MG SS:mommy daddy's tale part 2 page 15 april 6 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
1 nd 3rd ache h di inme se choose karti hun
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
if its first one
than here are feww lines
for your prologue



baccho ne di dastak
ab unko thi sunaani
unke hi mummy papa ki kahaani

bacch soch rahe the jisse
pari aur rajkumar ki kahaani
woh tho
do shetaano ki thi jung puraani
jinhe chahiye thi ,har woh ek chij
jo dusre ne apni thi maani

aisa nahi tha
ke woh jalte the ek dur se
par pyaar hi unka kuch aisa tha ke
ke khushi hi nahi
gam bhi saath chalte the dono ke

woh dono saathi puraane the
unke kisse
iss duniya se begaane the
woh dono saath the
bas yahi baat unke liye
saare maayene(belive) the


hope you like it
Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Wow !! lovely start 😊 so cutee & diya is so studious , ll love to read maaneet fight tale 👍🏼 ll be waitng
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

see upper dear😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

if its first one

than here are feww lines
for your prologue



baccho ne di dastak
ab unko thi sunaani
unke hi mummy papa ki kahaani

bacch soch rahe the jisse
pari aur rajkumar ki kahaani
woh tho
do shetaano ki thi jung puraani
jinhe chahiye thi ,har woh ek chij
jo dusre ne apni thi maani

aisa nahi tha
ke woh jalte the ek dur se
par pyaar hi unka kuch aisa tha ke
ke khushi hi nahi
gam bhi saath chalte the dono ke

woh dono saathi puraane the
unke kisse
iss duniya se begaane the
woh dono saath the
bas yahi baat unke liye
saare maayene(belive) the


hope you like it



di title koi bhi ho lines perfect hai...



let me include these
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

ok

here are few option

1) maaneet ki kahaani ,mummy ki zubaani

2) bachpan se jawaani

3) shuru hone ko hai

hope you like them




di title dekho...


aur batao suit kiya ki nahi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: .bloom.

Wow !! lovely start 😊 so cutee & diya is so studious , ll love to read maaneet fight tale 👍🏼 ll be waitng



thanksss
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
awesome
lv the first part so cute
want mre
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
very sweet and cute update..cant wait for maaneet story .pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
awesome nd sweet one
maan is possessive dadda
nd diya is brilliant in her studies
want to know about maaneet past where they were best friends cum enemies

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