My OS thread- New OS for Anniversary....Yaadhein on pt 1,2 pg 23 apr 5 - Page 8

chalo maan k dimag khula toh sahi...abb dekhte kya hota hai...

Part - 3

Maan looks at her in confusion...

Geet is not confused...she is very clear about her statement...

Iss ko kya ho gaya?

Kahin isske dimag kaam nahi kar raha hai kya?

Maan: tumne kya kaha?

Geet: mujhe abhi tak koi proof nahi milli hai

Maan: par tum toh jaanthi ho ki mein gunegar hoon

Maan bows his head in shame...

Geet: lekihn woh meri galatfami bhi ho sakthi

Maan: nahi, ye sach hai, mein gunegar hoon aur mujhe saza do Geet

Geet: agar aap gunegar ho toh mein bhi gunegar hoon, meinne bhi aapki tarh jaldbaazi mein ek achche aadmi ko gunegar banne ko mazboor kiya hai toh mujhe bhi saza milne chahiye, aapne job hi galthi kiya hai, meinne bhi kiya haina?

Maan: lekhin nuksaan toh sirf tumme hu haina?

Geet looks deep into his eyes...they are hurt...

Geet: nahi, nuksaan toh donno taraf hua hai

Maan ke paas koi bhi jawaab nahi...

He can't believe it...aaise bhi koi ladhki ho sakthi hai kya?

Geet: meinne bhi galthi kiya hai

Maan: lekhin mein kaun hotha hoon tumme saza dene ki?

Geet: ye toh sochne ki baat hai, aap kaun hothe ho?

Geet looks at him with that question still lingering in her mind...

Maneet eyelock...isska jawaab toh donno jaanthe hai...lekhin qubool nahi karthe...

Maan turns away reluctant to face her eyes...

Geet: mein aapki madat karna chahathi hoon

Maan: kyun?

Geet: iss sawaal ka jawaab toh aapko kal raat hi milgaya hai

Maan: kya?

Geet: aap teek se yaad karkke dekho, kal raat kya hua

Maan doesn't want to think about it but Geet won't let him escape...

Galthi kiya haina? Toh ye sab bhi sehlo...haina?

Maan fumbles...

Maan: woh...mein

Geet: aapki yaadaast bahut kamzoor hai kya?

Maan: mein sirf tumme yaad karne aaya tha

Geet: phir kya hua?

Ye ladhki toh Maan ko jeethe jee marwayegi...

Ye bar bar kyun uss galthi ki yaad dilana chahathi?

Maan goes blank...he can't remember anything now...

Geet continues...

Geet: aap mujhe warn karkke mera haath kholkke wahan se jaana chahathe the, haina?

Maan: haan, lekhin patha nahi ye sab kaise ho gaya?

Geet: mujhe patha hai...

Maan: Geeet

Geet thinks about last night...

Geet's version...actual version...

Maan ties her hands and goes over the other side to warn her...

Geet tries to push him off the bed ...no...kick him off...

Maan holds her by her shoulders and pins her on the bed...

Geet looks into his eyes...

Geet finds his eyes burning with anger and pain...

He is really hurt...but why? Why is he so mad ?

He is totally pissed off...and his anger is against her alone...why?

What is her fault?

He has committed a crime and he has to face the consequences...

Maan then shows that half - video on his mobile...

Now Geet knows why he is angry...

He thinks that she has done this for money, then his anger is jsutfied...but his pain?

Why is he so much affected by that?

But still he is a criminal...

She can't let him walk off without due punishment...

But her heart says that she is worng...

But she had seen those horrific pictures of him with sameera...

Poor sam, issko toh mein...

Geet gets very angry...

She tries hard to get away, but she could hardly move...

Maan throws the money and smirns...

Maan : tumne paison ke liye ye san kiya tha?

He can't believe it himself that Geet can do this...

Maan: kyun Geet?

She had an answer but her mouth is tied...

Maan: mein samaj saktha hoon ki Sameera paison ke liye kuch bhi kar sakthi, par tum?

Maan looks at her in despair...

Maan: tum aaise kaise kar sakthi? Mujhe laga tum sab se alga ho, sabse achchi

Geet couldn't believe his words...

Btu it's true...he had trusted her so much...

He believd her innocent eyes that deceived him again and again...

She looks so innocent even now...

