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Posted: 12 years ago
Gdnite di... kal subha padhlungi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Muski in all ur FFs y is it that always Geet suffers more pain than Maan?... hate u for that... make that ass suffer... grrr and yeh am waiting for updates of other FFs
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting !!!! di jaldi karo... feeling sleepy!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dhak dhak karne laga mera jeeyara darna lage :p :p
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 21

She didn't know how wish her happiness with so much of pain within. She knew all the eyes were on her right now. She thought she had left all this behind.. but somethings always don't leave u ..how ever far u go.

Pari had tears in her eyes. She felt helpless & guilty. She didn't want to put her in a pot like this. It was so embarrassing. Every one blindly accused her of things which as far .. far from truth. It was insane to even think on those lines abt Geet. Only Pari could understand knowing how simple she is.

It was so hurtful to see the bride to see in tears. Geet had to be strong to walk out like that. Everyone was sad with the turn of events. Kind of blaming Geet not knowing anything at all.
She waited out for the taxi. When the taxi came she picked her bag to leave when felt a tug on her wrist. Without looking at him she knew it was him. She pulled to let go. He didn't.. neither could he say anything.
Cab drive ' how long mam
she looked at Mk to let her go
he looked away
she struggled with his grip.. until the cab fellow finally left after waiting for 20mins watching the silent fight between the two.
He took the bag from her dragged her back into the house.
Its not that simple.. she spoke meekly
his steps stilled at his path.. he exactly knew wat she was refereeing to
Mk- na mano tho kuch bhi nahi..? it sounded more like a question
Geet - mane aur na mane main bahut halka sa hi farak hota hain
there is a very thin line that separates believing & not believing

Mk - & wat decides that ?
She sighed ' belief that constitutes u
Mk - &
she was defeated fighting herself - & ..a tear.. & fresh layer & layer flowed

Mk reached for her, his hands cupped her face & his two thumbs wiped away her tears. His heart wobbled with the pearls that didn't seem to stop. Her lashes were down as he pulled her closer. Man karbhi nahi nibaya jatha.. mana nahi jatha. Nahi nibtha zindaigi ka sach.. nahi sambhaltha manne ka dukh. His trembling lips rested on her forehead.. as a meek sorry disappeared in the caress. She gulped hard & stepped away. He composed himself
Mk - u don't want to see Pari hurt on her most impt day
she didn't look at him.. her eyes were glued to the floor. She was in a very vulnerable state. She didn't want those veil of lashes to unveil her naked emotions.
Mk ' do u?
She shook her head fluttering her lashes still looking down
he took a deep breath & carefully took the bag from her. She quietly complied. The moment she stepped inside the door Pari came running to her & hugged her tight.
Geet wiped her tears ' sambal ke mehendi karab hojayegi.
Pari smiled between the tears & kissed her thank u
she gave a sadu look to Mk.. I never thought I would feel so nice abt u.. thank u
he smirked & went to settle her bag in her room.
Her silent cry reverberated in his ears mins after he had settled her bag. He closed his eyes shut & walked to the window only to see her stand aloof again. He inhaled sharply & went down.
In the main hall h
e saw Sam sitting between the girls & her hand was beautifully decorated with mehendi. When the girl asked wat name to write.. she instantly said Mk.. & then looked at him. He stared at her with pleading eyes. Her eyes welled up with guilt. She had no right.. shame engulfed her. She pulled her hand away & ran out. He ran behind her, he was stopped when he heard Pari agruing with Geet.

