The parent- 2,NEW THREAD-PG153,AUG 9,2013 - Page 7

Originally posted by: dqno1

Lovely chapter

Suta was surprised to see her pictures hoping so much that her father had cared for her like that. The one glimpse of pride on his face was for Maan. So much do we do for that recognition from our parents. That must have pinched her bad.

The pink bedroom would not suit her cause she has a different interest. I am liking her, the non-girly girl. Reminds me of someone. Let me take a min to remember, oh no, let me take 2 mins...😆{ yes,both are very similar...😆}

Maan is disappointed that she does not like all the arrangements he made thanks to Dadi. It will take time to smooth out all the edges and create a good fit between Maan and Suta.

Geet and Abhi together sounds like a cute combination. Her memories of the past were painful. I can't even begin to imagine a small child feeling the way she did at that time. Not being able to go out, an unknown city and not being able to play. Poor dear...

Am loving the story.

Thanks for the update.

Originally posted by: swarnakanak

loved the way maan understand suta she didn't liked the room reflected his love and affection born out love of father to his daughter . Geet regrets her innocence to not cherish her motherhood was so touchy.

please try to update soon , what sirjee wrote in the letter my thought jumping over.

waiting...

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

Maan is trying his best to b a parent while geets innocence stopped her from feeling affection for her baby...wonder how these two will b brought together...geet is very much affected...and i love how u bring that out through flashbacks and present facts...u got me hoocked with this story..its something else and i enjoy it a lot..thank u

Originally posted by: divya22

Superb part..
So suta is nt girly type...
well m happy dat suta saw d concern n care for her in maans eyes...
hope she would also b able to c d love...
n geet... yaar i want to no more abt d past... wat had happened...
well i cn understand y gert said all dat regarding her child...
after all she was still a kid who wanted to fly... bt den ber wings were bruthally cut...
m waiting 4 d day when suta geet n maan will meet...
geet is a hindi teacher n m sure she will teach suta hindi...

Originally posted by: CrabbyEntity

superb update...

suta is not like any other teeanage girl well she z bound to b different coz there z not been a single thng in her life which can b termed as usual or normal frm the time she was conceived till now when she z with her guardian wd whom she doesnot hv any blood relation...

she is not like any other teenage girl wd b...her likes which r mostly dat of a boy's wd b some where shows her attempts to b strong and independent i guess...it wd b interesting to see that if maan's concerns and luv for her will irritate her or is it gng to melt her for finally hvng someone who wd cherish her and luv her the way she has always craved for... maan's pain has already starting affecting her and to wht extent z to b left for later...her entire convo with maan was so beautifully picturized...there were so many glimpses to suta's personality and her enthusiasm while telling maan abt her games was like any other father daughter duo wud do...but i din't understand why maan didn't ask her to call him daddy when he has so proudly introduced himself as her father twice before so wht has stopped him now..."Her calling him "Sir" was the fact..She had used very formal word to call him.If she had used some less formal word like "bhaiya",it would have been easy for maan to ask her to call him daddy..He is trying to decrease the level of formality,rather than eradicating it immediately.}may b coz he wants her to call him on her own but still when she had asked him and he had the opportunity he refrained frm using it which he should hv availed...i thnk he wants to earn d title instead of just being called daddy and not meaning it... ( i hope i'm not confusing u wid my confusions 😕){yes,this also can be a strong reason...}

maan and dadi's part z always a lovely sight to behold they r so adorable together...maan's cribbing amused me alot and that title on suta's ring had me rofling...poor maan should see the implied meaning of it...their reminiscing suta's childhood memories were utterly sweet and that shows how they hv cherished hvng a baby in their house...suta breaking her doll's leg didn't surprise me at all...well wht else z to b expected frm a future john cena's fan right..{ yes you r right...🤣}.that envelope part...i was like uhh ho...all her queries r gng to b answered and misconceptions to b resolved if she z gng to read d letter but again i was like wow the way u hav brought the twist and

moulded the expected situation ...

maan was very much aware of suta being deprived of her father's luv and he was angery at him seeing suta sad now and i wonder how will he react knwing the complete story...

u knw pinu i wd hav gvn u the nick PD if u had not provided me wd the list of of ur nicks and had i not liked pinu amng them { you still can call me "PD"...😃}and now reading abhi's choice of geet's nick GD had me laughing at the co-incident abhi wd hav scolded me for copying her...😉

wht ever hapend wd geet and wht ever she felt at that time she was not to b blamed at all but i thnk she still helds that guilt of not understanding the importance and true meaning of becuming a mother but wht was to b expected of such a little girl who was left at the mercy of her relatives who cared least of wht hell they were to throw her in...abhi's character z like a fresh breeze in d story and i'm liking her more wd each update... both geet and suta r facing identical situations with only common thng z their old wounds!!!

thank u so much for yet another fantastic update 👍🏼[Thanks dear..😊}and yes will surely try the story u hv suggested!!!😳

Originally posted by: dqno1

Sorry for the scattered comments Palin. Have been unusually swamped so my thoughts are not quite collected at this time and also I was feeling bad that I had res'd and not posted a comment.{its ok avi..Don't feel sorry..I understand as I am laziest one here to give comments...😆}

The title was very reflective of past and present here. The bond between what the mother felt in the past and the daughter is going through now.

Loved the care and concern Maan has to her pain. He is a loving soul wanting to ease her hurts yet she proclaims herself pain resistant. It is a self defense act of hers not able to bear more than she has had to in the past.{ Honestly telling,even i didn't see this thing in such profound way..I have the awesomest readers in this world..😃 Sometimes your comments give new meaning to entire update for me and makes me wonder,how i can accidentally write all these words which hold such deep meaning..}

New home for Geet but the wound opening is old. we get a glimpse of her past and it is painful to imagine a 14 year old in that situation. How much Rano's heart must have hurt to let Suta go away? Her old wound opened up again too of not having a child. Even one that could be easily explained away.

The worm simile was amazing. Again and again you have a word of expressing yourself in a way that even the dufferest of us can understand and accept. { I am dufferest person here,hence i chose simple things which are up to my intellectual level yaar...😆 My readers are so generous that they like my weird examples...}Your story takes me into the heart of these characters and feel for each one of them. Here Suta, Maan, Geet and Rano all had suffered and we get to see a glimpse of it.

I love you Palin. Your writing makes me crave to write better stories and more meaningful characters.{ I love you too avi..and Thank you so much for such big compliment which I am not worthy of...😊}

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Sorry for the disjointed comments again..{Tumhe LP maan ki lat lag gayi hai..You are being overapologetic these days...😆

Originally posted by: gudmeet

nice one dear

loved the COINCIDENCE of mother and daughter duo's

new abode old wounds

😛

maan and suta part was very sweet

full of father's care

and then abhi and geet

abhi is so sweet

and GD

The moment I read this my mind said it stands for

gurmeet drashti{ You are their true fanatic guddu..when i wrote "GD",Group discussion was revolving in my mind...😆}

my mind is so single tracked

hai na😆😆😆{I have no prob till it thinks on my favorite track..}

loved the example of brinjal and worm

this story of urs is showing us both sides of so many coins

and each side is right in their own way{Thanks dear..🤗}

👏👏👏