Originally posted by: Maaneet099
phew finally read your update in peace and in one piece 🤣
Uff Avi... come here and give me a hug 🤗 gosh the update was awesome!
Glad you liked it... Yeh le..🤗
i loved the way you went about describing Maan's dilemma and aloofness. the setting you created along with the song... subaan Allah!
and wel wel who do we have here... the Devil herself 🤣 Aisha Aunty 🤣
beautiful portrayal of blooming friendship between the two. while Aisha still seems to be drooling on Maan she certainly seems to stick to her NP... kaminipan yahaan bhi dikhing... lol
Khoobsurat cheeze God ne admire karne ke liye hi rakhi hai, usme uska kya fault hai...😉
the dream house explanation by Aisha was simply superb! i wonder if Aashu can speak so intelligently in front of Maan 🤣 i can imagine a sane Avi magar always an insane Aashu... hehe
Maybe true. Khud apni baat kar nahi sakti ...😲
Maan certainly needs to stick to his love. i guess he has forgotten Aisha's advice once back from London oye Maan babu... Geet sirf tumhari hai!
Bohut bhola aur buddhu hai...Pehle pehle pyaar mein aise hi hota hai na...All the hesitancy and self doubting
sigh no real Maaneet but felt them nonetheless... 😃
superb Avi! 😃
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