He should have tied her eyes instead...

They keep lying...

He looks into those eyes in utter despair...

He feels as if she had betrayed him...

He belived her so much ...

Maan: mein bhi kitna andha ho gaya tha? Aakhir Tum bhi toh ek ladhki ho, you women are born to betray us, haina? Jaanthe ho ki ek ladhki ki takat kya hai?

Geet looks at him...Maneet eyelock...

Maan: usske aankhen, haan yahi aankhen, aur uss aankhon ki aasoo kissi ko bhi doka detha hai

Geet blinks...

Maan: uss Sam ne tummare samne apne aankhon se aasoo behdhiya toh tum usske sare batein ko sach manthi ho?

Geet is confused now...

Ye kya faltu batein kar raha hai?

Sam mujhe dokha kaise de skathi? Woh bhi toh ek bechari abla naari hai...

Galthi toh sirf mard karthe hai, haina babaji?

Geet looks at him with her innocent eyes...

Maan: aur ek aadmi ki kamzori kya hotha hai?

Maan looks into her eyes...

Maan: ladhkiyon ke aakhen, yahi aakhen meri kamzori ban gaye the, ye toh kissi ko bhi hara sakthe, ye bole bole aankhen, unkke adayen, unka nasha...

Maan stops...he is losing himself now...

But he has come to threaten her...

He knows that her eyes deceive him always...they make him insane...

He turns away from them...

Maan: tumne mujhe r***st bhualne ki hsok haina? Teek hai, mein tayaar hoon, tum bhi tayaar ho jao Geet, mere pehle victim banne ke liye

"PEHLI VICTIM?"

Isska matlab Sam joot bol rahi thi?

Maan continues ...

Maan: tum kissko r*** samajthi? Iss physical bause ko

Maan ka gussa badh jaatha, he turns wild...

He tears off her kurthi...revealing her hidden parts...

Geet feels ashamed...

She is humiliated...

Geet trembles beneath his stromg body...

Maan gets back to his senses...

He covers her up with the quilt...

He stares her eyes...

She is scared...she is gasping...

She struggles to breath...

Maan removes the plaster gently fearing to hurt her...

Geet has gone speechless...

Her lips have gone dry and pale...but they are still seductive, welcoming Maan to wet them...

Maan places a soothing kiss on her lips...

Geet sochthi...ye aadmi chahe toh bhi kissi ko balathkar nahi kar saktha, haina?

Maan burries his head on her neck...

He glides his lips along her neckline to reach her ear lobes...

He continues in a broken tone...

Maan bahut takleef mein hai...

Maan: tumne jo mere saath kiya hai usska kya hai Geet?

He looks into her eyes...searching for an answer...

But Geet has no answers this time...

Maan: tumne mere upar aaise inzaam lagake mere izzat ko r*** kiya hai, mere aathma ko r*** liya hai, mere swabimaan ka r*** kiya hai, gaar mujhe szaz hona chahiye toh tumme bhi saza hona chahiye Geet

He bites her ear lobes gently just to tease her...

Maan: yahi tummara saza hai geet

He keeps staring her for a moment and slowly retreats leaving her aroused...yearning for more...

As he unties her hands she grabs his shirt and pulls him...

Geet: tum aaise bachke nahi jaa sakthe

Maan tries to get rid of her hold...she looses her grip...

Geet turns around to catch him...

Geet is not aware that she is half- naked...

Her duet slips and Maan catches it...

He covers her up and his touch makes her loose her balance...

She leans back and Maan moves forward along with her still holding the duet...

Geet feels ashamed for calling him a r***st...

He has every chance to take revenge but he couldn't...

Maybe it's ture...maybe there was something between them...

Geet can't deny that she liked him in the beginning and she too had strong feelings for him...

But she kept ignoring them simply b'coz he is the MSK...

He can't have a heart, he is a money making machine...

And he always uses everything for his benefit...

She knows very well that he wil use her also and throw her like dirt after using her...

That's how he has succeeded...

He pretends to be nice till he gets his things done ...

Kaam ho gaya toh uska asliyat samne aatha, jaise ki uss land issue mein hua?

Maybe she ignored him just b'coz he is rich...

Maybe she thought he is also a greedy businessman...

Maybe she misunderstood his love for lust...

But now she knows that he too has his weakness...

