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Posted: 12 years ago
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Happy B-day Angel. I hope your will like you b-day OS😳


Annie was watching her a reality show called Bigg Boss. She loved that show. Yes at times it was way beyond crazy but it was good fun. She was addicted to that show. Annie had even made a ID on indiaforums, she was a regular visitor of that site. She was really active on it from commenting on posts to making posts for her favorite contestant. She had also made a lot of friends on that forum one of them was a girl with the username Ruchs. They had become really close. Every morning before Annie would head to her uni she would first log in on IF, one day in a hurry she forgot her laptop on. Just then Maan walked into her room to grab his book, Annie had lend a day before. When he walked in he saw her laptop on she had got a message from a girl name Ruchs. He opened it.
Hi Annie,
I was thinking we know each other for a while know. What if we meet each other in real life to. I wanna know how you look and hang out with you.
Love,
Geet.
Maan was outraged Annie was chatting with unknown people what if she was dangerous. What if she would hurt his little sister. He deleted the message. He started pacing up and down in the room, what should he do. Then a idea striked him he walked up to his room and logged in on his laptop. He made account on IF with the name Maansi. He send a buddy request to both Geet and Annie. He started commenting on every post Geet would make. After a while Geet started replying on his comments and they started becoming friends. He decided he needed to know her better, so he scrapped her a simple hi. She scrapped him back.
Ruchs:
Hi Maansi how are you?
Maansi:
I am fine. Seems like you like cats????
Ruchs:
Yes I also have a cat called 90degree (Kawaii_geet I stole your cat😛)
Maansi:
Cute
Ruchs:
:)
Maansi:
so why don't you take a dp with your real pic????
Ruchs:
Hmmm I don't want strangers to know how I look
Oh Maan thought but she did ask my sister to her or him whatever this Ruchs is😡😆.
Maansi:
Oh I thought we all where friends here.
Ruchs:
Hmmm
Maansi:
So is your real name Ruchs???
Geet thought what to do should she tell her that her name is Geet. There was something about her she found weird.
Ruchs:
Yes my real name is Ruchs
Liar you told my sister your name is Geet, Maan thought.
Ruchs:
Is your real name Maansi???
Maansi:
You bet it is
Ruchs:
:)
Maansi:
So did you watch bigg Boss tonight
Ruchs:
No was to busy preparing for my exam
Maansi:
In which UNI do you study
Ruchs:
********
Maansi:
cool
Ruchs:
And you
Days went by and Maneet kept scrapping each other, they become good friends Maan realised the girl was harmless or was she pretending he wondered. But he had to admitt it was fun chatting with her. At the other side Geet started trusting Maansi completly so she decided to share a little secret with her today.Maan opened his laptop to find a pm from Ruchs.
Hi Maansi,
Maansi remember a couple of months back you asked me my real name I told you it was Ruchs. I want to tell you Iied to you cause I didn't trust you at that time. But know I do my real name is Geet Handa. My fb link is:****** . If you log in you will find my pics. So do you have a fb account????
Love,
Geet
Maan was dumbstruck for a while he called up Aadi and asked him to find everything he knew about a girl named Geet Handa. After Aadi gave him all the information Maan realised Geet was indeed harmless so he didn't have to worry about Annie as Geet was her only close friend on IF. He decided never to answer Geet back. His mission was done so know need to stick around IF anymore. But at the other side Geet everyday checked her inbox she could see Maansi had read her pm but why hadn't she replied. Geet was worried she had scrapped her a couple of times but no reply. Then Geet logged in on FB to see or some stranger had send her a fb request but there was nothing. She found the behaviour of Maansi weird. She closed the laptop and decided to to think to much about it, tommorrow was a important day she would go to KC in hope of getting a job. She closed her eyes and fell a sleep. The next day Geet walked into KC for her interview as a secatary. When she walked into Maan cabin Maan got dumbstruck for a while this was the same girl on IF if he wasn't mistaken. He looked at her name, yes she was Geet Handa. Maan told himself to forget this all IF episode and concetrate on the interview. Maan was impressed be her answers so Geet got the job. Maan and Geet started working together, both found it easy to work with each other and tomorrow week Maneet would go together on a business trip for a week. While Geet was sitting in the plane she was getting dahm bored kya karoon she thought. She looked next to her to see her I -don't- talk- boss going through a magazine. She sighed.
''Maan sir what are you reading''
''Hmm a article about cyber crime''
''God he is so boring''
Geet mummered but Maan heard her, but choose to ignore her for the time being. They finally landed but sadly enough Aadi had accidently booked one room and above all the meeting would be the next day. Maneet had decided to share one room but Maan had decided they would stay in the room while Geet insisted to go on sight seeing as they had nothing else to do, today.
