THE LOCKET(3), MG FF, thread 4 link pg1, COMPLETED - Page 70

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Posted: 12 years ago
I was aware that you were going to introduce "Aisha" as Maan's friend But I was quite surprised,when I found him calling her "Ma'am"..Only reason that came to my mind behind him calling her ma'am was ,May be he was her patient once..😛
But My assumption was quite wrong..Aisha was aclient turned friend and her metamorphosis from client to friend was beautifully portrayed by you..
Doctors used to very witty and good speakers..They can cure half of the sickness with their words only..Our Doc aisha used her wit to make him confess about the girl in his life..😆..Hope her push would make him go ahead from his silent admiring..
Aisha's contagious naughtiness brought out the fun side of Maan too but my favourite character from the chapter was "Bhai jaan"..The moment Maan called him Bhaijaan,Salman's face flashed infront of my eyes...
I don't know whether aashu likes Salman or not but for me he was her "would be"...😳
Chapter had covering of fun elements,however "stuffing mixture" was made from hidden seriousness and deep emotions..
Aisha was all fun outside but deep down she was able to understand Maan's situation to give him the perfect advice..
I totally loved it avi..😃
PS- I loved the music selection too..
PPS- You and brat ,both have included "Sea" in your writings..I have never been to a beach in my life..You both have intensified my craving to see "Sea" with my eyes...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Unres Inni jaldi on Pg. 94 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow he so needed this didnt he
gosh that was just beautiful
and the teasings in the end was so funny
waise dont worry she does love ya dude
but is bit shy to say anything
parr uska bhi kuch kiya jaa sakta hain mere bhai
i loved how she told him to wait and all will be fine in the end
awww isnt it cute to see him shy like that
cheers for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Unres Inni jaldi on Pg. 94😆




Thud 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww Its awesome update loved it
maan is so cutiee pie n innocent too
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update.. Yeah I liked Aisha aunty..😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤔

uska matlab nahi samjhi AP 😲🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Koolsmile



The weather here is tooo pleasant n em in a verryyy good mood 🤗
Avi Aashu for yew ppl 😳

Ek aam adhoori khwahish hai meri roshan roshan subhon ko,
Teri chahat ki har shaam mile, mere naam ko tera naam mile
😳 ❤️


Ameen❤️


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

😲
Photo ka kamal hai... Sheen ke pics, teri shaiyari aur meri taaliya... combo acha hai...😆


Aur mai
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

What the...aashu...😡😆


Avi..even though im seething in anger about this Aisha...but i cant stop thinking that this is my princess.

all this dinner date and all...whoa 😆😉 ...

i dont knw y..but i like this part more than anything!!! may b bcoz of aashu...but yet..if aashu is not in the char nah...i wud surely kill u!! 😡😆

Awww

i love u my kittu 🤗

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