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Chapter 10

Chapter 11

Originally posted by: palindrome

The chapter went straight into my heart..This is by far best portrayal of the character "Daarji" and No wonder it is result of wonderful imagination of a writer like "You",avi..

Her childhood memories with her grandpa was the "bestest" part of whole chapter..

You know,while reading,there comes such a line,where you stop reading and get stuck to read the same line again and again till your slight moisture in your eyes becomes prominent tears..

"The rotis in the beginning were as burnt as his fingers. I do remember kissing his hands to make them better."

This was the one such line in this update..In a way,It has summarized the relation between Darjee and Geet..

Many congratulation for creating such a relationship dear and presenting is as beautifully in your words,as beautiful the relation is...!!!!🤗

PS-Thank you for making me stay in geet's hostel..I imagined myself as a lunatic girl who keep on playing in her room with "Shinchan dolls" and ,who don't answer others when they ask her name...🤪🤣

Originally posted by: dqno1

🤗 Your encouraging words make me want to do better.

Darji is based on my father. I remember when I was very young my Mom had fallen sick for about 2 yrs and Dad did everything for us. I was only 8 but I learned how to cook everything just cause I wanted to help him. There is such a bond created in adversity that even the most rich and pampered girl would miss out on. Each wiping the other's tears to make it all better. To this day my father is an example of love that I have never seen in the world and this was my way to bring him into the story.

I was stumped as to what to call you hence your description was what I could come up with..😆

Thanks for the support Palin. It feels good to write something that means something to someone..🤗

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

loved the part...

even though crazy for maaneet and wish to read more and more about them... but u have created magic it seems, that i love other characters an wish to read more about them too...

i just loved ur interpretation of daarjee through geet... her childhood memories of choti, rotis, were so touchy... just loved them!

i loved many of the simileys u used over here... whethere it was of the cats or the flight of birds returning home...👏

i was trying a lot to identify ur friends in geets hostel... and i think i managed most ...

will be waiting for the next...

Originally posted by: Tyro

we do think from our only when it comes to family...no1 or nothing is more imp than them...

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Avi k lye HP ka angry young Maan wid the amaxing heroic entry ever 😳

Originally posted by: heytal

Chapter 8

Superb update Avi

😃

So good to see Sujal after a long time

Though Muski does include Raj in her FFs (DA; TM)

But still RK is always welcome😳

I totally agree to the fact the supporting cast always adds to main lead

wether show, movie or a ff

They truly support and add depth to the story

😊

Even here Aadi and Pinky convo gave us a insight of the happening of that night that supposedly changed everything and also the following years😳

Would love to see what you have thought and how these three are gonna add to the Maaneet saga😛

Loved it

🤗

Hey Avi:
I like this Daarji...sooo much better than the actual serial. The relationship between a Grandchild and her parent, her grandfather so beautifully brought about with an equally beautiful song. So Geet is not going back???? I understand why, but why????😭...oh well I know you will find a way for Maan and Geet to meet. Great update, thanx for the pm. Hope you had a wonderful B'day.