''Maan why can't we go out, what will we do here the entire day''
''Getting bored, as I am a bore''
''Oh why do I have the feeling he heard me''
Geet mummered again and again Maan heard her.
''Yes Indeed Miss Smart''
Geet made all short of faces, Maan smiled to himself. He had to admitt she looked adorable.
''Okay what if I take my words back or wait even better you proof me you ain't a bore''
''No I admitt I am a bore''
Having said that Maan took out his laptop and started working on it. Geet sighed and walked over to him, like a good girl she sat next to him.
''I am sorry, now can we go sightseeing''
''Geet I ain't your boyfriend, so you can also go alone''
''But Maan sir what if I get lost''
She said while making a purl lip. Maan couldn't help himself and pulled her cheeks.
''Fine''
''Yippie''
She dragged Maan outside. Maan was liking this side of Geet a lot. They went to all kind of places.Maan had to admitt he had the best time of his life. Maneet didn't realise how time flied by. They came back to the hotel. Now Geet was tensed room mein there was only one bed. She looked at Maan and saw him all lost. Maan had only one thing on his mind was he falling for Geet., Maan was in deep thought when Geet cleared her troath he looked at her angelic face and again got lost in her. Geet blushed hard was he falling for her she thought, jab she saw him she was in love with her macho man was her falling in love with her too now. They shared a eyelock mahiii😳😆. Geet got to shy and broke the eyelock she looked at the floor. Maan smiled at her blushing face in trance he walked over to her. He stood in front of her and carresed her face. Geet couldn't take it anymore and hugged him tight. That's when Maan came back to reality he stumbled back. What was he doing carresing her face and now hugging. He slowly freed himself and without saying a word he walked out of the room. Geet stood there as a statue for a while. She didn't know what to do or think. Why did Maan leave like that didn't he like it when she hugged him, did he get upset by that. But he had also carresed her was, what was that all about then. A upset Geet sat on the bed thinking, while Maan sat outside on the bench thinking what was happening to him. Was he in love it seems like. She is a great girl and it seems she likes me too Maan thought. After a good three hours Maan decided he was in love. He came back to the hotel room to find a Geet lost in her thoughts. He walked towards her and put a hand on her shoulder. She looked up to him.
''Maan sir''
''Geet I love you''
Maan blurted out, Geet eyes wided and a grin tucked on her lips. She hugged Maan.
''I love you too Maan''
Maneet started dating months flew by and Maaneet kept falling more and more in love even if that was possible. One fine day maan walking through the hallway, when he heard Annie talking to someone on the Phone from her talks it seems she met that person through IF. Maan rushed again to his laptop and logged in on IF, to check Annie's scraps. Just then Geet walked in.She sighed seems like Mr. workaholic is still working. She came and sat next to him Maan was so involved in his doings that he didn't realise Geet was sitting next to him. When Geet saw he had a IF account and more importantly that he was Maansi, tears formed in her hazel eyes, She felt cheated on. When a drop fell on Maan's hand he looked up only to see Geet teary eyes. She looked at him with accused eyes. First Maan was confused but then it dawned into him.
''Maansi''
While she said that she walked away from the room. Maan grabbed her hand.
''Geet listen to me''
''No Maan no I am sorry I mean Maansi I have enough of your lies. First you lied to mean that your a girl and your name is Maansi. I trusted you so much that I gave you my fb link where all my pics where on it. After that you just disspeared seems like my friendship meant nothing to you. Above all when I walked into you cabin you must have reconized me, Haina MAANSI''
''Geet Haan I lied to you but that's because I was worried for Annie. I had read your pm you wrote to Annie, that you wanted to meet me and it scared me, what if you weren't a girl but a boy and what if you would do something to my babysister''
''Not everyone is like you Mr.Khurana who ie lying on the net''
Maan put his hand on her cheek.
''Look at me Misty and answer me honestly don't you know how many girls have made good friends on the net and become friends with them and when they went to meet them they figured out that they weren't talking to the person they thought they where talking. Misty you can even send fake pics how will you know it's the real pic or not.
Geet nodded.
''But Maan why didn't you ever tell me''
''Geet when we became that close it slipped my mind and Misty today when I heard Annie talk to some if-er I logged in to check since when she is talking to that person''
''Hmmm''
''I am sorry Misty if I have hurt your feelings''
''It's okat Maan I understand you where just concerend''
''I love you Misty''
''I love you Maansi''
Geet winked at him
The End
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OH MY GOD!!

