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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lenageorge



sorry geet nly with maan else no one same to maan too.no other outsiders b/w maneet.👎🏼



m too agree wid lena that nobody with geet ya toh wid maan ya ohir geet ki dedth hogi bas
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Posted: 12 years ago
it can't be possible what u all are wanting geet to do indifferent behavior wid maan... she is simple inoccent gal who love him more than herself n more over fb wale next part jante h whats gonna to come next as i always posts pics on my group n rahi baat geet ki self depended hone ki she cant ...ap log yeh ku bhool rahe ho she is suffering from cancer guys soo be paitent n m not gonna to stress it jitna part maine socha h utna hi dugi no more sorry becoz june is the last month of my writing probably

soo join my group to know kya kya aane wala hai aage it will be easy for me n u all too to know the future of this SS noo men gonnna to come in geet's life n jaha tak baat h maan ki regret ki that will happen
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Posted: 12 years ago



yaar to update de do na...

if u have already next part then why u r asking...

this is right Geet is so naive and so much in her miseries that expecting her to be mean with Maan is out of question...and more over she doesn't have any self-confidence but what and how she wrote her diary it shows that she still expects some love from her life...

just update...


Edited by 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
write as per your wish because this ff is your baby and you must have thought somethink.Stick to your belief and write
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




yaar to update de do na...

if u have already next part then why u r asking...

this is right Geet is so naive and so much in her miseries that expecting her to be mean with Maan is out of question...and more over she doesn't have any self-confidence but what and how she wrote her diary it shows that she still expects some love from her life...

just update...



exam h dii doo din bad avi half hi likha h bas 1400 cahie toh bolo mai update kar deti hu
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Posted: 12 years ago


Part 5

@Hanishadevi yes dear there is happy updates too just wait

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 dii shayad hehehe rulane ka hi irada h till last with lil. Smile on face

Y U HATE ME...
Y U DON'T WANT TO SEE MY FACE...
WHAT MISTAKE I HAVE DONE...
Y U HURT ME...
IF I DOESN'T MATTER
THEN
Y U MARRIED ME...
Y U SHOWED DREAMS TO THIS EMPTY LIFE...
WHEN IT IS BREAKING
EVERY DAY, EVERY MINUTE
M STILL WAITING FOR LOVE
M STILL WAITING FOR SOMEONE
M STILL WAITING N IT SEEMS
IT WON'T OVER

present

Maan is now understanding her selfless love which he broke every day, every sec from his own hand, from his own heart bleeding words. But is what he is real the devil, the cruel maan whom all know no, he is not only his heart know this what make him like this infront of geet only he know his heart know, how much he bear the pain to make her cry, how much punishment he gave to himself after his that day act, he was druken but not that he can see difference in sam n geet but he said those words only to make her heart bleed, he was always fear that her innocent heart will start loving him, that he never wanted that's y he always hurt her, but his fear over come one day when he heard geet talking wid her mumma pic n saying " I have no idea mumma m ri8 or wrong, but this heart again start trusting on the people who hurt it n bleed it, this heart again start loving one person, after knowing this also he won't reciprocate it, he won't see me lovingly, he won't talk wid me, but mumma this heart in not in my control the day I saw his pics in room I feel in love wid him, I know again this heart is expecting but don't worry mumma this tym its already broken, soo pain will be less" that day she was soo happy, 1st tym after 3 months of marriage she was smiling, giggling, dancing, but there was some tint of sadness, fear also in her face but as always she consoled herself wid her words n was enjoying but was longing for me, my love which I can see in her eye, sitting near my pics talking wid mine pics sharing her every bit of emotion, she was looking more beautiful.

Maan thought break wid his phone ringing

"Where are u mr.khurana, specialist has arrived n they need ur wife's case history plzz be fast" told the doc

"M coming in doc. M coming, just take care of her" he woke up from the bench wid determined face, he know what exactly know he need to do n know where she was from last 1 n half year.

He started driving his car as fast he can n in within some minutes he was in his MANSION n run to the ANIEE'S room

"Aniee, I need to ask u something"

"Hmm say bhai what u wana to ask about ur..." Cuted by him

"Geet"

Aniee was shocked to extent, her bhai is asking about the girl whom he didn't glance also, never care for her n now asking about her

"Y, u r asking about her, n y from me?"

"I know aniee, u know where she is from 1 n half year" at that tym arjun came with his sleeping son in his arm.

v

(2nd son of aniie arjun... dhrv of 6 months)

"What happen aniee, y r u shouting soo much"

"U should ask this from ur best frnd, arjun" arjun was looking at maan wid narrowing his eye brow

"Aniee, I don't have tym to waste, just say where is she n its urget"

"I don't know" aniee replied his slow but dangerous voice

Maan came near her n sat on his kness, folded his hand n asked " plz aniee, say where is she, where she used to live, plzzz aniee plzz"

"Y u want to know bhai, after 1 n half year, u was the one only who never wanted to see her face, u was the only who snatched her every happiness, u was the only who snatched her life from her, now she is already living a life of hell bhai don't make her life more hell wid ur presence, ur harsh words, now she can't take it, as she promised she never came back bhai, never asked her rights from u, never did asked a question u used a unmaturred girl, for ur ur needs, broke her from inside, y u did this much bhai, y u make her shattered, that she is living but forget to smile, forget to sleep, forget to eat, she is living but death was better for her, y bhai y, I won't say u where she is, never now I can't see her in more pain bhai, sometym I regret that m ur sister, n I don't want to live at ur big mansion but the promise I gave her is binding me to be here for her life, for her breath only m here" aniee broke in tears after pouring her heart out, her frustration which she is carrying.

