THE LOCKET (2) MG FF, thread 3 link pg 1 COMPLETED - Page 25

Originally posted by: palindrome

Hey avi..

I don't know why but today I read all the five chapters including prologue once again and I am glad that I did it because I was able to connect everything ...and Now I am understanding the "misunderstanding" maan is suffering from and I would see and enjoy how this is going to be solved by you..Though I am not in hurry to solve it..you can take your own time...😊

I loved both the chapters 4 and 5 as well as the music selection...Both the songs are perfectly chosen by you..If i were at your place,i would have chosen "Mere piya ghar aya oh raam ji.."for chapter 4🤣I am sorry ..I am still in "life partner" mood and thats the other reason,i don't want to touch "parent" now..I am gonna make that story a comedy too...😛

I liked maan's transformation from "love sick puppy" to strict "employer" in chapter 5.I always wonder how do you manage to tell about a character so much in one chapter itself ..

There was stupid grin on my face when maan started yelling at his employees for their useless activities..Common dude,you were worse than them..You were day-dreaming about a dance with your lady love...🤣

Beautifully written chapter,avi...

waiting for more...

Hope you are well now...Take care...🤗

Originally posted by: dumas

LOVED THE UPDATE MAAN LOST THINKING ABOUT GEET AND HIM DANCING SO SWEET AND HIS TEAM NOT TAKING HIM ON BECAUSE HE IS YOUNG BAD MISTAKE LOVED HOW HE SPOKE TO THEM THEY HAVE TO KNOW WHO IS IN CHARGE THANKS FOR THE PM LOVED THE UPDATE

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Sooper Dooper Update Avi 👏
Haaye mera Maan
Loved the Song 😳
Raat Kali ek khwab me aayi aur gale ka haar hui 😉
Awesome Work avi 😃
Waiting for next 😊

Congratulations to Aashu for 30,000 posts...

For you it had to be Maan, of course...

Originally posted by: punam2712

Congratulations to Aashu for 30,000 posts...

🥳

For you it had to be Maan, of course...

Even though I had written another character I changed the update for you..🤗

AASHU CONGRATS FOR THE 30000 POSTS

WELL DONE AND KEEP IT UP

AS A TREAT THINK OF A NEW STORY ON YOUR HEART THROB - MAAN