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CrabbyEntity

@CrabbyEntity

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

superb update...

suta is not like any other teeanage girl well she z bound to b different coz there z not been a single thng in her life which can b termed as usual or normal frm the time she was conceived till now when she z with her guardian wd whom she doesnot hv any blood relation...

she is not like any other teenage girl wd b...her likes which r mostly dat of a boy's wd b some where shows her attempts to b strong and independent i guess...it wd b interesting to see that if maan's concerns and luv for her will irritate her or is it gng to melt her for finally hvng someone who wd cherish her and luv her the way she has always craved for... maan's pain has already starting affecting her and to wht extent z to b left for later...her entire convo with maan was so beautifully picturized...there were so many glimpses to suta's personality and her enthusiasm while telling maan abt her games was like any other father daughter duo wud do...but i din't understand why maan didn't ask her to call him daddy when he has so proudly introduced himself as her father twice before so wht has stopped him now...may b coz he wants her to call him on her own but still when she had asked him and he had the opportunity he refrained frm using it which he should hv availed...i thnk he wants to earn d title instead of just being called daddy and not meaning it... ( i hope i'm not confusing u wid my confusions 😕)

maan and dadi's part z always a lovely sight to behold they r so adorable together...maan's cribbing amused me alot and that title on suta's ring had me rofling...poor maan should see the implied meaning of it...their reminiscing suta's childhood memories were utterly sweet and that shows how they hv cherished hvng a baby in their house...suta breaking her doll's leg didn't surprise me at all...well wht else z to b expected frm a future john cena's fan right...that envelope part...i was like uhh ho...all her queries r gng to b answered and misconceptions to b resolved if she z gng to read d letter but again i was like wow the way u hav brought the twist and

moulded the expected situation ...

maan was very much aware of suta being deprived of her father's luv and he was angery at him seeing suta sad now and i wonder how will he react knwing the complete story...

u knw pinu i wd hav gvn u the nick PD if u had not provided me wd the list of of ur nicks and had i not liked pinu amng them and now reading abhi's choice of geet's nick GD had me laughing at the co-incident abhi wd hav scolded me for copying her...😉

wht ever hapend wd geet and wht ever she felt at that time she was not to b blamed at all but i thnk she still helds that guilt of not understanding the importance and true meaning of becuming a mother but wht was to b expected of such a little girl who was left at the mercy of her relatives who cared least of wht hell they were to throw her in...abhi's character z like a fresh breeze in d story and i'm liking her more wd each update... both geet and suta r facing identical situations with only common thng z their old wounds!!!

thank u so much for yet another fantastic update 👍🏼and yes will surely try the story u hv suggested!!!😳

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dreamy4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Suta never liked her room but lied to maan. but he caught her lie. Both understanding each other Feelg sweet bonding.maan dadi convo abt her No girlish habit 😆 too cute. Aww abhi full of masti gal loving her 😃 fabulous update. Very interest part 😳 😊

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ramya sree

@.ramya-gurtian.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

congrats for new thread
awesome part
suta finding maans care love concern for her but also hating him
geet remembering her pregnancy days
ohhh she compared baby with that worm 🤢
this clearly shows how much she is hating baby :(
luved it
update soon

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Sorry for the scattered comments Palin. Have been unusually swamped so my thoughts are not quite collected at this time and also I was feeling bad that I had res'd and not posted a comment.

The title was very reflective of past and present here. The bond between what the mother felt in the past and the daughter is going through now.

Loved the care and concern Maan has to her pain. He is a loving soul wanting to ease her hurts yet she proclaims herself pain resistant. It is a self defense act of hers not able to bear more than she has had to in the past.

New home for Geet but the wound opening is old. we get a glimpse of her past and it is painful to imagine a 14 year old in that situation. How much Rano's heart must have hurt to let Suta go away? Her old wound opened up again too of not having a child. Even one that could be easily explained away.

The worm simile was amazing. Again and again you have a word of expressing yourself in a way that even the dufferest of us can understand and accept. Your story takes me into the heart of these characters and feel for each one of them. Here Suta, Maan, Geet and Rano all had suffered and we get to see a glimpse of it.

