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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: amreenshameem

Hmmm just curious kisne yeh rule banaya ke bhoot door se nai aa sakte..
Geet bhi geet hai



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hehehhe singh mera new note read kar for 18+ chap

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oye Babiee tujhay kya hua😆
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THANK YOU SO MUCH

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NOTE REGARDING THIS SS

MANY WANTS TO KNOW ABOUT MAAN PAST IN DETAIL BUT I WANT NOT TO GIVE THAT BORING DETAIL IF YOU STILL WANT THAN I WILL THAT PORTION ALSO.


FEW THING CLEAR

1. THERE WAS A CYLINDER BLAST

2. outhouse had many people that time and to recognize which skeleton is whom is impossible only and all took this as accident no body in the situation of investigation.

3. some ask why maan is still friend with sameera.. maan never know her reality and for maan she is little cunning and he took this normal behavior.

4. sameera is doc with maan than what is the connection of her personal life... nothing what is she doing in her personal life is belong to her only.


if you still have question ask me in the comments



Chapter 6

Maan friends group
Adi
raj
Sameera
Maan family
Dadi
Randeep madhu - maan parents
Meera and dev - maan brother
Annie vicky - maan cousin

Geet family
Raj deepali - geet parents

At night near 1:00 am in km

Geet opened her eye inside comforter after hear some voice from her room attracted balcony.. she gulped her salvia in fear and tried to ignore and shut all sound.. but again

Tak tak tak

Now this is a big blown of her whole self courage.. she hurriedly sat on the bed and tried to see some ghost with two big horn and big teeth in the balcony and for her extra ordinarily imagination she saw something which made her run like a tornado..

"Mere ko inke haathu se marna majur hai krishna jii ..mager usse bade bade sing or daat wale bhoot se nahi.. kya karege daat lege naa tu daat nai du ..jaan hai tu jhaan hai(I will prefer to die with that known dusht danav hands instead of this unknown ghost)" geet murmured all Krishna jii names till she reached on maan's room gate.

Geet knock on maan gate with lots of hesitation.. this is first time she is going in some man room in night.. not only man but mostly an unknown man but her fear made her helpless.. she knock little louder this time this is mid night off course every normal person is in dreamland at this time.. but maan is in his study and reading a new patient file.. when he heard a faint knock on his bedroom door.. he come to his room from his study and left file on the bed And opened the door with a frown as who is this at this time.. not even servant is here..

"Geet" maan whispered his thought again went to his assumption on geet.. he is little angry to see her here in night suit.. his mind only thinking about the witches who forced themselves on him and tried to take advantage.

"Can I sleep here with you" geet spoke innocently.. but she didn't had any idea how maan will take her every word here at this time..

maan is taking every word with his maturity level and experience

But other side geet is totally unaware of everything.. she is just 16 yr old girl who just struggled and suffered her whole life for a lovely word.. she is from england but her nani maa protect her innocence till the date she was alive.. geet is a introvert girl who don't make many friends just admire others from far.. so she is aloof from every physical relationships.. her nanimaa told her that now she have to save herself from unknown men.. this is not good to go with them or talk with them when you are young and big girl and maan physical appearance scared this poor little tamed girl.. who is living her life without a back bone of self pride.. and courage.. but sometime.. time ditched us.

Maan eye are full of red and his jaw is clutching.. geet took 2 step back to saw him.. his gesture telling him that he is angry with her.. "Maybe he doesn't want to share his room with me".. but she didn't had any courage to go back in her dark room also.

"Please!!! I never snore and will adjust myself on couch.. I will not disturb you promise" she spoke meekly and peep little to saw his face and to see him quite she again try to convince him.

"Mere room mai bhoot hai.. mere ko darr lagta hai.. aur koi hai bhi nahi ghar mai.. please take me in with you" she spoke like a kid her eye starts to leaked.. she is really scared and even go back to in that scary room making her stomach knotted in fear.

"O god what were I thought about her? But this was not my mistake every decent man will think like that but thanks to my star I didn't scold her or else I wil be in guilt.. well leave all this maan or now concentrate on this cartoon channel" maan thought and smirked.. but thought to clear his doubt first.

"Then how you lived in your house if you are so scared from your so called ghosts" maan asked and his hand on his waist.

"There was no window in my room and naa hii scary balcony" geet spoke and crunched her nose her throat is chocked and maan rolled his eye to see her how will she live her life in furture with her so much scared nature.

