one chance for her for them plzzz god plzzz" n broke in tears n sat at the edge of terse n shoting " geettt plzzz come back give me one tym plzzz geet"

Maan was not getting anything how to make her conscious, he was sitting at the edge n drooling the pics which he got form her dairy n again start reading it

Past

5^th april,10

Hello dairy,

Today m feeling too low, u know today is the my exam, I have read n learnt everything but I can't go to give exam, I want to go arjun bhai had promised me take on centre but m not feeling gud from 2-3 days soo they are not taking me...is this the only tym when baba ji choose to make me ill(cutely pouted while looking up), chadooo.

U know now its 3 months to my marriage, now Mr. dairy don't pout I know now days I came less but what to doo I don't feel to write n I was studying too na.u know its 3 months but papa didn't called single time nor anyone...I m sooo alone dairy no one likes me y? what mistake I have done that maan ji hate me soo much, what mistake I have done that his family never like to share any moment wid me, I feel soo bad but can't share u know na, u know this is a big bungalow but I haven't seen a single place expect this room n gym of maan ji. (sadly pouted)

U know tomm. I got to know a gud new I m soo happy, u wanted to know hmm ok ok don't make faces mr. dairy I m telling u

2 days before aniee dii told me m gonna to become mami, lolz I m soo much happy, u know na I love kids. but never got chance to play wid kids, when arav n aayush born that tym too chooti maa never let me to see them, touch them or play wid them. After their birth only papa started hating me today I know the reason becoz I m a girl n chooti maa gave birth to boys soo he loved them more n started hating me. Soo I got scared n was fearing that after the birth of her baby will she allow me to touch them or play wid them soo I asked her in scared tone "dii may I ask u something" she bluntly said "yeh geet say what u want to ask?"

"Dii will u allow me to touch n play wid ur baby"

Aniee can see her scared face n more over a some hope to get positive answer

"Do u like kids?"

"Yes dii I love kids"

"Then y u think like I won't allow u"

"Woh dii noboday allow me to go near kids na, when my siblings born that tym chooti maa never let to mee them or touch them, n here also m not allowed to talk na soo I asked sorry if I hurt u, I always wanted to play wid kids but nobody allows me na, I wanted to talk wid aadil too he is soo cute but as u said I never tried dii." geet told her the points

"Geet geet u speak a lot"

"Sorry dii I won't speak '.." cuted by aniee

"Geet 1^st listen full ok,(she nodded) I know geet I have said u to be in room but it doesn't mean that I won't allow u to touch my kids n by the way u share now too relations wid baby" aniie continued when she saw geet's confused face "hmm u make my hubby ur brother soo u became bua n mami both na so geet stop thinking about all this n take rest have u seen ur face it has become yellow n pale"

"Hmm ok dii n u too take care n cute baby that is inside u"😃

Full day of mine was as usual at evening I was not feeling well, I was restless but all were busy as always in evening in their gossiping at garden n enjoying tea n snaks, my head was too heavy I wanted to call anyone but whom too call aniee dii n arjun bhai was too not there. I thought to come out of room but aniee dii words rang in my head of not to step out, feeling thirty too at last after fighting wid my thoughts I stepped out only to see aniee dii n arjun bhai gng out. I voiced them to stop, both came to me by seeing my worse state, he call the servent to bring water shouted on him for not keeping water in my room but when I said to to be calm he said him to go away, they gave me medicine n was with me but nothing seems to work today, they called their family doc. but she was not available with last optionaniee arjun thought to take her hospital as they both were gng for aniee check up.

Present

"Arjun I think we should bring them here, it is possible that she can respond for them, plzzz bring them here, now tym has come arjun to end her miseries of her life, now tym has come arjun to return her belongings, things which all has snatched to her tym to revel the truths n everythings, it's a long 3 years we had taken from her life n left her too the death bed, sabki galti sabki iksha ki bht saman kar lia issne, bht kuch sehh lia ab or nahi ab kuch nahi hone dugi isse cahe koi kuch v kar le(for everyone mistake, for their wish she had heard n done soo many things, lost soo many thing now not more I will not allow anyone to do anything wid her)" said aniee while eyeing toward maan who was standing near door

"U r ri8 aniee, now tym has come to return her life,her breath to her, shayad my sins wil reduce some"

"That won't n m gng to bring them, take care of her aniee" arjun said at last while leaving

Precap- entry of two beautiful n naughty creatures

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nice update

geets past n present both are painful..

awesome update

emotional and painful update

Felt very sad reading Geet's past... Good one... Waiting for the next update... But I need a big update because this is the 1st time I'm commenting... 😛