Where has all that attitude gone?

Where is THE MSK?

Maan turns around the cot to reach her...

Geet turns mad seeing him approaching her...

She wants revenge...tit for tat...

Geet: how dare you tear my kurthi?

She unbuttons his shirt revealing his six packs...

Geet looks into his eyes for his reaction...

He is hurt very badly...she can see the pain in his eyes...

She has wounded him and she is desperate to heal his wounds somehow...

Maan pushes her on the bed and tries to leave...

Geet is not ready to let him go with so much pain...

She holds him back to explain everything...

She pulls him hard and he falls over her...

Geet looses her senses and hugs him tight...

Maan is instantly relieved of his pain...he finds solace in her hug...

He has found his paradise...

Geet initiates their union with a kiss and she continues from where Maan left...

Maan is compelled to finish his job that he wanted to leave half-way...

Geet can't blame him for that...netiher can Maan blame her for that...

It just happened...both of them got carried away for a moment and there is no looking back...

After that recap Maan feels that Geet is right...

Both are equally responsible for that...

Geet: ye kya hai?

Geet shows the photos of Maan with Sameera...

Maan is shocked...

Ye kaise ho saktha?

Maan can't believe his eyes...

He is ashamed to see him with her like that...

Maan : ye tumme kaise milla?

Geet: pehle aap mujhe ye bataho ki aap uss din bhi kal ki tarah

Maan: kal ki tarah kya?

Geet: woh aap usske saath bhi

Maan: woh Geet Handa thodi nahi

Maan looks at her...

Geet is reminded of last night...she blushes...

Geet : ye kaise jawaab hai?

Maan: toh tumme jawaab chahiye?

Geet: haan

Maan: tum mujhse sawaal karthe ho?

Geet: haan, Mr.Khurana, jawaan dijiye, abhi

Maan gets closer...he corners her ans pins her against the wall...

Maan: tumme kya lagtha? Mein kissi aur ke saath aaisa kuch kar skatha hoon kya?

Maan looks at her for her response...

Geet: mujhe kya patha?

Maan pulls her and hugs her...

Geet: ye kya hai?

Maan: mujhe bhi patha nahi ki ye sab tummare saath hi kyun hotha?

Geet: achcha?

Maan: haan Geet, aaisa kyun hotha? Tum hi bathao, jab mein naraaz hothaa tab bhi tummare saath ki zaroorat hothi, jab mein kush hotha tab bhi tummare saath ki zaroorat hothi aur jab mein usaas hotha tab bhi tummare saath ki zaroorat hothi, kyun Geet?

Geet: toh ab meri zaroorat kaise padhi?

Maan: ab mein babut kush hoon

Geet: kya? Aap kush ho?

Maan: tumne mere sawaal ka jawaab nahi diya hai Geet, jawaab do

Maan looks into her eyes...Geet can't hide her feelings now...

Geet: mere paas bhi aapke sawaalon ki jawaab nahi hai

Maan: joot mat bolo, tum jaanthe ho ki ye kyun hotha hai

Geet: mein sirf itna jaanthi hoon ki ab mujhe aaise hi aapke saath rehna hai

Maan: ye kab se hua hai?

Geet: aap nahi jaanthe?

Maan: nahi Geet

Geet: chatto, mein bhi kisski madat karne aayi?

Geet tries to get away from his hold...

Maan wouldn't let her go...

Geet: chodo mujhe

Maan: Geet, tum naraaz hothi toh aur bhi sundar lagthi ho

Geet: mujhe apna kaam karne doge ya nahi?

Maan: aaise bhi kya zaroori kaam hai? Abhi toh humme celebrate karna hai

Geet: haan haan, celebration party kahan hoga? Jail mein?

Maan: ye sab badh mein karlo, ab mein bahut kush hoon Geet, mujhe meri Mishti milgayi

Geet: Maan, aap aaise waqt pe kush kaise ho sakthe ho?

Maan: tum mere saath ho toh mein kaise kush nahi ho saktha? Mein toh issi pal ka intrezaar akr raha tha

Geet: aap pehle bathao ki ye sab kaise hua?

Geet shows the photos...

Maan: ab issko chodo, hummare baat karo

Maan pulls her closer...

Geet: babaji ab inkko kaise sambaloon?

Maan: aaise

Maan hugs her tight...

