MG SS : DESTINY RULES pt 3,4 pg19,20 july 3 - Page 9

Originally posted by: aanya84

Omg awesome update

Suhi ( can I call u that as I have a friend named Suhana and I call her the same )

Yipeee me first me dancing

U truly justify the titleDESTINY RULES

This part explained the delimma of loosing a loved ones brilliantly

Hope geet is fine

Loved the way u created the atmosphere of longings

I could connect with the emotions of Maan very easily becoz ur writing acted as a bridge for me

Hope they emerge victorious and the destiny binds them together always

Waiting waiting and waiting

Love aanya

thanks aanya yup u can call me suhi many if frnds call..

dear read the complete update as it was nt complete

Ok suhi

Originally posted by: aanya84

Ok suhi

Thank god geet is now safe

Plsss let them just be together

Hope no one comes between

I think sometimes prayers done with dedication does wonders

Waiting for geet to wake up soon and see this new transformed Maan

Can't wait to see her reaction

Plzzz let it be positive ( if u have planned something plzzz go ahead with it will look forward to see ur creativity suhi )

Waiting for the next part

Love aanya

P.s - I thought u updated the full part lol

Thank u for giving me the liberty to call u suhi

And when are u going to update ur other ff

Plzzz update this story regularly I am very much interested in it )

i am nt having my pc aanya thats why i am updating from my cell... When i will have it in right condition will update ...

emotional part /...y maan did not accept geet as his wife? plz reopen the past ...

MG SS : DESTINY RULES

part 4

after two days she opened her eyes... He looked at her she was trying to open her eyes to adjust with the light...
maan called the doctor... He was quiet just like the silence before the storm... His eyes were conceling his feelings she was still not able to see the change .. Though he was still having a conflicting mind still his eyes were truelly depicting that he was changed even if it was small realisation but still this was enough for them...
maan with some eager expressions his dark and secluded eyes were showing the deep emotion of his eyes...
maan: doctor is she fine... The doctor checked his wife.. Her pulse and the rate of heart beat was fine... But still he was looking at her.. The doctor asked her some questions...

doctor : how are you mrs geet.. Is there any pain...
geet in a feeble voice...
geet : i am fine doctor just there is pain in here.. She tried to touch the portion of her haert but it hurt...
geet : aahh...
maan immediately rushed to her she was wincing in pain...
maan : geet samhal ke... Her eyes darted towards his face worry inched in each of his face corners... Eyes which were hiding his emotions were now reflecting his apin... Yes he was hurt he was in a grave pain... The hurt the wound that should be his she had taken it on her for him... And why did he deserve her.. Did he... His soul was questioning him and he was only having the guilt that was even something he couldnt reciprocate to her... To her love...


doctor looked at him.. He was so concerned the ruthless maan singh khurana could be so caring was a surpise to all...
doctor : mr khurana she is fine .. Just need the care... And rset for minimum a month... Her wounds need to be healed ...
maan : any thing else doctor... When will she be discharged...
doctor : after a week after her complete observation she will be discharged... Take care mrs khurana... Saying so the doctor went...

maan made her lie comfortably she was looking at him when his guilt ridden self suddenly got pricked with her concern...

geet : are you alright... Did you get hurt... Wo aapko kyun maarna chahte the...

maan : geet tumhe woh nahi karna chahiye tha.. They were my enemies.. Those bullets were for me... Why have you hurt yourself... Didnt you think about anyone...

geet was hurt...
geet : aab aapke gamo me bhi mera koi haq nahi hai... Socha tha ... Kisi ke baare me bahut socha tha isliye use kuch nahi hone diya...

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Nice part
loved it
geet out of danger