MG SS:mommy daddy's tale part 2 page 15 april 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hii...

this is a new short story that made me think for six months whether to post or not..

its just my point of view for a common theme.. i hope readers will like it

still searching for name...


This SS is specially for summer and specially for valli di and deepa di ..


sorry di's my previous note hurt you both and i was kind of very very rude i know...

do tell me your reviews..

SUHAANA





*** will update this SS every saturday ...***



lines by nishu di

baccho ne di dastak
ab unko thi sunaani
unke hi mummy papa ki kahaani

bacch soch rahe the jisse
pari aur rajkumar ki kahaani
woh tho
do shetaano ki thi jung puraani
jinhe chahiye thi ,har woh ek chij
jo dusre ne apni thi maani

aisa nahi tha
ke woh jalte the ek dur se
par pyaar hi unka kuch aisa tha ke
ke khushi hi nahi
gam bhi saath chalte the dono ke

woh dono saathi puraane the
unke kisse
iss duniya se begaane the
woh dono saath the
bas yahi baat unke liye
saare maayene(belive) the

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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 1 PAGE 1
PART 2 PAGE 15

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MR AND MRS MAAN SINGH KHURANA


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PART 1

Bright sunrays were falling in the big and enormous room ..velvety soft curtains .. soft cool breeze flowing trying to wake the two busy and sleepy souls… a soft hand was holding his arm ..While his hand was securely wrapped around his waist … she was awake but still trying to get some sleep.. well this was what she daily does… their legs inter wind .. she snuggled closer to him and he with much love pulled her closer…

Their sheet was just on her partially covering him but the still they were looking so much in love … signs of passion were obvious on her neck and his shoulders..Well not to forget she was such a tigress..he thought to himself…leaning himself closer to her ..He kissed her softly on her forehead she smiled ..making her eyes to flutter to open..while he proceeded to love her more carnally…his lips touched her eyes asking them to open..while she was so adamant even to open her eyes… he moved lower to her cute perky nose ..well it is always red in anger but still it was the most helpful for him she he knew about her mood.. not to forget temper . her humor , her frame of mind.. the doldrums..everything about her..she bit her cheeks in order to stop herself from smiling..she was finding it difficult to hold herself and see his patience which was about to burst any moment… his hands to her waist ..squeezing a bit making her to stiffen her moan that was coming deep from her heart ..she knew that he husband is a devil and she ..she was no less than the mini devil herself..after all she is his wife… THE DD's wife…

As he kissed her cheeks..biting a little..she twitched her brows a little knowing that the next were her lips but the next moment she found her handsome husband ..standing in his signature vest and tracks.. Preparing to go somewhere…

She quickly looked at him and she knew that where he must be proceeding …. She turned a little keeping her hand on her head ..tying the sheet around her ..she wanted to sleep some time more but now it seems that the coming events will be much interesting …

Geet looked at her ever handsome husband..looking or something ..but obviously he was not finding it ,.. she tried to tried what he must be looking at and wanted to help him but the next moment she shrugged off the thought thinking that its better to let him do what he wants…

Maan looked at the time ..he quickly turned to go but when he heard her giggle he knew that his wife was a mischievous brat but the thing was that he couldn't even do anything of that as they were married …..

Maan looked at her and made a face…

Maan: why are you laughing geet don't you have any good thing to do in the morning and why are you still in bed ..get up you lazy head .. I cant believe that you are so relaxed even after knowing that how much she was tensed last night …

Geet looked at her husband in such a great respect and admiration that was oozing from his personality … no doubt he was the best husband ..a great son and undoubtedly an awesome father for her daughter and son…

Geet sat and looked at maan..she knew that he was so much tensed about his little angel who was no little anymore but still she was maan's little baby…

Geet tried to calm her husband…

Geet: maan relax you know she is fine I just had checked her at night ..and made her sleep at three..she was continuously studying .. I made her understand that the exam gonna be fine and know our diya must be sleeping ….

Well how can maan be quiet when he was still stressed for his little princess he had seen the tension written all over her face ..though it was mid terms but still she was in class ten and was appearing for boards .. he was proud of his daughter that she was just thirteen and doing exceptionally well but still she cant take stress ..she was schizophrenia… it is a mental sickness that results in sometimes Severe anxiety Paranoia Displaying stress Sudden mood changes Suicidal thoughts Depressed feeling Irritability or anger Hypersensitivity to others' criticism Little energy or motivation Appearing desireless, feeling nothing at all.. though diya isn't having all the symptoms but still a father's heart is not ready to let his baby drown in a pool of misery.. but if she had this disorder then she was also gifted with brains that made her to jump two classes higher ..she was in the same class as her big brother geet's sweetheart ..her little boy though he was not little but still he is still his mumma's boy ready to take a fight for her discomfort …. PARTH MAAN SINGH KHURANA …

Maan : but you know that she was stressed and what can happen ..leave it geet I am going to her .. sometimes I think that we did a mistake by letting her do what she wanted .. I don't have to look at your puppy faces when you asked me for diya's educational level change.. look this is the result..he said with a visible frown…

Geet nodded her head in a known disbelief murmuring " you cannot change at all.." smiling all the way…

Geet : possessive dad…

Maan opened the door slightly and looked at his baby into her books… he can say that she hardly had slept … maan looked at her slight red eyes… and her messy hair..she was looking just like her mother like his geet used to be but there was a difference his daughter was much pretty and intelligent and yes less annoying too…

Maan sat beside her and took her specs from her eyes..massaging her head little she kept her head in his lap closing her head ..