Geet: Maan, humme saboot chahiye

Maan: ye aapka court nahi waqeel saiba, ye MSK ka bedroom hai aur yahan sirf pyaar ke batein hotha hai, samje aap?

Geet: Maan pehle aapko nirdosh stapith karna hoga

Maan: I don't care

Geet: what?

Maan: tum jaanthe haina ki mein nirdosh hoon?

Geet: haan, warna mein apke bahon mein kaise hothi?

Maan: toh problem katam, mujhe kissi aur ki koi parwa nahi

Geet: aaise kaise?

Maan: aaisa hi hai, mere liye sirf tummara jaana zaroori tha, ab toh tum mere saath ho, mein aur kuch nahi chahatha

Geet: par mujhe iss duniya ko bathana hai ki mein galat thi, MSK ki koi galthi nahi

Maan: kyun? Tumme MSK ki itni fikar kyun hothi?

Geet: kyunke aap ab mere MSK ho

Maan: what? Come again

Geet: ab MSK Geet ka hai, aur Geet apne Maan ki beizati kabhi bardaast nahi kar sakthi

Maan: haan Geet, mujhe abhi yaad aaya, koi hum dono ko ullu bana raha hai, koi mujhe mere Geet ki khilaaf kada karna chahtha hai, ussko mein kaise chod saktha? Chalo, mein bhi tummara madat kartha hoon

Geet: aapko abhi bhi sirf meri fikar hai? Aap kaise insaan ho?

Maan: ye toh tum badh mein apne babaji se poochlo

Geet: babaji? Aap toh mujhe bahut ahchce se jaanthe ho?

Maan: warna mein kaise tummare kamre mein gustha?

Geet: aap bahut bade Dhust danav ho

Maan: tummare liye toh mein bar bar Dhust danav banne e liya tayaar hoon Geet

Maan tries to open her kurthi...

Geet: nahi, ab aap DD tabhi ban sakthe jab aap ye case jeet jaathe

Maan: kya?

Geet: haan Mr.Khurana pehle kaam phir mahi mahiii

Maan: ye toh nainsaafi hai

Geet: wahi toh, mujhe insaaf chahiye

Maan: teek hai, bolo, tum kya jaana chahathi ho

Geet: ye hpotos kab aur kaise liya gaya hai?

Maan: mein kaise jaantha? Mein toh inko pehle bar dekh raha hoon

Geet looks at them again...

She is a little worried...she can't digest the fact that Maan is with Sam that too so intimate...

Geet: ye aap kya kar rahe ho isske saath?

Geet toh apne aapko control hi nahi kar patrhi...seedhe seedhe Maan se poochthi...

Maan: Geeet?

Geet: hare, mujhe aap par pura barosa hai, lekhin mujhe sach ko jaana hoga, Tabhi toh hum kuch kar sakthe

Maan: sach?

Geet: haan, mujhe patha hai ki ye tasveer joot boltha, sach toh sirf aap jaanthe ho

Maan: tumme itne yakheen ke saath kaise keh sakthi?

Geet: kyunki mein aapko aapse behther jaanthi hoon

Maan: achcha?

Maan keeps playing with her...

Geet: Maan, aap thoda toh serious bano

Maan: teek hai, mujhe dikhao

Geet: ye toh aap hi haina?

Maan: haan

Geet: toh aap hi bathao ki ye kya hai?

Maan: uss din ahcnak Sam ne mujhe call kiya tha, she told that someone is in her house...she has locked herself in her room and she needs help...I rushed to help her

Geet: aapne police ko inform kyun nahi kiya?

Maan: kyunki mein lawyer nahi hoon

Geet: teek hai, phir kya hua?

Maan: tum toh mujhe ek criminal ki tarah treat kar rahi ho?

Geet: aap aage bolo

Maan: I wnet to her house, I saw someone trying to harm her, you know? I just tried to stop him and help sam

Geet: par issko dekhkke toh aaise nahi lagtha

Maan: haan, mujhe bhi ab yakheen nahi hotha ki ye kaise ho saktha? Issko dekhkke koi bhi mujhe galat hi samjega

Geet: ab toh hummare paas yahi proof hai aur ye bhi aapke khilaaf hai

Maan: ek minute, usse do

Geet: wah ji, ye lo, ye aapki shadhi ki tasveer hai, isee bar bar dkehkke kushiyan manao

Maan: Geeet

Geet: isse dekhkke kya karoge?

