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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maaniqra

Nice update... Luved the convo b/w the trio...
Waiting for next update!!!


thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey nice ff i read all part
update soon
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Originally posted by: hira2010

hey nice ff i read all part

update soon

thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

update kab de rahi ho.
it's already more than three momths
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rashmivaish


update kab de rahi ho.
it's already more than three momths

aaj update mil jayega shaam tak
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Posted: 11 years ago


updating...
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waiting...
Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 14

Maan: Wo dadi mein toh bas yeh puch rha tha ki Vicky ko miss malik se pyaar kab hua yeh unhe kab mila

Vicky :bhai pehli baar mene inhe park mein dekha tha wahan mein jogging ke liye gya tha aur phir dhere dhere mein inhe wahan roz dekhne lga aur bas mujhe miss malik se pyaar ho gya mene kayi baar koshish ki mein miss malik se baat karu par kabhi himmat hi nahi kar paya aur aaj aapne mujhe unse introduce karwaya aur ab toh mein bhi roz office aaunga aur miss malik se apne dil ki baat kahhunga

Thank god bhai aap unhe like nahi karte aap ne mujhe bta diya agar kahin aap bhi unse pyaar karte hote toh mera kya hota...

Vicky :bhai kya aap meri help karoge ki mein unke samne apne pyaar ko express kar saku

Dadi: of course beta maan tumhari help jarur karega hai na maan aap Vicky ki help karoge na jisse ki Vicky miss malik ko bta sake ki yeh unse kitna pyaar karta hai.
Now maan curse himself for hiding the truth that he love geet and now he can't say anything

Maan: Wo dadi mein kaise Vicky ki help kar sakta hu aur mujhe aap inn mamlo mein mat lao Vicky ko jo karna hai khud kar le ab mein jar ha hu mujhe dad se bahut important baat karni hai

Dadi: are maan suniye na

But maan very quickly goes from there as he neither want to confess his feeling nor he want to help Vicky but dadi and Vicky are happy with this act as they now are confirmed that maan has some feelings for geet...so now they will continue their drama so that maan confess his feelings towards geet

In the meantime engagement ceremony started Geet brought rings for arnav and khushi first arnav slides the ring in the finger of khushi and then khushi slides the ring in the finger of arnav

arnav ring


khushi's ring



Whole time dadi watches geet as she likes geet very much the way she is handling things and n her mind and heart wants her as maan's wife and maan is also looking at her from far. All ended well and everyone is happy. All of them retired to their respective homes after dinner. Now its family time, everyone settled for dinner. At dinner geet was lost somewhere in her thoughts, she is just playing with her food at then sunaina see that and ask geet that what is the problem with her???Why is she not eating the food? Geet said "nothing aunty, everything is fine". Sunaina said "ok and now have your dinner". After the dinner, arnav dropped khushi and geet to their flat.

At night in Khurana Mansion

Maan is just thinking on only one point that how come Vicky knows miss malik bcoz he doesn't believe Vicky's word bcoz he knows that his dadi and his brother are best dramebaaz, he knows that Vicky love someone and is very serious about her, but he is also sure the girl Vicky loves is not miss malik and now he wanted to find the love interest of his brother and with that he slept.

In morning

The first thing maan did is to call pari (sister of adi) as pari and Vicky are very good friends and studying in same class so he thinks that she must know something about that girl

Maan: hello gudiya mein maan bol rha hu

Pari: maan bhai aap... aaj apne kaise call ki aaj meri yaad aapko kaise aa gyi

Maan: woh gudiya mujhe tumse kuch kaam tha

Pari : accha toh aapko koi kaam hai isiliye aaj aapko pni choti behen ki yaad aayi warna toh mujhse baat bhi nahi karte ho

Maan: arre gudiya aisi koi baat nahi hai woh bas mein kaam mein thoda sa busy tha isiliye baat nahi ho payi tujhse bahut dino se sorry gudiya maaf kardo apne bhai ko

Pari: ok ok bhai mene aapko maaf kiya ab btayiye aapko kya kaam tha jiski wajah se aapne mujhe call ki

Maan: wo gudiya mujhe tujhse Vicky ke bare mein baat karni hai

Pari: Vicky ke bare mein kya baat karni hai bhai

Maan: tujhe malum hai na ki Vicky kisi ko pyaar karta hai

Pari: han bhai wo to hum sab ko malum hai isme kya baat karni hai

Maan: gudiya kya tujhe malum hai ki wo kisse pyaar karta hai

Pari: nahi bhai yeh toh mujhe nahi malum magar baat kya hai

Maan: wo mein tumhe baad mein bataunga abhi tumhe mera ek kaam karna hai kyat um mera kaam karogi ??

Pari: arre bhai aap mujhse puch kyu rahe ho aap toh bas order dijiye mein aapka kaam kar dungi

Maan: very gud gudiya,toh suno tumhe Vicky par nazar rakhni hai aur yeh janane ki koshish karni hai ki wo kis ladki ko pyaar karta hai

Pari: wow bhai aap mujhe detective bna rahe ho detective pari sinha hehehehehehe

Maan: han detective gudiya ji ab aap apna kaam acche se karna aur phir mujhe iss ke bare mein btana par han ek baat ka dhyan rahe ki Vicky ko iss bare mein kuch malum na chale

Pari: ok bhai aapka kaam ho jayega.

Maan: thank you so much gudiya

Pari: bhai thank you aap kaam pura hone par boliyega okkk

Maan: ok byeee gudiya

Pari: bye bhai.

Precap: detective pari and her investigation

prev: part13

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Edited by angel_smily - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
vicky and dadi are good team yaar..maan is more smarter😆😆..very sad to see geet..hope maan will bring happiness in geets life soon..wonderful update..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice engagement scene tho it was short.Maan,vicky...pari...cool...

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