I love you Palin. Your writing makes me crave to write better stories and more meaningful characters.

🤗

Sorry for the disjointed comments again..

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

nice one dear

loved the COINCIDENCE of mother and daughter duo's

new abode old wounds

😛

maan and suta part was very sweet

full of father's care

and then abhi and geet

abhi is so sweet

and GD

The moment I read this my mind said it stands for

gurmeet drashti

my mind is so single tracked

hai na😆😆😆

loved the example of brinjal and worm

this story of urs is showing us both sides of so many coins

and each side is right in their own way

👏👏👏

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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: LadyArwen
awesome dear!!! though honestly and personally i don't like the groom younger than the bride, but still i like this story... other than the part where Geet is elder to Maan... the story is fabulous and also makes me collect my tears into cups and buckets😛... continue soon...

Thanks Kida...😊

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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: .Maggie.
Every chapter of this tale makes me go through each of the characters' heart and mind and understand them. No one is really right or wrong here. All of them are humans. And all of them have their own hell that was imposed on them. I didn't for a moment got angry for what Chidi said. I am a girl first, and I had been through the age, and had I been in her place, I might have felt the same.

Freedom is what any child desires and deserves. When they are deprived of that due to something, they ought to develop a dislike towards it. A girl who is home bound and not allowed to play, a child like that, what else would she think? What else would have she felt then?

If there is anything I feel for Geet it is love love and more love followed by sympathy for the present Geet who might have had the scars that run deeper than she shows. {You have understood her character perfectly bratty...😊}

Suta I still say is not rebellious by nature. Her eyes are clouded by disappointment that she wasn't provided the love she so deserved and anger towards the person who had stolen it from her. For a child who was deprived of mother's love, was it wrong on her part to seek her only parent's love and attention?

Her calm demeanor when she talks with Maan, her swallowing her retorts, her being normal with him attuned to his concern was something which she inherited from Chidi. She has lots of love in her heart which is just locked. The anger and resentment would come to her only when she was reminded of it, like the picture of convocation. But the scars scene between Maan and Suta made me realize that Suta will come out of it and probably shall bring Maan out of the bubble he built around him depriving Mamta of her son's reciprocal of love.{yes..you are right but hard part is that I have to make it happen..Everytime I write a story,a point comes where I used to wish for characters to be come in "real world" and solve their problem of their own...😛😆 But its not possible,I am the one who had created them and their problems and I have to solve them too...}

Also there's something which is bothering me. When I think about Ashok, I wonder the distance he created between him and Suta...was it something he did on purpose? Was it his guilt and the witness of his monstrous act that day reminding him day in and day out in the form of his daughter make him keep her away from his eyes?{What else it could be bratty..Suta's appearance is very similar to her mother,even maan could point the similarity in first look...Suta was like a constant reminder of his sins{actually one and only sin...}

And last but not the least, I agree Abhi should sort her clothes out. They indeed are tangled and fall on feet the moment she would open doors🤣{Should I send "GD" to help her???"

PS: Did I tell you that I love you?
PPS: I am sure even a couple madly in love wouldn't exchange these many "I love yous" as much as we do😆{ I proudly agree on this..and I would say again,"I love you "bratty...🤗😆}

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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: yappingduck
how can someone's thinking be so profound.{Really..You have called me "Brutus" in bratty's thread...🤣}..u take me everytime by surprise with ur deep insight and how u integrate it in ur sory and make us ponder over some of the mundane things that happens in our day to day life

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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
lovely part palin...you very well written how old wounds have hurt to both suta & geet in diff maaner...

Suta did not read the letter...I was curious what her father wnated to tell her...may be asking sorry or something about his mother...I have to wait till she reads the letter...hummm...

geet was so childish at her time and how she hated her child just b'coss she could not get to play like others...loved her pain related to brinjal & the worm...poor geet...I am wondering still she is feeling the same about her child now...{ you would come to know in coming chapters madhuri..😊}

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