Maan: hummare paas yahi saboot hai, mein dekhtha hoon ki isse hum kaise apne faida ke liya use kar sakthe?

Geet: isse koi faida nahi

Maan: haina?

Geet: what?

Maan: ye dekho

Maan shows a photo...

Maan is holding Sameera's waist, she is lying on the bed...only his hand is visible ...

Geet: ye bahut achcha hai, dekho MSK ke haathon ka kamaal

Geet looks at it and suddenly stops...

Maan: kya hua?

Geet: hare, ye toh aapka haath hi nahi hai

Maan: tum bhi toh mujhe bahut achche se jaanthi ho

Geet: woh toh meinne kal hi jaana hai, warna pehle hi mujhe strike hotha

Maan: ye lo tummara saboot

Geet is very happy...

Maan: chalo, ab iss kushi ko celebrate karthe hai

Geet: kaise?

Maan: ye toh tum mujhpe choddho, tumme tummara saboot milgaya aur mujhe meri Mishti

Maan lifts her and takes her out...mahiii...

awww so sweet ending.. r u gonna gv n epilog??

Cutest n sweetest !!

part 3
last part?
awesome dear...
lovely...
nice one...
cont soon dear...

read all parts at a time its nice story pehle mu aur uske saath saath ego aur wo hadd paar kiya aur phir realisation and coming together

nice ending

This OS is written long back for the campus mystery competition which never happened...

So posting it here...hope you like it...

Mystery behind Mishty...the ugly truth...

"WELCOME TO EXCEL COLLEGE OF EXCELLENCE"

A colorful banner welcomed the freshers as Maan Singh Khurana stepped into the Excel College Campus. Maan is a first year MBA student. The seniors welcome the juniors with a warm smile. Excel college is a reputed institute and has always been in the news for its achievements in academics. But all this is history. It has lost it's glory for the past few years. Still many old students loved it. Maan's father being an alumnus of the Excel college insisted that Maan too joined it.

Ms.Mathur is the vice-principal and she is known to be very sincere and strict. The students called her "Lady Hitler". She's an old lady, working since Maan's father's days at the college. You could say that she's actually from the last century (19^th) , very old fashioned and still having faith in this college and it's students. She is one of the few people, like Mr.Kkhurana, senior, who regret the present condition of their prestigious institution, THE EXCEL COLLEGE OF EXCELLENCE, and they believe that they could restore it's past status through hard work and dedication, in which world are they in?, that's why we call them the past generation, far from the understanding of Gen X.

You know, the current students are also not far behind their earlier counterparts. They too have made their college famous. Yes, Excel college is back in the news, but only for the wrong reasons, Clashes among the students and the administration, which they proudly call their "War of Liberty", the secret drugs supply chain, which they want to be open and thus obtain liberty. Many of the faculty members left, and only a few like Lady Hitler still believe that this place is their pride and won't let it rot like this.

Since Maan entered the campus premises a rumor surrounds Lady Hitler and her residence. Lady Hitler being the senior most person in the faculty and the vice-principal, she had the privilege of staying inside the campus. She had her own residence, a small guest house placed among the small oasis of trees inside the beautiful Excel campus. It's famous for these lush green surroundings and the serene environment.

The rumor is that, there is a mysterious guest at her place. Some say that it's a ghost, some say that Lady Hitler is a split personality, she turns into this mystery monster at nights. Others believe that it's her daughter that she is trying to hide from the world, since she is born to a spinster. Yes, Ms,Mathur is a spinster, she had an affair it seems with one of her colleagues, and this is his child.

The detective inside Maan found this case very interesting and Maan decided to take up this case at his own will. After all he is here with a mission, to restore this place's lost glory. Let the mission begin with clearing out this rumor. Maan started gathering details about Lady Hitler and her mysterious guest, he named this mystery women, Mishty. Students say that they hear quarrels and loud noises only at nights, some have even seen a shadow of this Mishty, moving around that corner room upstairs, always in a white gown, related to the super naturals. Maan is not one to believe all this absurdity. But the students strongly believe that it's the ghost of the young girl who committed suicide at the campus. She is supposed to be Ms.Mathur's favourite student. That's why she has come to stay with Ms.Mathur. They also have a logic behind their hypothesis, all these activities started only after that girl's death.

