MG SS- STILL WAITING part 13 pg115(25-6-13) - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome ss dear...
Loved it...
I really cried while reading this...
Can understand that choti maa was not her real mom so she hated her but how could a father be soo cruel...
I just hate mr handa...
N maan i just wanna punch him...
He is such a gadha,ullu,bewakuf,stupid,idiot,moron...
How could he be soo heartless...
Grrr hating him...
Thank god annie n arjun r there for geet...
Hope she gets well soon...
Waiting for next...
Update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love ur ff... Looking forward to read it
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was a hell of painful story! Just dont get what n how Geet's destiny was written! This was bits...i dont know what n how it all had happend that Maan had changed! I wish he rots in hell with that Sam n Geet's parents...shit of disgusting people they are!
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Posted: 12 years ago
m really sorry but no update till 2nd june read the note

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome so painful he was an animal. Innocent geetu ki life barbad kar di.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: itzzdmg

Awesome so painful he was an animal. Innocent geetu ki life barbad kar di.



hey u came to india 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 4


Past

Its 10am when aniee entered in her room as always...she bring her breakfast n chat wid her sometym...But seeing her state..she was shocked,...she was almost in blood n his cold hearted brother..while leaving the room...even didn't bother to cover her, she fastly covered under spread'shook her, but no response.

Aniee was panicked seeing her state n nothing was coming in her mind, what to do n how, but she have to work fast, she closed her eye for few seconds n opened n rush toward her wardrobe to get some dress before calling anyone for help, but all were salwar suits n sarees as she only wear them...no night dress or nighties n making her wear salwar was not gud as she had soo many cuts in her hands. She closed the door n locked it n ran toward her room, arjun was sipping his coffee n working on laptop, he saw her panting n running. "What happened sweetheart, y r u running n panting soo much?" he asked...while she took her nighty n ran toward geet's room while saying "call the doc. immediately arjun plzzz".

Arjun sensed something n before asking more question he dialled his family doc. Not maan's n rushed toward the geet's room but it was locked from inside, he knocked 2-3 tymes n heard the voice of aniee from inside " coming in 5 mins arjun wait plzz" while she carefully made her wear the dress n opened the door n arjun asked in panickly "what happened aniee, y u called" his voice was stuck in his throat only to see life less geet after a min he asked aniee "kya hua h isse aniee, kya kia h aapke bhai ne isske sath" (what happened to her aniee, what ur bhai did with her) aniee told him everything what she said n then asked did he called doc. He was soo shocked wid his best frnd behaviour who is now changed into beast who is using a girl that too that harshly that she can die too but he is not at all bothering at all...arjun tried to call maan but he was not picking it.


After 15 min doc. Came n checked geet, slowly removed all the glass bangle pieces from her wrist...n in deep slumber to she was flinching in pain n till now her body is buring wid temp. doc was too shocked to see the state but didn't asked any question now...she choosed 1st to give her medication which is needed more than any questions, cleaned her each n every wound, bandaged it gave her injections n prescribed some medicine. After checking her she came out where arjun was pacing restlessly, when saw door opening n doc, coming outside with aniee he rushed to them "doc. Aunty Is she ok na, nothing will happen to her na" calm down arjun, I won't say she is perfectly fine, u can see her wounds n she is buring wid temp. but arjun n aniee whatever it is all she wil be ok, but the seeing her condition I have a doubt" "say na doc. Aunty plzzz is any danger to her" aniee asked restlessly.



"No dear, but she can be in the state of shock, she is looking soo pale, week, n by looking at her I can say she is not more than 18, n in this age having shock is not good dear, when she will be conscious try to distract her mind from all these things, n more u know wht to do" after saying this doc. Left but while leaving she said "if possible make ur bro away from her for sometym, she may get panic after seeing him or facing him n more over no physical till one month as she had got soo many internal wounds too, that will take tym to heal". Aniee broke in tear, " what u have did bhai with a small girl, why are u doing this to her, y bhai y" arjun consoled her " aniee u can't break like this, we have to take care of geet, u know na aniee nobody will bother about her, even ur bhai too n as doc. Aunty said we will take her somewhere for 4-5 days for a change in place n we have to make her normal aniee, u have to be strong for her plzzz" aniee nodded n both aniee n arjun went inside.


Present

Maan broke in tears after reading that part of dairy in which her pain, her lonliness, his dead were carved n was mostly pages are shocked in tears n that day with some blood too, the pain which he gave to her was unbearable but she was an angel who did her every duty, some tym our customs, traditions bind people soo much, to backdraw their duties same happened with geet the traditopns n values she got from her mother n nani maa bound her with maan, after that day aniee n arjun hard work make her normal but from inside she was breaking every day, every sec. but she can't share her pain wid anyone, her papa didn't bother about him, her husband is using her as a doll, when he need her he came near her n when her use is over he throw her in a corner, shout at her, sometym slap her, his family prisoned her in a room, she is not allowed to go anywhere not even allowed to step down, now her tears are dried up, now she didn't cry , now she didn't ask question in 1 month of marriage, didn't talk too anyone only answer the questions asked by aniee, arjun. In these 1 month maan never talk to her, not even looked at her, she was alone she need some love, for a frnd, she tried to talk her frnd, from aniee mobile but she didn't responded she used to say she is her best frnd but when her frnd need her she didn't talk wid her nor tried to know how she is. Now she didn't call her too.



Geet always stare at the family from her window or corridor, she feel empty, but one thing that happened with her is that she started loving her husband who is worth for her love, but the care n respect she saw in his eyes for his family, his siblings made her fall in love with him or u can say, she thought it's her duty o love her husband to hear his harsh words n to submit herself in fronth of him whenever he need, now days she has stop expecting, asking silently following his duty...only one person who make her lips to smile is AADIL n his mischievous...She never talked wid him nor he , as he was not allowed to come in the privet wing of maan..but watching him make her smile, whenever she feels lonely she talk wid her maa n nani maa n baba ji.

Everybody stole everything from her.

Her papa stole her childhood

Her chooti maa stole her teenage

Her husband is stealing her

Past

On 14th when she got conscious, she showed no emotion after soo much trying aniee made her cry...but her heart were bleeding more with her husband's words that he is sharing physical relation wid her that to assuming someone else. She was restless she wanted to share her pain...the only one way was to write dairy.


(1261 WORDS)


THANKU SOO MUCH FRNDS

for soo much love i never thought i will get more than 50 likes but i got 90 likes spl. thanks to all who likes n commented

hope the same way u will shower ur love⭐️


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Edited by geetsmile - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Koi itna heartless kaise ho sakta he...
Nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
update anie arjun taking care of geet and geet falling in love with maan for the respect he had for family and maan understanding geet loneliness and pain



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Posted: 12 years ago
hw could u maan...chii chii...hate u...

awesome but painful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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