An OS???

Gosh!!! Didn't really expect this one!!!

Haayeee!! It was really sweet though!!

Hmm me getting suspicious… Are you my Maan???😉

Awww but jokes apart shona, am really very very very overwhelmed!!

When me started reading it , my mouth formed an 'O'….

Haaayeee…. It was so so so cute and at the same time based on reality…

Seriously nowadays with crime rate spiraling, one has to be really very careful!!!!

Am so happy!!!!

Wow!! The whole concept….

To the easy you wrote it!!! Just left me mesmerized!!

Craving for more,,,

You know Mom asked me, Ruchi you aren't sleeping, and I was like, no no!!! I have to check on something!!!

Ab how do I tell her,… that i have my soul sister waiting with lots of surprise gifts for me online!!

Loved the OS a lottt!!!

Haaayyyeee!!! Me really dreaming of meeting my Maan on IF now!!!

He he!!

Love you a lottt shona!!

P.S. Bookmarked it to read it again and again!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part..maan concerned 4 his sister
he logged in as a girl lolz..
maneet fall in love,,
n geet coming to know about maansi..its all too gud..
if is also a big character in this ff
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruchs

OH MY GOD!!


An OS???

Gosh!!! Didn't really expect this one!!!

Haayeee!! It was really sweet though!!

Hmm me getting suspicious' Are you my Maan???😉

Awww but jokes apart shona, am really very very very overwhelmed!!

When me started reading it , my mouth formed an 'O''.

Haaayeee'. It was so so so cute and at the same time based on reality'

Seriously nowadays with crime rate spiraling, one has to be really very careful!!!!

Am so happy!!!!

Wow!! The whole concept'.

To the easy you wrote it!!! Just left me mesmerized!!

Craving for more,,,

You know Mom asked me, Ruchi you aren't sleeping, and I was like, no no!!! I have to check on something!!!

Ab how do I tell her,' that i have my soul sister waiting with lots of surprise gifts for me online!!

Loved the OS a lottt!!!

Haaayyyeee!!! Me really dreaming of meeting my Maan on IF now!!!

He he!!

Love you a lottt shona!!

P.S. Bookmarked it to read it again and again!!!!

awww that's so sweet ,did you like the banner
ohoh everyone given glares to my angel😆all have become MSK
I am so happy you liked it
😲here I am telling to dangerous of the net and your dreaming of finding a Maan online sweety rahul's zaroor mileghe Maan's net pe nahi😆
Oye I am a girl😡😆
love you more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
wow...maan kya dimag paya hai...chalo achcha hi hua...geet jo mil gayi...

superb n beautiful os...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story n fr d pm also...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow great ending
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
beautiful dear
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesum and beautiful os. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9

Title itself was diff.Very sweet os.It was a very diff theme too.I haven't read anything like this b4.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice OS

b'day

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