As Maan doesn't believe in this ghost story he started collecting information about this girl who committed suicide. And as Maan suspected it's another love story, she had a love failure and so she ended her life and that's the end of that story. The other stories were created by our own creatives who had this hobby of inventing new stories. So, this story had nothing to do with Ms.Mathur. she was just another student and Ms.Mathur hardly remembered her name.

Maan started his early morning walks a little early, at 4 am when the whole campus was asleep. The best time for his detective job. He circled around the crime site, sorry, it's not the crime site, Ms.Mathur's residence. He watched it keenly waiting for a glimpse of this Mishty. After a couple of days wait he was lucky enough to spot her. But he didn't jump to conclusions and waited for a few more days before he confirmed the presence of this Mishty as rightly pointed out by the students in that corner room upstairs. So, this is not just any rumor but a solid case for our young Sherlock Holmes.

Holmes is all set to break this mystery. Next day he went to Ms.Mathur's place a bit early. At 1 am, this time any ghost would have gone back to its grave after it's meal, ghosts are believed to roam the world only at 12 am. So is at all there was any ghost it would have gone to rest. Maan climbed the pipes stealthily like a professional theif, and he made it to the corner room. He peeped inside the room and saw a girl dressed in a shabby white salwar half awake and half dizzy. It's the dawn of her day, it seemed.

It was pitch dark in that room and Maan hides himself in the darkness. He observed the girl closely. She got out of her bed and tried to reach the door. But she couldn't move more than a few steps. She is chained to the wall and she started shouting, "let me out", "let me out", she started hurling objects on the door and Ms.Mathur who was sleeping next door seemed to be deaf to this noise. Poor Ms.Mathur, gave this girl sleeping pills during daytime and she had them in the night. Maan felt sorry for that girl and he concluded that she is mad. Btu why is she not in the mental asylum? And why is Ms.Mathur hiding her in her house?

It's time for Maan's exit and he leaves the rest of the detection for the next day. Then came back that night itself, at 11 pm. Ms.Mathur had just gone to sleep and this girl is also still sleeping. Maan had got his cell this time and he switched on the lights of his mobile and saw her face, she looked weak and pale, but still there is some kind of simple beauty about her that he liked, he kept looking at her innocent yet bold face. Suddenly Maan's face turned pale and he quickly left that place, he had seen her before, he is confused, what is she doing here?

The whole day Maan was upset and thinking about Mishty only. He bunked classes and roamed about the campus the Sun sets and it's time for his next visit. He is just waiting to see her face clearly once again before he could decide his future actions. He is now determined to know the truth though it may harm him, this time he has got better light and yes, it is the same girl, he could never forget her in his life. How could he forget her after what he did to her that night...

Maan didn't have the guts to face her and just left before she could wake. Maan thinks about the past, he met her during the holidays when he came to Delhi for his MBA entrance exams. And that was the fateful night when he met her and committed that grave mistake, he had sleepless nights after that horrible incident and is still trying hard to run from the truth. But as they say there is no escape from truth, truth alone triumps, "sataymeva jayate". This Mishty is none other than the girl from his ugly truth, the ghost from his past that he had come face to face this day. Yes, she is the victim of his grave mistake.

After that unfortunate night this girl had lost her mind and she is in the care of her guardian Ms.Mathur. she is an orphan studying here in scholarship, before Maan ruined her life and she had turned into this lunatic. Actually God must have punished Maan and not that poor soul, Maan too has no escape, and his punishment had just begun, is this not a punishment to see a girl turn mad and suffer in front if his eyes just b'coz of his deeds? Is there a better punishment than facing the consequences of his karma so close yet not having the guts to face the truth and hiding himself from everyone?

Maan then decided that it's high time he accepted the truth and helped her. He decided that he should help her and that way his punishment would be lesser, God will forgive him for what he did, who cares about God? he want this girl to forgive him, then only he can sleep in peace. Till then he had to suffer, thinking about that night all the time. After he saw her in that pathetic condition he is seeing her all the time, at the class, at the mess, even in his dreams. She is asking him why he did that to her? He has no answer. How could he be stoned like that and ignore her cries when she pleaded him so much?

next part...

Interesting start
what maan did to her????

what sin maan did in past