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Posted: 12 years ago
So maan is taking geet for shopping.want to see geet's skill in shopping.waiting for nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting...😛😛😛😛😛😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum teaser
Maan taking Geet to shopping
Surly Geet will irritate Maan with her antics during shopping
Waiting fr update Dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it
just cant wait to read the updsate so
update soon
no prob dear jab lappy theek ho jaye kar dena tab but ki karen control hi nai honda hai
to tussi jaldi jaldi update karo
babaji jaldi lappy theek kardo plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice teaser...
maan taking geet for shopping but geet was not happy to spend khurana's money...
waiting for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan kitana datata hain bechari Geet ko... Hope ur lappy will be good soon & we will get updates ki baarish..😉
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Posted: 12 years ago


Nice teaser...Waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome teaser...hahahahahaha krishna jee bata do geet ko ki ye MSK hai jisse sivaye daatne aur gussa karne ke aur kuch nahi aata aur jo kuch bhi acha hona chahiye vo tho bas ab geet hi sikhayegi unhe😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
osum tsr dear
hahhahah
so she dont wann spend his money
and he is thinking tht she is speaking to car roof
amazing dear😉
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago




Chapter 7

Maan friends group
Adi
raj
Sameera
Maan family
Dadi
Randeep madhu - maan parents
Meera and dev - maan brother
Annie vicky - maan cousin

Geet family
Raj deepali - geet parents

Next day maan and geet went to college.. geet is little uncomfortable with maan as after her admission he directly took her to a mall for shopping.. he was reluctant but randeep ordered him to take geet for shopping of books and dresses and other necessity as college is supposed to be open in 3 days.. this is not a big deal to admitted her in college as her aggregate is 95 percent efficient for her course of B.com (hons).. she wants to be teacher.

"Maan jii there is no need shopping we purchased books naa.. I have many dresses" geet spoke uncomfortably.

"Geet this is dad order or if I don't want to throw out in outhouse I have to follow it.. so it's better if you keep quiet and argue with dad when he come back" maan spoke little rudely.

"Here I am taking her for shopping and she is showing me antics" maan thought and glance toward geet from corner of eye.

"Kaisa admi hai Krishna jii.. jab dekho daata rahta hai.. samjhte hi nahi hai ki mujhe comfortable feel nahi hu raha inke money spend karte hui" geet murmured.

"Geet!! What are you blabbering with car roof" maan asked sheepishly and geet startled in her action.

"Kuch nahi dekho kuch nahi.. vo tu apki car ki roof badi achi naa tu" geet blabbering what is coming in her mouth and peep to see maan expression.. which are her to be keep quite.. he is irritated to the core.

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Geet is amazed to see the beauty of the mall.. her inner child is jumping right now.. she is almost prisoner in her own house before and only had permission to go school only.. this 3rd or 4th time she came in some mall but that was not big like this one.

She hold maan hand to see all typical ways and all labyrinth ways of the mall.. maan shook his head and wrapped his one strong arm around her thin structure.. and escort her in one of the famous boutique of the Delhi.

Geet smiled to saw all beautiful and colorful dress specially.. stone work attract her so much..

"Geet you choose.. I have to make some calls" maan spoke and left to the corner.

Geet went with sales girl and check out dresses but all are above 20000 range which made her worried.. so she decide that not buy anything from here..

"Maan jii there is nothing good.. can we go somewhere else" geet spoke hesitatingly.

Maan saw her with shocked eye she is denying to the best shop Delhi may be this is not her taste so he took her .. again more expensive shop and she again denied..

"Listen geet!!! You come here with mom or annie.. I can't do this more" maan spoke after controlling his anger.. but he was irritated to the core.. some time he felt she is a kid and sometime he felt she is most cunning person on the earth.. and believing on her getting most difficult for maan day by day.

She is enigma for him.

Maan and geet is returning but annie favorite boutique caught maan attention so he decied to take geet there for shopping.

"Come geet this is one of the most best boutique in india" maan said geniusly.

Geet gulped her salvia one more expensive place now what will she do?

Geet again rejected everything when her eye went on price tag and now maan is furious on her, beyond limits. He silently pulled her out from the shop and with a jerk pinned to the car door and watched her struggling form with rage eye.

"Stop it!! Are you some princess or what? What do you want for simple college outing, you girl I seriously don't understand you, go to hell damn, next time just tell to my dad, not to send you with me as I didn't had patience to bear your tantrums and antics" maan spike all this in rage and geet eye starts to pour like tap.

Maan just left her with a jerk, and sat in the car and wait for her to sit in, after geet sat in his car zoomed for khurana mansion.

"Why am I so angry damn? Here I spend 2 hours only for her shopping but mandam ko tu kuch up to stand hi nahi laga, girls are impossible specially who live without spine, damn with her why I am bother? It's her life" maan thought and changed gare from 3 to 4.

