If Only You Saw Me (9) - Page 39

Originally posted by: Onir

humein bhi bataao kaun hai yeh aapki teacherji ... 😉

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Ohho! Itna jaldi bhool gayi twinnie? Meri teacherji toh hamari pyaari dqno1 hai na!😉

Originally posted by: dqno1

Mari tu mujhe jaane kyun nahi de rahi ho

Dekho Geet ruth gayi...

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Itne be-bas ho ke ek phone kaat ke apni Geet ke pass nahin jaa sakte? 😛

Originally posted by: mayyo13

This emoticon reminds of GC's performance in JDJ. 😳

Geet is taking it as a dinner but still anticipating & subconsciously wanting it to be a date. She is binding herself form coming out of her shell or from feeling exhilarated on her feeling for him or accepting them & even him having feelings if any for her as she feels she will soon be going away from them, away from 'Him' precisely. Liked the way her anticipation was shown, while talking to her people back home, or to Anya or even when she receives his call where she expects tiny bit that it would be related to the date but then chides herself that she is just going off track. I loved this pull & push within her. If she has started feeling this then it means the seed of it has been planted. It just depicts that she is close to accepting her true feelings & understanding the depth of it. Well written. 👏

You didn't make next favourite couple of this story A-A to go on a date when given the opportunity. Poor Ayush had to save himself from bashing & had to blurt out Maan's oh -so- no- secret of Liking towards Geet, with Ayush trying to play cupid giving them their privacy. 😆

I liked how you showed the bonding & ease Geet shares with her Mom. She stated everything even the supposed Date to her Mom without much hesitance & when she felt she might have been misinterpreted she went on to clarify. It speaks a lot about the trust she has on her Mom & her Mom has on her. Her Mom questioned her not because she was suspicious of her intentions but because she was genuinely concerned for her daughter.

Ranbir & Mom's teasing had me grinning. 😃 What fun to have someone whom you can tease when you know the said person will be all sharam se pani pani & will try salvaging something & thus dig a bigger grave of teasing from others.😆😆 Loved all the teasing & dramatics involved. It was so lively showing how these 3 have bonded & a mirror to their relations. What I really liked was the line- 'Especially Mom is the kid amongst the 3 of us''True Maan's mom is such a childlike person yet very matured while handling relations. Loved how Maan liked it when his Mom caressed Geet's head lovingly, & he relating it to Ranbir's similar feelings. Its true we always love someone whole heartedly but then in the corner of our heart want our love to be accepted, & cherished by our loved ones ' People who have a special place in our lives whose opinion & acceptance matters.

Anya- Geet conversation I was dreading that Anya shouldn't blurt out the new found information. She can never be subtle & can't keep things within her. I love her nature but' more so for the completely love she showers on Geet. She is so enthusiastic to dress Geet for her date with Maan.

I like how who have time & again given emphasis on the way Geet keeps seeking his smile. It's so sweet & just shows the true depth of her feelings that she seeks his smiling face more than anything. 😳

When his Mom announced dinner every night I was like ho gaya kabadda date on Wednesday ka. But then beautiful Zara the Bhabhi dearest saved ti from being ruined, but the evil Ranbir again ruined it all. I'm now sure Ranbir is taking training from Mayyo 😡😉 as he is hell bet on troubling Maan & preventing him from going on a date.

Ranbir's musical arms regarding the sangeet pairs, just to trouble the pairs. Khud toh aapne love ke saath khushi khushi hai dusro ko sataa raha hai. How mean big brother. I'm sure this again must be an idea planted in his mind by our very dear writer Mayyo. So that along with Maan even we readers would give her red faces.😡😡 But then I think it will only be for good as I have faith in Mayyo. 😳🤗 Right na twinnie? You will not prove me wrong.

Waiting for her stay in his place for a whole week with marriage ceremonies in the surroundings, With love in the air. ❤️😳

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Of course I feel so and I'm sure everyone who's read your comments and follows your story, agrees with me. 😊