If Only You Saw Me (7) - Page 102

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

awesome update dear

like is not working sorry
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear


Originally posted by: Madhuri

Lovely part dear

Ranbir & zara's love story set ho gayi
Aysh & anaya's love story set ho gayi
Ab ye maan & geet ki kab hogi
Kitne slow hai dono
Loved G busting maan every now and then
cont soon



Thank you for your comments! Pleased to know you liked the chapter! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

gr8 update yar!!!!!

awesome...
i luved geet's writings...also his hesitation to praise her and g's teasing all were awesome!!!!!!!
i hope now maan will make a move in expressing his feelings openly fering that she may leave...


Thank you! Glad you liked the chapter and the poems! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saf24

Fab update. Loved every bit of it especially Maan's reachtion when he sees Geet and Anaya by the door and his attempt to compliment her later in private. Looking forward to what is in store next.


Thank you! Maan couldn't have been able to hold himself together, right? 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

awesome update

maan's mom health is going well

arjun proposing zara

ayush & ananya relationship is growing

that must be embarrassing for maaneet to catch them kissing


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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ramyayuppy

awesome blossom update
i jus luved it
the party is a pure bliss
ranbir proposed zara 😳
in luv wid cute n naughty lovey dovey couple 😳 anaya n ayush ❤️
now waiting for the shy couple to move their relation forward 😳
but i agree there is a lot of improvement in maaneet 😳 they tend to be way more comfortable around each other 😳❤️


Glad you liked it! Thank you! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
i should comment.!! xD


update was awesome.!! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13

It was?

Indeed It was ... there was love in the air whether be it family bonding, friendship getting stronger, Proposals, acceptance of feelings or else plain PDA... ❤️

I totally get what you're trying to say because I've always related Maan to HR myself. The scene where I feel these two resembled the most is the Laung Da Lashkara part where they're on the cycle. 😳

Hmm ... Good thatv you got I was trying to say there.. 😊 Laung Da Lashkara was so good one... Embarrassed

I was about to highlight the parts I loved in this paragraph of yours and then found out that it's the whole of it! Very well-said, Onir! Time doesn't decide how deep a bond goes. Where it can take years to come to talking terms, it can take just a few moments to form the deepest of bonds. Very well-put! 👏

Embarrassed Yup I completely agree on it. Thanks.

Ranbir is way too different from this shy Maan to have to think before complimenting a girl. 😆 Yes, Geet wants to know how Maan likes her but she still hasn't given much thought to why she wants to know it. As for Jess, yayy! Maan is free, free, free! 😆 (It sounded like 3 idiots wala scene! 😆)

3 idiots ka dialogue & the context in which it was used was hillarious. 😆

Tortoise Maan doesn't want to keep standing in the shadows all the time. 😉

True, words - however little they are - sometimes hold a lot more importance than we can think...

Words have power to both make or break bonds...

Thank God it wasn't OTT! I don't have any experience with proposals you see, so I wasn't sure about it. 😆

@Underlined: Now that is a minute observation! 😊

Ya ya I know you don't have experience with proposals... Bholi bhali Mayyo... 😉

Thanks for it... 😊

I hope! 😆

Jyada has mat daant dikha dikha kar... 😡 (I missed using this line...😆)

Ahh, yes, the diary had to come back to actually show Geet's thinking processes which she doesn't share with anyone at all.

Glad you liked the poems. They were meant to be a recollection of memories and somewhat a description of how she sees Maan. 😊

I loved the enteries in the diary as well as the poems... Clap

Yes you have told me about your liking of the language. 😊

Wow! I wouldn't have taken such a deep meaning to that line! I love the way you throw light on things the way I won't normally see. 👏

Yes, all she needs to do is admit to herself and to Maan. But will she, before she has to leave?

I love this language... Also I'm glad you like & don't mind me blabbering away about the minute details... Embarrassed

I hope she does admit & accept it before she leaves... 😊I'm scared of the end too. And even more nervous now, about how the story's going to move forward. 😕

Will wait for you to shape it & present it as you've perceived it... 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
THAP THAP THAP!!!
New part or new thread... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

THAP THAP THAP!!!

New part or new thread... 😊

Or both...😆

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