Geet is just sobbing and sobbing but maan didn't bother to look even once toward her but her every hiccups adding fuel in his anger.

Maan cell ringed

"I am just coming damn it have some patience ok, yaa I know that operation is went wrong, hmm call dr. Sharam for now" maan shouts on top of his lungs made geet more scared.

When he went out for do a call his assistant told him about one of his junior patient that time situation seem to be under control but again one call in boutique made him furious and geet become a morsel of his anger.

(My khados doctor is really talented but always react like that which I hate about him ;) i become many time his anger mosrel)

Maan left geet on km gate and zoomed off to hospital and geet entered in km while wiping her tears which is noticed by meera as all come back now, even maan's dadi is also backed with them and little bit confused to see a unknown girl in km as still no body tell her about anything.

Geet directly went into her room without even noticing that all are back so meera made her way to geet room to see what happened to her as from nakul she knew that geet went with maan bhai for admission only.

"Geet what happened dear" meera asked to see her lying on the bed on her stomach.

Geet startled and wiped her tears and faced meera with a smile.

"Noting dii, just like that" geet tried to dismiss tuis topic which meera understand and thought to tell dad about this as he will console geet better than her.

They both chatted sometime and geet told her about her admission and show her all books and both covered book with new plastic cover.

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When maan dad come in night meera told him about geet and dadi also called him to comfort him as madhu told her detail but still dadi first wants to talked with randeep before going to conclusion about this matter, so first randeep decided to go in his maa and maan dadi room.

"Randeep!! Will you explain about your this act, how can you just take responsibility of a young beautiful girl, koi ucche niche hu gayi tu responsible kon hoga tell me" Dadi is really angry she is not against to help others but to keep someone in your own house or in such a sensitive Matter made her furious on her son.

"Maa!! How are you" randeep spoke calmly and sat near her.

"Randeep!! First answer me"

"First of all maa she is just like annie for me, if something bad happened with annie so jo uska responsible hoga vo hi geet ka bhi hoga"

But randeep cut by savitri devi again

"Shut up and for Annie nobody come for asking questions but for geet, we will always a strangers" dadi eye turned red in anger.

"Sadly maa for her also no body come and ask even if she will die also, I didn't know what happened to my old friend but he did a favour on us, how can you forget that and I am just returning that to him" randeep spoke adamantly.

"Randeep!! I am not denying of helping her but aise ghar mai or take her whole responsibility is beyond my understanding" Dadi sighed this time to see her stubborn son.

"Maa she is mine responsibility and I am not understanding why you guys not seeing a innocent 16 yr old girl who is going to be live like a orphan when her parents are perfectly fine, I don't want to discuss this anymore, she is my daughter same like annie" Randeep just finished this conversation as this is not going anywhere but he knew his family except geet soon but every change take some time to be digest.

After sometime Randeep called geet in his study

Geet knocked on the door slightly and went inside after randeep called

"Sit geet"

Geet sat on the chair and watched randeep for continue.

"Tell me what happened in afternoon, why was you crying? Maan said something or anything else but remember only truth" Randeep asked in really a fatherly tone, his tone is explaining worry about yet firm for truth.

"VO.. vo, nothing just something went in my eye" geet lied with down cast eye as she doesn't want any tiff between maan and him because of her.

"geettt when you lied naa, you stammered and don't forget, I am advocate" randeep spoke with a smile and rolled paper weight which is lying on table.

Now geet is in fixed, Randeep is clever.

"vo I am sorry, vo in mall I didn't buy any dress so maan jii is irritated with me and I just start cried, unki koi galti nahi hai (there is no mistake of him) don't throw him out of the house please" she almost pleaded, she remembered how maan said that randeep will throw him out.

Randeep smiled but understand from where this last line comes, he knew his son very well.

"Ok nahi scold karuga but tell me why didn't you buy anything and truth ok" Randeep showed him her eye but there is really an affection in his every action which is making geet comfortable.

"vo they are so costly and I don't want a burden on you all, I have many clothes uncle jii" this time geet said only truth with down cast eye but randeep understand her turmoil.

"come with me" randeep spoke and took her to near a shelf of his files and give her a file.

Geet frowned and watched Randeep in confusion.

"see this. This is your bank statement, I made transfer your account here and made your father to deposit at least a sufficient amount for you life now you now need anyone financial support at the time of hearing I will demand a house in your name also to secure your future geet, my intention is only to make you independent but not depend, I stopped you here because this is necessary for every teenage girl 'a emotional support' family, not to made you independent ok, if you are spending money that is your own money dear so next time, I don't want such behavior ok and this is your family just one time open your heart and embrace all of us" Randeep tried to open up to geet in easy words so she will understand.

But one more soul just come when geet come inside and heard all of their conversation and again a smile come on his lips and a guilt in his eye to scold her like that, this is MSK who comes to meet his dad but stopped to see geet.

Precap: geet parents divorce and she broke down.

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