Maaneet OS: Interrupted! - Page 20

Originally posted by: sweetkj

Lovely OS... 😳

The title & its interpretation in the story was too good. It reminded me of all GHSP Scenes when such scenes were exclusively shown & special efforts taken & all mehant to interrupt them thus making us audience bang our head. 🤣 😆

The bonding Maan has with his sisters & the whole family was very well put together through all the minute detailing you did initially as well as throughout the course of the Story. Especially the binding, love & respect towards Riya ... the motherly bond & emotions he relates to & the manner in which it has got rightfully rubbed off & imbibed even in his better Half Geet was beautiful. 👏

All the interruptions were 😆 Bechare desperate souls longing for some private moments & 😳 Lekin koi nahi... mast tha atleast for us readers... 😉 And Geet did that mischief ... 😆 Quiet a fire brand Maan has for a wife... jodi khoob mast hai... Miya biwi saath toh bahut saare fireworks... 😳😆

Pari wala M Squared for her Mammu *Em squad* Made me go aww so sweet... Adorable... !!! ❤️

Neurology studies... 😉😆 Use lecturer banna diya ... 🤓 Arey waah apne dil ke armaan yahan pura kar rahi thi kya ??? Me curious to know... 😉

All in all beautifully written, just loved it for all the thikki spicy , meethi mishty & Hot chupke chupke scenes... 😳☺️

Agar sweety ke dhamki se aisa hota hai toh I request you to keep making galti for which Sweety keeps asking you such Compensations... 😉😆

Sweety kya mast compensation maanga tumne... 👏 Maan gaye tumko aur tumhare effects ko *Take a bow girl* Yes & even Madhu "ji" 😡 (For calling me "Ji" in your note ) You too can take a graceful bow & pat your shoulders on my behalf for this OS... dil khush kar diya hum sab ka... 😛 ❤️

No calling me 'ji' again... 😡 & Yes thank you for the paltan dedication... 🤗

Next Kab hai... 😆😃

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Let me confess first that I've read a few of your OSs before but never commented. I loved all of those of course! 😳

This one was just great! Very aptly titled! 😆

All through it, I kept remembering all the moments when Maaneet were interrupted during their romance in the show. I got that exact feeling reading this one; as in, right when the blushing moments are at peak, a needle pops the whole momentum! 😳

The family love you showed here, the love between siblings, the love between in-laws, the love of a husband for his wife and vice versa, all of it was so well-executed. I felt a lot of respect for Riya especially. Elder sisters are second-to-mothers, aren't they? They care for their younger siblings like a mother does. No wonder Maan started calling her 'Riya Maa'! 😊

The teasing was so much fun to read. I opened to read it while I was sitting with my family and then I had to close it for fear of bursting out laughing and being asked the reason for it. 😆 Even though the unveiling of a bet surprised me, I think it was the most natural thing to expect considering the fun-poking family that this is! Pari was so cute with her 'Em squad'! I was like 'aww'!

Overall Madhu, I'll sum it up in three words: I loved it! Thanks for it! 😊

I'm hoping to catch up with all your works soon. Will always be willing to read anything you write!

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

@Sweety: vaise churaying toh properly chura kar. Onir has talked about you aur tu khud apne aapko Sweety refer karring kya 🤣

Originally posted by: sweetkj

sabko nahi maalum na ki me sweety hu isliye.

Originally posted by: sweetkj

sabko nahi maalum na ki me sweety hu isliye.

Originally posted by: sweetkj

what.!!