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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Sona ki power - cut time-bound hai...😊
After 2hrs aa jati hai..😛
But Mona ko kya hua...???? 😕
I think sone gai...



ya ... i too think the same... aaj update nahi milna waala... kal usse double update maangenge😳😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



ya ... i too think the same... aaj update nahi milna waala... kal usse double update maangenge😳😉
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To ab kya karen...???😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


To ab kya karen...???😕



kya karenge... sab writer log tho off line hai... muski bhi nahi aayi... ham hi hai pagal wait karing karing and karing...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



kya karenge... sab writer log tho off line hai... muski bhi nahi aayi... ham hi hai pagal wait karing karing and karing...


Hmmm... na to mona aai ..aur na hi Muski...😔

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Hmmm... na to mona aai ..aur na hi Muski...😔



tum kaha ho??
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Posted: 12 years ago




Feeling sleepy...GN...
Kal milte hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Feeling sleepy...GN...
Kal milte hai...
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ya me too leaving...

gud nite..



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



kyu achi tho dikh raahi hai

Hum Sab is pic main kitnay achay lag rahay hain😳😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part 😳
waiting for d new update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago



This FF I am updating daily so please don't wait for my PM because its very hard me to send daily pm for this. please Bookmark or check yourself for update. It's my sincere request to all



Heyy friends.. I am feeling very emotional to say that this story has come to its end and in very few parts will be ended, soon 😊



Part 84

"Maan ye!!'

She was so amazed looking at the people filled hall with delight and excitement on their faces. It was total unexpected and totally new thing to see the whole crowd of lavish people at one place and everyone's eyes on her only.

Maan smiled looking her in response and started to lead her downstairs by holding her hand. Like a pair of prince and princess they reached on place when dadi along with Rano came and hugged her.

"Bahut pyaari lag rahi hai Geet'

Rano happiness had no bound. Smile was not ready to leave her face and blessings were coming out from heart with liberty. Everyone had different feelings to see the new girl beside Maan Singh Khurana and no one could escape from thinking one thing and that was praising the beauty of this girl. Whispering and murmuring filled atmosphere started to make Geet nervous and she slipped closer to him stealing the eyes from all.

Geet was still not sure what's happening here. But as special Maan had made her to feel, she could sense it was something big "but what!!!'

Her trail of thoughts broke when she felt a soft pat on her shoulder and she looked him who was staring her since long. Maan raised eyebrows in silence questioning " is she okay!"

She nodded and looked around with nervousness on which Maan smiled and his slight stroke of head made her clear that everything is happening for them only. And then all lights went off and a spot light showered them with its gleam.

Happy Birthday Geet'

Maan sound fades in her ears and she looked him shocked.

"Was today my birthday?? I even didn't remember it how did he?'

"Happy birthday Beta'

Cheerful voices of SD and Rano made her depart from the eye lock with Maan and then the whole surround filled with blessings and wishes only for her. But still Geet mind was totally occupied with his thoughts that was

'He did everything just for my birthday?'

His making her get ready, their small hide and seek play, everything started to make her feel more special and exhibited before him.

A beautiful big grandly decorated cake was brought and she was told to cut it. Her hands trembled. She had never faced this crowd before but Maan held her hand standing her beside. They cut the cake and Geet made him eat the first bite. In this little chance she revealed her elated heart through eyes to say him thanks. Maan took half of it and made her eat rest with the acceptance of her gratitude.

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"Maan when did you planned everything?'

After finishing that small celebration when they found opportunity to grab their private time little away from all, Geet could not help but to ask the curiosity of her mind.

Her face was so worthy to be seen and enjoyable for Maan. He came closer to her and pulled closer holding her waist. She was still waiting for his answer eagerly.

"Maan boliye na!!'

"u-hm!!' He bent to her closing distance.

She whacked him getting irritated. "Maan tell me na when did you plan everything? And how did you come to know it's my birthday today???

Tum kitna bolti ho Geet.. I think I should give a stop to your mouth''

He smirked wickedly.

Her eyes broaden in shy. Though they were alone there yet not so far from everyone and the thought made her nervous.

"Maan I think we should go inside' she tried to escape but he clutched her waist tighter, stopped her to move further.

"Maan please'

He shook head smirking.

She pleaded poorly, pouted her lips.

"Not before getting my return gift Geet.'

"Ahemm!!!'

Suddenly they heard cough of SD and saw angry Rano stood their behind. Both startled all of sudden and straighten themselves feeling so shy-shy..

"What's happening here hmm! '

N-Nothing D-Dadi..'

"Aap chup rahiye Maan. Geet Beta! Everyone is here only to see you Beta , it's your party and you are here!!! Not so good Beta..'

Geet looked floor. "Sorry Dadima!!' she was feeling guilt.

"Ase nahi.. We have decided punishment for you both!!!!' SD said becoming serious. Both Maan and Geet looked each other confused and little scared.

"Geet chal!!' Rano came angrily and started to drag Geet with her. Maan got scared. The thought that might Rano Mom have not liked the closeness between them, started to make home in his little heart. His Maan Singh Khurana heart became a child and it started getting horrified in fear.

"Rano Maa please listens to me once!!'

He tried to speak out but she was not listening. SD followed her giving a disappointed look to Maan, which increased his insecurities. He nervously followed them. It was not so full lightened in hall and when it got all lights on, Maan n Geet found them-selves on stage, alone!! They looked for both elder ladies and found them smiling naughtily and then he got a wink from Dadi.

"Nautanki!!!' He muttered when Geet looked him confused. He smiled shook head.

Before they could come down Dadi announced their engagement. Both got surprised and shocked. Why so suddenly!! But both were happy inward. They exchanged rings and elders showered with their blessings..

Precap: Maaneet Wedding & last part



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