MG SS : DESTINY RULES pt 3,4 pg19,20 july 3 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: valli22

y on hold..

is it due 2 exams,
then we will w8





di a reader told me to put some ffs on hold and start them when others r finished so thats why on hold
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 2
nice...
poor Geet...
Maan is realizing now...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it's awesome.. Geet was very much in pain because of Maan's aloofness but never said to Maan..

hope Maan's prayer helps Geet to recover soon

thanx for pm..waiting for next update.. do cont. soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Update Suhaana 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was so nice.
Maaneet r married.
Maan has distanced himself from Geet.
Geet loves him & never voiced out her pain.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Updating part 3
koi hai kya...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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MG SS : DESTINY RULES

part 3

the fakir baba's words rang in his ears..' apne liye maang use kahin nahin jayegi use '
yes it was indeed true ... The reality and the ultimate truth that if he had a little bit of affection and attraction , thode ankahe jazbaat some sort of affection and undiscoverd emotions than she will be alright no one iis going to santch her from him.. Even if he had done many things wrong to her still he was the one who can revive her...
maan again prayed to the lord this tiime for himself... It is true that if the intentions are right and your heart is pure than the dua is all like a life giving aid..maan folded his hnads his eyes closed head bent... He was begging the almighty for her life for him... For the ultimate truth that he cant live without her.. She was the soul reason of his living and today she had proved this...
maan : mere liye meri geet ko theek kardijiye... Zindagi me sab kuch khoya hai maine ab geet ko khokar main ye dard aur nai bardaast kar sakta...

the fakir baba handed him a black thread with a samll taveez instructing him that this will protect her from all evils... Maan silently kept it with him without questioning.. The person who never believes in this kind of stuff and god was now there and bending towards the ultimate truth of universe just to seek his blessing and aid for her... Dil se dua managane aaya hai...

at the hospital
it was like his dua was qubooled by the almighty she was taking small shots of breathing... Her ragged and uneven breathing first created panic... They could have lost her... Due to the excessive blood loss.. But suddenly just like she was give life to live .. To live for him... She was reveived declaring out of danger...
the doctors came outside the ward.. Yash and daadima were there tensed and worried ... Yash was there giving maan each and every detail of what was going on and of the culprits too...
maan was his way back to the the hospital when he suddenly halted the car.. He looked around and saw no one was there.. It was her his mind scaremed.. She was there right infront of him...
when his mind was not satisfied he looked around and found six seven samll girls olaying from 2 to 5 of age... They were smiling and running behind each other.. For a second he knew that she was fine... The small smiling childrean were the indication that she was fine...

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she was unconscious due to sedatives but out of danger... His eyes didnt even blinked for a second he was with with her from last six hours the moment he reached the hospital he was given the indication that she was fine... Maan looked like still having no emotions .. Yet the whirlpool of intense emotions was going on.. He was fighting for himself and for her...
he knew that she wanted herself to be his wife in every sense.. But never voiced it.. He knew its her modesty and her respect towards daadima that she was quiet.. On the other side it was him... Fighting with himself for her better.. He was the worst person she could have in her life and lastly he was incompetant to make sure that she was having all the happiness of the world... Being the great and the owner of five thousand crore empire it was not difficult for him to keep her happy but monetary status was not all that she will need and ask.. She will want him in her life at every single step of her life that till now he was not able to fulfill...

holding her hands he slept in the same position still with a flickering mind set...

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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Me me me
Me waiting plzzz update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg awesome update
Suhi ( can I call u that as I have a friend named Suhana and I call her the same )
Yipeee me first me dancing
U truly justify the titleDESTINY RULES
This part explained the delimma of loosing a loved ones brilliantly
Hope geet is fine
Loved the way u created the atmosphere of longings
I could connect with the emotions of Maan very easily becoz ur writing acted as a bridge for me
Hope they emerge victorious and the destiny binds them together always
Waiting waiting and waiting
Love aanya

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