Diya: daddy I prepared all and did revision that too two times.. I wont flunk …

Maan smiled a little ..this fear that she wont do well or she would fail was always there in her but the next moments he always scores more than what is expected … she was always the best just like him .. and would never let her daddy down…

Maan: you didn't slept sweety you know rest is must for a good exam .. now take some sleep..i am here with you …

Diya nodded in a no but she was still keeping her eyes closed … it was six in the morning and she was to go at nine… so she had at least two hours for rest….

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It was twelve when two teenagers glaring at each other came in the mansion.. obviously both were in their school uniform… bickering at each other …

Girl: I just hate you .. I don't wanna talk to you.. you are so bad.. you donkey.. no a big chimpanzee .. daadi..she yelled.. she was stressed.. annoyed … he tried to hold her hand but she jerked with all her strength…

Guy: ahh… you wild cat … you are not any flower you know … that you are pushing me.. it hurts .. look how rude you are.. billi kahin ki…

Girl: Bandar kahin ka…

Well well they were none other than diya and her best friend dhruv .. they were in the same school but not in the same class.. dhruv one year senior and three year older than diya..

( remember diya is just thirteen..)

Small shiny pearls gathered in her eyes which didn't go unnoticed by dhruv and he knew that he di a big blunder he made his princess cry… but the next moment she was in his arms ..she was fretting hitting him and he took her to the hall where her daadi and par daadi..( badi daadi) were there…

Dhruv: ahh..stop hitting me billi… daadi… bachao bachao…

Well avantika maan's mother looked at two she still cant believe that the were best friends ..dhruv was maan's friend karan's son and was diya's annoying friend that's he calls him…

Dhruv made diya sit on the big dinning table..and saw the two daadi's coming towards them….

Diya quicky get off the dining table and hugged her badi daadi and daadi blabbering all about the day her exam that was mindblowing for her …

Later after some minutes both were sitting in the kitchen ..eating pasta .. diya's favorite .. with their daadi… when diya asked..

Diya: daadi best friend's don't fight tell him… have you ever seen mama and daddy fighting ..they were best friends.. and look at you .. you always need a reason to pick up fight..

Diya sweetly cribbed… while setting her specs…

Avantika: diya .. beta .. don't say that.. you know your mama daddy were biggest enemies… they don't even need any reason to fight ..

Avantika told them while their mouth were opened with shock..

Diya /dhruv: sachhi daadi…

Avantika nodded…

Diya: daadi I want to know.please batao na…

Avantika.. looked at them..both were looking at her like she was going to recite any fairy tale but this was much much better than any fairy tale…

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NEXT: meet the biggest enemies..

GEET HANDA ( 3 years)

MAAN SINGH KHURANA ( 5 years)




finally typed it..


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Posted: 12 years ago
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as i m first
first time on your ff
so its call for party😉😆😆

yipeee

dhinkcha dhinkchak
de tallli👏👏👏

update par comment bhi dti hi😉
Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

as i m first

first time on your ff
so its call for party😉😆😆

yipeee

dhinkcha dhinkchak
de tallli👏👏👏

update par comment bhi dti hi😉




yieee congratsss diii..

but u didnt say a word abt update was it that bad di😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was such a cute ss
maaneet having a daughter and son in teens
diya and dhruv are all st to learn about maaneet story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi dear



okkk
so commnt time
story seems wow
cranky type


two hot and spoil kids ready to fight without even start😉😆😆
ek in yaad aayi inke liye

tere bin naa jee sakege hum
aur
tere sang to jee hi nahi sakte hum


agar tum dur gaye
to dukh se mar jaayge hum
aur
agar tum paas aay toh
khushi se mar jaayg hum
agar marna hi hai
to kyu na tujhe maar kar mar jaay hum😉

this few in for my naughty maaneet
ready to gi kinder garden😆
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Originally posted by: suhaaana




yieee congratsss diii..

but u didnt say a word abt update was it that bad di😭


shut up
you idiot

upper meri party cha rahi thi

fisrt time first aayi thi😆😆

and didn't you read last line
comment aa raha tha😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@nishu di
DI TITLE SUGGEST KARO NA

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