"Go maan, plzz go from here, don't do more damage gooo" arjun said while taking aniee in his arms n consoling her.

"I know arjun I did soo much damage, I want to repair it plzzz help me, for them plzzz help me" maan was engulf in his guilt how much pain he gave too a small girl. He was feeling defeted but he have to know any how

"Go maan go, we don't want to help u goo" arjun said in rude voice

"She is in hospital, aniee, she need us, she need them, she is suffering from blood cancer, she in unconscious, sinking, I need her medical history, I want to save her, I want to repair the damage I did, I want to give her happiness, plzz help me aniee n arjun for her help me, I know u two only know where she was, now don't deny it becoz I have seen some recent pic of them wid her, help me aniee from her life, for her breath that u promised to take care plzzz" at last maan broke in tears, n said them all, but the two person was staring him without blinking their eye lashes too, n was shocked to beyond, yes they know where she was but y didn't she said her illness to them y she hided. It took almost half an hour for them to register maan's words what he said.

At last aniee spoke "where she is bhai, plzz take me to her plzz bhai, n she can't leave me, she have to live for them, I know she love them, y god is giving her more punishment plzz take me too her"

"1st calm down aniee, u heard what maan said they need her medical history, so we need to know 1st where she kept it, come maan m taking u where she is leaving, come fast" after thinking a lot arjun said

arjun is a very calm man soo he 1st think of sitauation they only emotions

"I will too come" aniee mummered

But

"Plzz arjun she needs me plzzz" okkk come but

"Don't worry", she called maid n said them to take care of kids

"Bhai we are helping u but for only her, but remb. One thing if u say anything bad or harsh to her, then I will forget that m ur sister'.becoz more than u, she matters for me"

"I know aniee, my sins are soo much, that u can't believe me nor on my words, but this tym I m not gng to do any damage" he was putting staright face but inside he was breaking

"Hope soo bhai, now come fast"

The trio went to arjun home, where she live after coming out of khurana mansion it was arjun who was adamant to keep her in his home, as he didn't live there but he had huge mansion wid lots of servant who take care of her. They all reached in 15mins n went in her room, n maan was shocked to see the room, it was full of his pics n some marriage pics, n rest of her life, her breath

"Don't watch like this bhai, u leave her, but that mad gal, never leave u n ur thought, she still love u like mad, still waiting for u bhai, she is still waiting for love bhai, still waiting to get life, her breath back" maan was just hunged his head down in gulit n shame

Maan it is not tym for gulit, it is tym to save her, save my sister soo u all look every corner after searching for each n every corner maan only find things which make him guilty, but at last they found her report n all rushed to hospital...


precap- meeting wid doc...n some gud news 😃


i knowthis part is not soo gud, but will try to keep the same emotion in next...just need ur patiance

NOTE- it can't be possible what u all are wanting geet to do indifferent behavior wid maan... she is simple inoccent gal who love him more than herself n more over fb wale next part jante h whats gonna to come next as i always posts pics on my group n rahi baat geet ki self depended hone ki she cant ...ap log yeh ku bhool rahe ho she is suffering from cancer guys soo be paitent n m not gonna to stress it jitna part maine socha h utna hi dugi no more sorry becoz june is the last month of my writing probably


soo join my group to know kya kya aane wala hai aage it will be easy for me n u all too to know the future of this SS noo men gonnna to come in geet's life n jaha tak baat h maan ki regret ki that will happen


waiting for responce n it will be happy ending pakka
n thankls a lot foe soo much of love n comments ...i loved each comment thankuuu soo much some parts touched 100 likes too ...m waiting when sare parts 100 likes pahuch jae thanksss a lot 🤗
Edited by geetsmile - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice dear😊

maan repenting 👏

arjun n aniee knows about geet😲

geet is in arjun home😲
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Posted: 12 years ago


wonderful update...

thanx u updated...when u r in such a tight schedule...I didn't knew that u have exams...u were asking about our opinion so I request u to update...now please concentrate on ur exams...we will wait for update... don't worry...

Maan never wanted to humiliate her...but then why he did that...what was Geet's fault that first he married her and then gave her so much pain...

and this line confusing me-- I have seen some recent pic of them wid her, she have to live for them, I know she love them,whom this line reffering to as THEM...

Arjun and Annie took care of Geet when her own parents and husband throw her out of their life...

thanx for pm...





Edited by 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6



wonderful update...

thanx u updated...when u r in such a tight schedule...I didn't knew that u have exams...u were asking about our opinion so I request u to update...now please concentrate on ur exams...we will wait for update... don't worry...

Maan never wanted to humiliate her...but then why he did that...what was Geet's fault that first he married her and then gave her so much pain...

and this line confusing me-- I have seen some recent pic of them wid her, she have to live for them, I know she love them,whom this line reffering to as THEM...

Arjun and Annie took care of Geet when her own parents and husband throw her out of their life...

thanx for pm...







its ok dii i know u all dont know i have having exam...n i had half update soo updated n next will be on 5th as from 5th it will be frequent

n about THEM its small beautiful twist diii...wait till next part u gonna to know 😃 n i know u all will loved it as the hint of twist is in 1st paart only 😛 but wait till 5
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Posted: 12 years ago
How on earth m gona wait for next. .
Cuming to update ,
frm part 1st i hv been cryng n stil evry update is makng me to keep the tap of my eyes opn, wil i evr get to smile *sigh*,
update waz awsum lvd anie's dialogs. . .it'l b intrstng to go thrgh the reason that y maan did sumthng wch were nt in hs etiquts. .atlast he realizd the depth of geets blind lv fr hm. .
Plz update soon. .
Luv sheen

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