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This FF I am updating daily so please don't wait for my PM because its very hard me to send daily pm for this. please Bookmark or check yourself for update. It's my sincere request to all



Heyy friends.. I am feeling very emotional to say that this story has come to its end and in very few parts will be ended, soon 😊



Part 83

"Maan thank you' she said while enjoying in his embrace.

"You don't need to be thankful Geet'

"Not for this' She raised her look to his face.

"Then?'

"Maan you brought Maa and Daarji here. I cannot tell how happy I'm'

"Hmm!!' He snuggled her closer. "Geet after what happened we had to inform her about Brij and at that moment, I did not want to leave her alone. I know how it feels when.. .' he stopped

She sensed meaning of his unsaid words. She knew he was going drown in Dev thought and no way, she could have seen him like this, worried and disturbed. She wanted to cheer him up like always he does.

For thinking while, she took her Dupatta and started to tie his eyes.

"Geet.. ye..What you doing!!!'

"Shh.. let me do what am doing!!'

"Maan how many fingers there are??' She showed her fingers to him.

"Geet how can you forget so soon haan!! ''

"kya" she asked confused

"yahi ki you have just tied my eyes how can I see!!!'

She made face. "Can't he say directly he can't see anything!! '' murmured.

"What did you say?'

"Umm.. Nothing!!'

"Geet!! Will you tell me what you are going to do!!!'' He raised hand to untie the knot when she stopped his hand and made it to way toward hers. She slowly made his hand rest on her shoulder and guided his hand to slip down her sleeves.

"Geet its…'' Maan got shocked.

"You really don't need to do this Geet I was just teasing you!!' He tried to pull back his hand but she gripped it tight.

"But I want it to be happening Maan!'

She made his hand mingled with hers, runs it around to untie the clothes which she was wearing.

Maan was numb. He had no word to tell his feelings. Her hands were leading his hand, guiding it. Though he had no independency on his own move but her guidance was enough to rise up his heartbeats to the high. She was the pilot of this tour of this journey over her body and Maan was enjoying it obediently.

She made his hands runs up to down on her unclothed arms. She was making him reckon in passion which she knew, would not any longer be handled by them but yet, she was wishing to give him every bit of happiness which he would have been desired for.

It was not going well with Maan. His closed eyes were imagining much which was creating havoc within his heart and body but he was holding it back with lots of pressure. The softness of her body was new for him to feel. It was best thing which he had touched ever and on top of everything, her rapid gasps, her warm breathes and sound of her bangles and ankles were giving the tough competition ot his patience.

She made him wear her dress without see her but his touch was completing the task of his eyes. She was blushing hard yet had sincerely wish to fulfill his dream. Her submission was pure and Maan heart was sensing it through inside his closed eyes. The time went so slow and finally she was all ready, dressed up in his choice of dress wrapped with the touch of him on her entire body.

She was not sure how would she be able to face his burning gaze when this thin cover of his eyes would be gone. Every bit of her had turned into red and she was having uneasiness, standing over before his.

Before he could remove the blind of eyes she hides behind curtain holding her violent heart with shaking hands. She could not believe that she had taken this step herself but she was happy though with the result.

Maan opened his eyes to find her. He was so eager to see her wearing the dress in which he had been imagining her since the time bought it. And now it had become more special for him after making her wear himself. He searched for her, found she was hiding. His soul smiled, jumped in delight seeing his effect on her.

"Geet!' He called her name, walked to her and stood at behind.

"Won't you let me see you '

She bent her head down. Everything was too much for her to bear and she turned and hugged him tight when did not find any way to hide her unconcealed state. It was her best place to hide; her Maan arms and she felt her heated body started to calm down.

Maan hugged her tighter. His wish she had completed with her pure surrender and nothing more he had to wish for but the craving she had added in his thoughts was now not going to be reduced anytime soon.

Maan made her wear rest jewelleries and made her ready for the occasion he had planned. After few hours, at night SD called them downstairs.

"Chalo Geet'

He raise hand to her. Geet did not understand what is happening. Till now she had not thought as why Maan was gifting her dress and all jewelleries but now everything started to question in her mind.

"Let's go geet!!'

Maan held her hand and pulled closer. He solely put Dupatta over her head and kissed her forehead.

They came out and it was the time when Geet got the shock of her life!!!

Precap: Guess what ??



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Posted: 12 years ago
am first... yipeee...

romantic and blushy part...

loved how geet fulfilled maans wish!!!

She was the pilot of this tour of this journey over her body and Maan was enjoying it obediently... i just loved this line...

engagement ya seedhe shaadi???
Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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aaj ithni jaldi kaise update kar diya??


Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Superb part
Geets plan was too good
Is it maaneet's wedding
MonaSWrites thumbnail
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

mujhe akele chodke chali gayi kya?


nahi re chor ke kase jaaungi bimaar bachi ko.. 😆😆

links post kar rahi thi ..

but ab jaaungi aaj nind aa rahi hai..

nd kal guests coming ..
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beautiful update

i guess they r going to be marry again

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Originally posted by: MonaSWrites


nahi re chor ke kase jaaungi bimaar bachi ko.. 😆😆

links post kar rahi thi ..

but ab jaaungi aaj nind aa rahi hai..

nd kal guests coming ..



chalo kisiko tho taras aaya is masoom par...

so sunday busy day hoga...

enjoy
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

aaj ithni jaldi kaise update kar diya??



Aaj jyada tired hu so jaldi jaaungi
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😳
Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago

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