MG OS- Pal-pal soch me aana na.. Last Part-pg71/ Next OS LINK-pg83 - Page 34

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

loved it..
nice update..

thank u so much:)

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa

Bechara maan!!

Tum ko dekhe beena chain milta nahi

Dil pe ab koi zor chalta nahi...

Har pal dhundhe nazar tum hi ko hi jaaneman

Had se badhne laga mera deewanapan...

Ab muje raat deen tumhara hi khayal hai

Kya kahu pyaar me diwana jaisa haal hai...

one of my fav songs:)

Originally posted by: Tarina.R.Totine

awww
poor mannu

ya..poor mannu jaanu:-P

Originally posted by: paponecon

he is doing what nyone will do in this situation...evryone wants to avoid such thing in frst tm bt pyar ko chupa ya control nehi kar sakte kisine...maan ko geet dekhi kya window se..

hmm...in this age there is always an uncertainty and fear of being wrong...thats why the unsurity n hesitation.
..
"Lekin Pyaar kiya nahi jata..
Ye toh hota hai sanjog.. "
..
aur maan ko ho gaya;) that we should ask from geet..haina?;) :)

Part12

Hone hi lage..
Shaayad tere hum..

"I Like her..!!!"
He had come back home disappointed, as he didnt got to see her. He was in a miesrable state. He felt so frustated on his helplessness as he wasnt able to do anything to sooth his aching heart.
There was a time, when she used to be so close to him, with him, around him all the time... That time, he wanted to avoid her... And now when she was not near him..he was dying for her single glimps! It was all his own doing..he himself had pushed her away from him. He felt angry on himself, how can he be so foolish... his heart was in so much pain and he didnt knew how to solve this mess. He couldnt trust himself anymore to take any decision..given how he had already complicated the whole thing. He wished if someone could help him. He really wanted to share his problem with someone..as now it was going out of control for him. This restlesness, this uncertainty..everything was getting unbearable for him. He very badly needed to speak out his heart to someone who could guide him. And with this thought only one person came to his mind... "Bhai" ..yes, he could speak to his brother as he is the only one who would understand his situation and will keep it to himself. Besides, his brother already knew about geet as he used to share everything with him...so it wont be hard to explain the problem to him.

Maan jumped off his bed and rushed to his brother's room. He dashed inside and without thinking he just blurted out the fact which he hadnt even confessed to himself yet. Without doing any more delay.. He voiced out his heart, his feelings finally.."I Like her..!!!"
Though maan hadnt expected his brother to be shocked on hearing his confession, given how he already had a hint and used to tease him all the time... Still he was expecting him to be a little surprised atleast. But No.. His brother was neither shocked nor surprised..not at all! Instead.. His brother gave him a knowing look and teasing smirk...which in return, surprised him for sure!
"Wont u ask..who i am talking about..?"...maan asked feeling a little nervouess for some unknow reason.
"do i really need to..?" ..his brother raised his brows at him grinning widely...which kind of irritated maan..but he chose to ignor it.
"u knew about it already...how??" ..maan asked a little curious.
"Come on, it was so obivious..anyone could have guessed it. Wo toh bas tu hi ek duffer hai..jo itna time laga diya samajh ne me..!" ..saying that his brother chuckled seeing his pouting & annoyed face.
Maan picked up a pillow and threw it on his brother's face.. "it isnt funny ok...!! that made him to laugh loudly.. They had a little pillow fight, enjoying their special sibling's time & bond.

After that, they had some serious talks..
"when did u realised by the way..?" ..his brother asked and then maan told him everything..how he used to feel different about her, his confusion, his fears, his denial to his feelings, his ignoring her purposely, their fights and hurting her...then his regrate, his longing, realisation and accepting his feelings finally.
After listening everything..his brother asked the most important question.. "what about her..? Kya wo bhi tujhe pasannd karti hai..?
..to which maan had no answer! He had never thought about it before. He had been so confused himself that he never tried to knew her feeling about him. And now as he thought about it... if there was even a slightest of possiblity that she too feels something for him..then his jerk like rude behaviour with her must have changed her mind &opinion about him!
His brother chided him for acting so stupid & ignoring the most important thing...her opinion/feelings.
Maan felt really sad realising the mistake he had made...but then his brother's words lifts up his hopes again..
"But i think she too likes u..!! Warna wo tujh jaise duffer ko itne bhav thodi na deti..!!"

***

Maan laid on his bed thinking about her asusual. But there was a difference..instead of feeling worried & restless like the privious nights..he was feeling relax & some what excited that night. Talking & sharing his heart with his brother has helped him alot. Now he kind of knew what he have to do now. First step is to apologies and get her friendship back. And then most important task..to know her feelings for him. What she thinks of him? Does she only like him as a best friend?? or she feels something more for him? What if she too likes him..?? ..just the thought of it thrilled him so much. His heart jumped in joy..desperatly wanting it to be true. He just couldnt wait to know..

Haal tera hai kya..
O sanammm..

me first...
wow thatvwas such a beautiful upd.
Loved it so much...
So simple yet beautiful.
Tfd pm...
waiting for more...

lovely update...
maan n maan's brother...cute bonding...
maan told every thing to his brother...
loved it...

loved the update...
pillow fight😆
awesome update..

sahi mein maan...pehle poochhna toh chahiye na...bechare...koi baat nehi maan...pasand karti hai woh...khush ho jao...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...