Pari ' mehendi kyun nahi laga rahi tum
Geet smiled weekly
Pari ' thoda sa laga lo.. like a simple design
Geet ' its ok
pari tried to ask her round abt way.. changing the topic to her mehendi
Pari - meri mehendi rang layegi na.. she asked worriedly
Geet instantly took her hand in hers & adored it.. with a longing eyes. Bahut pyari hain.. zarur rang layegi
Pari ' mujhe tho bahut tension hoti hain.. main nahi manti lekin ..mama kahti hain ki..if the color is dark then the hubby will have a long life & aunty says.. mark will love me more
Geets heart almost stopped
pari ' I would prefer the second theory
geets memory went to her mehendi ceremony.. every one had teased her saying..Maan will love her a lot since her mehendi was deep shade ..actually it became darker the next day.. tears covered her eyes.. before even before the shade became the color of red.. all the colors of her life were snatched for ever. Her thai ji had told her.. she was so lucky.. wo ..jug jug jiyenge.. she even now clearly remembered where she each letter of M-A-A-N written on her hand.. she looked along her palm
pari ' Geet tum bhi laga lona
she snapped back ' nahi main .. mujhe mujhe.. mujhe pasand nahi
mujhe mehendi pasand nahi
she said restlessly looking here & there

Thanks for the lovely comments
lots of love
muskan
- PART 20 PREV NEXT PART 22 -
Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
~~~edited~~~

dhinka chika dhinka chika he he he...! Me frst me frst me frst...yyyooopppeee...u know m frst on ur thrd fr the scnd tym :D on any of ur wrk...its my scnd tym n the frst commenter :D :D awe I luv u

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awe awe awe I snd pari :p fr the very frst tym even I felt sumthing nyc abt this khadoos idiot called MK...! Hushhh the most please this was...he pressed his lips ovr her frhd slightly pecking n appologizing, it is said that kissing the forhd eases out all the tension n worries of the othher!...here it workd the same to sum extent fr Geet as well!

Hushhh I really wish Sam a better n good life ahead BUT ONLY WITH AAZAN :P :P maan aka MK to humaari Geet ka hai na ;) feels sorry fr Sam bt still delights that she will get her true life prtnr...aiee chaddo sach sach btaau to poor selfish maaneetian jumping laughing dancing thinking sam khud b khud maaneet k raaste se hatt gayi :p husshhh baba ji :p mehar :p :p

awe! I really wnna see MK confrnting his leagally weddied wife or a battered widow pg his! I wish that day Geet could frgt n frgt everything n move on wid Maan...i jst wish so!
Edited by dazzlingdivz - 12 years ago
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Yeh kis haq se uska haath pakkad kar aa gayaPoor thing, aur hazaar baatein sun ni padegi...Gosh I hope no one forces her for the mehendi, when I know in my hearts that he will... She came back for Pari and only Pari.The wait for the taxi and the silent fight which she ended up losing.How would he feel to hear all the taunts unleashed on her?Sam needs to start thinking which way she wants to go. On the one hand is the one who loves her and the other the one that she loves.Very interesting parts of the story so far.Thanks for updating.Hugs to bachas🤗
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
So emotional part!!!!!! Finally MK ne kuch achha kaam kiya!!!!! Geet kitna pain sahegi aur!!!!!😭... neeni k time pe rula diya mujhe😭 continue soon...😃
Edited by daredevilisback - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

😛


Very painful ...Why she comeback again...??
What a shameless Banda he is...😡
Itna sab bolker bhi samne aa jata hai...
Ghatiya Insaan...Grrr
Is a word Sorry enough ...no 😡
He abused her...humiliated her...disgusting...😡😡
Aur wo Sam..grrr.. 😡 Raat bhar Azaan ke sath soi ab
MK ka naam likhwa rahi hai...wah !!! grrr 😡
Why this Geet comes in rituals ..?? all these things only
hurt her more...
Why she is listening him..?? give him a slap...
Don't know what is in her mind..???😕
Waiting...Waiting...Waiting...


Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
gr8 update di...

soo maan hav emotionally blackmailed her to stop on the name of pari...

but staying there will only increase her pain and nothing els...seeing everyone in colorful cloths with jewelry and make-up things will only push her back in darkness...
Edited by manikka - 12 years ago

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