"ohh tu bhootu ko aane ko window lagti hai kya" maan asked with a smirked.

geet innocently nodded her head.

"haa.. bhoot door se nahi aa sakte aisa rule hai" geet spoke seriously.. her eye are widen like they will drop on floor any moment and expression can make anybody laughed.

She is wearing a 2 pic pink silk night suit which is almost plane only some stone logo near her small right breast.. a teddy is in her hand maybe for encouragement to come in his from this dark valley.. her feet are bare as she forget to wear slipper just run out from the room some tendrils are playing on her forehead and near her eye.. she is indeed a young newly blossom flower with a eye catchy attraction.. in 2 days maan first time find her cute.

Maan stand there and his hand folded on his firm chest..

"Who told you this so called ghostology" maan asked with rolled eye.

"Nanimaa!! She said to me I can sleep without any fear ghost can't come from door.. they use window just like we used door naa" geet tried to knock some her knowledge in maan brain.

"Maan let her in or else you will do phd in ghost today only" maan thought with reluctant.

"Come inside.. sleep with close mouth" maan spoke with attitude.

"Dusht kahi kaa attitude tu ghost wala hi hai" geet cant able to stop herself from murmur some cruse as maan had a positive aroma around her.. which is given her courage of blabbering and feeling of security.

Geet start to set herself on couch.. without even wait of maan.. she is scared that maan will throw out her so she want to sleep soon so he will not able to do this.. her whole life experience is not so good .. everyone only know how to threw her out from their life without telling her mistake so her behavior is obvious.

"Geet waha couch per nahi" maan spoke befor he complete it .. geet starts to set herself on floor to made maan shocked to the core .. "this girl is very well known how to get on my nervous".

"Maybe he is thinking.. I am not worth of sleeping his couch geet sleep before he throw out you in dark scary mansion" she thought and starts to put her bed on floor hurriedly.

"Geet what are doing girl?.. go and sleep on bed" maan spoke with gritted teeth.. stand her by her elbow.

Geet saw him in confused status.. this man always confused her.. she knew he hates her but other side he always care for her now also.. "is he having personality disorder" she thought almost with pity face for maan.

She left and lay on bed other side maan took his file and settle himself on couch with his one eye on geet to see if is she comfortable or not.

"Kaisa admi hai krishna jii madat bhi karra hai or attitude bhi dikhata hai chode geet so jaa jaldi se inka koi bharosa nahi hai" geet murmured and closed her eye while her hand is wrapped around her teddy and bed cover is covering her till her waist in one word she is like some Barbie.

In night maan saw geet is in deep slumber and her bed cover is on the floor and she herself cuddled like a kid well she is indeed a kid only.. maan took cover and covered her till her shoulder and left to sleep on couch.. they have to go tomorrow Vicky college also for her admission here.. his dad told him to take care of this till than he will take care of her citizenship as geet father is still had Indian citizenship so there is only little paper work for make geet citizen of india.. than right after one month there is date of geet parents divorce so she has to face that also.

Now this is Vicky responsibility to take care of her just like annie and the big worry of randeep is geet tamed nature.. hope things changed for good now on and this is little thrashed Barbie will get her happiness in this new life.

Word: 1500




plz my all reader read it

Precap: 2 yr leap and sameera plan to get maan.

Thanks for all like and comment I am so happy even my this new work also near 250 likes hope now my like increase with comment also as many new reader join my mature chap group on fb.

Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
read ur story just now u r simply a awesome writer👏 . feeling bad for geet it would be so painful for her to see her parents separating in front of her😡 .hate her good for nothing parents 😡.i actually hated maan for his prejudiced behavior with geet but u made me love him all over again when he talked with geet sweetly😳and showed his caring nature . i really hope to see maaneet together soon loved meera and maans dad too . get geet out of this depression.plzz update soon me waiting so i have more story to stalk everyday😆 . add me in ur pm list 😃love aanya
Edited by aanya84 - 12 years ago
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wowww awesome mindblowing update yar,loved it a lot.
Geet is sooo cute.
Maan is Janu ...hehehehehe
Edited by sona-rai - 12 years ago
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nice part
geet scared and went to maan's room
ghostology 😆
geet thinks maan has personality disorder😆
continue soon
Edited by valli30 - 12 years ago
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😭why like is not working
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🤣 ghostology.. wah Mohi that was hilarious 😛 bhoot doesnt use door aisa rule hai 🤣 bechare Maan
Precap... is s***** ki toh...

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