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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome,amazing part
loved it
so much thing happening in this part
maan already falling for geet where geet is slowly slowly falling for him...
she felt jealous if any other girls even talk with him
loved maaneet moments
maan saved geet two times
maan came to know little about geet
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079



oye next update kab milega wo to bol


when i got time sweety
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Posted: 12 years ago
I dont know how I missed latest update
Wowww so maan is enjoying geet company
Wahh kya stunt maara maan nai
Chudil sameera
Yaar ye sameera tu geet serial mai thi bhi nahi tab bhi sab mutually hate herhehhehehheheheh that is called maneetian heart I hate her tooo chudial hai

Your update is cute
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: BULBUL.A

I dont know how I missed latest update
Wowww so maan is enjoying geet company
Wahh kya stunt maara maan nai
Chudil sameera
Yaar ye sameera tu geet serial mai thi bhi nahi tab bhi sab mutually hate herhehhehehheheheh that is called maneetian heart I hate her tooo chudial hai

Your update is cute



all are hating her bcoz she is soppposed to playing vamp in the show... So all are only waiting...but she didnt came... Uski jagah vikram pata nahi kaha se tapak pada Lolzzz
Edited by richadhami - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: richadhami



all are hating her bcoz she is soppposed to playing vamp in the show... So all are only waiting...but she didnt came... Uski jagah vikram pata nahi kaha se tapak pada Lolzzz




Right dear I also want to see sameera track instead of that crap vikram end mai show ki band baja dii thi serial walo nai
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG thank god Maan cum There n save Geet
awesome yet scary update
waiting for next continue soon



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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm loving dis.

Its superbly awesum.
Conti soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 3
nice...
this Dev is so shameless and Sameera too...
poor Geet...
is Maan really an accountant?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART - 4

BOTH were looking smoking desirable in their wet attire,that every eye on the pool capturing both only. Maan less bother on the girls drooled over him,but how he can avoid men lusty gaze on Geet. He removed his jacket and coverd her immediately.

'Geet lets go',Maan glared all and took her along with him outside.

Maan and Geet both came her in her car,so he drove and moved to her place. Both stay silent but when he stopped,Geet offered him to came inside. Maan denied and wants to go to his place.

'ok then take my car.',Geet wants him to change as quickly as possible.

Maan chuckled. 'soch lo? What if i stole it?' he mock.

Geet take a pause,'in that case i have to buy new one.',she ans simply with a smile,showing how much trust she had on him,in a short period of time.

Maan smirked and sat behind the wheels again. Geet went inside to change and warm herself. In midnight Maan calls her without any reason,though its not true but he told her this only.

'madam ur car is safe u sleep calmly.',he teased her.

'oh really? Good you told me otherwise i was thinking of doing complaint in nearby PL.', Geet too gave ans in same tone. He laughed at her sence of humor. 'anyways are you ok? I mean i dont know how much time you need to reach to your place or tumhara jacket b mere pas hai.',she showing concerned as she tensed may he not catch the cold.

Maan hearts start thumping joyfully.'dont worry i reached my hotel in 15mins.'

'you are staying in a hotel?',she enquired. He confirmed. 'where? I mean i which hotel?'

'hotel dreamland',he told instantly.

Geet's eyes popped out.'what? Hotel Dreamland. Have you gone mad? Us hotel me to normal room ka fare bhi 15k hai and you staying there.',she burst on him.

'ha wo actually i dont have any idea about Delhi much,as this is not my native place,'Maan mummers fussily.

'ok not to worry,i find some place for you on rent.',Geet assured him.

Maan thanx her and both talked for next two hours.

Geet' bound getting strong with him in just 20days. She talked with him daily on phone beforw both went to sleep. Though she still have a Dev in her mind but Maan succedded in grabbing a spl place in her heart. Few more days passed. Sam get irritate seeing her so this time she made a plan to tortured her. She through a party and invite all staff members including Maaneet. Maan sence her intensions that she is planned something big. He pick up Geet and in whole way he only making her mind that whatever she do,Geet will not overreact and not to loose her patience and control at any cost. Geet nodded like good student but all instructions vanished when they entred in a party hall. All are enjoying there. Sam is only in her wait. As they entred she grab everyone's attention and announced her engagement with Dev. All cheer for them except Geet. Both exchanged rings happily and againg indulge in party mood. Alla are dancing madly. Maan is expacting some kind of this. He looked around and find her missing. Maan get tensed. He placed his hand on his forhead and rubbed with his fingers in tension.

'o god where is she now? Geet kuchh ulta seedha mat karna until i found you.',Maan looking for everywhere,but loudness and dancing mob create more mess for him. But she cant hide from his eyes for long. He found her on the bar counter,gulping drinks one after another. Maan went to her and clenched her wrist to twist her to him. Her eyes were red and dizzy. She was not in herself right now.

'Geet get up we are leaving?',he commands her.

She snatch back her hand and denied to go with him. 'why abi to celebration shuru hua hai,abi kyu...jayenge? Partyyy' she said in a broken voice and gulped one more peg.

Seeing no other option he scooped her forcily,to which Geet start hitting his chest with her small fists,but Maan pay less attention on this. His only motive is too took her out of this.

Maan was about to reach to the exit when Sam stopped him. 'what is this Maan? You both leaving? Abi to congrats bhi nahi kiya or na kuchh liya.',she wants to teased her badly.

Maan's anger towered and he snuggled Geet more to him.' congrats Sameera.thanx for invitation but now we have some other plans.',he said sarcasticaly.

Geet who was not in her concious jumped off his arms and argued with her.'you cheap i wont spare you. You snatch him from me. Why tou do this to me. He is the only happiness in my life or wo b tumne leli...',she babble conti,while drooping tears.

'Geet.,... Geet come her lets go.',once again he clenched her,but she attacking her.

Maan glared Sameera.'tume jo chahiye tha wo mill gaya na now leave my way before i forget that you are a female.',he threat her and Sam stare both. Seeing his anger she leave his way and Maan again scooped her in his strong arms. Geet waving her legs in air,but only for few mins. He placed her in a car and moved to her house.
Maan lifts her and moved upwrds to her room. He placed her on her bed and remove her shoes. After covring her,he turn off the lights and step back little when he found her soft palm gripping his fingers tightly. He slanted his head to glance her. She sat back and stare him with her teary eyes. The panic and pain of lonliness is clearly visible to him. Being an expert he can able to read her mind. He sit near her. She not utter a single word but he knows she needs him most. Maan slipped besides her and snuggled her near his chest
She instantly rounded his waist possesively. Her hold convienced him more. He slipped his fingers in mane of her hairs and caress to sooth her sore. Slowly slowly her lids turn heavy and she slept,but for few moments only. She conti.babbles in her sleep for next unknown hours. His heart ached seeing her state...

New day begins with sun shine. Geet's sleep disturbed and she awake,opening her dizzy eyes. She felt heavy headache.remembring last night she gloomed once again. Her eyes shed tears when she saw a small glass near her face collecting her tear drops. She look upwards and found Maan smiling.

'thanx. But i need few more tears pls shed them for me.'kya hai na main lime juice me salt zada leta hu.',he teased her with smirk.

Geet wiped her tears instantly,'you too making mock of me?(she lowered her head)but not your fault,life itself made me amere piece of mock for everyone.' she turned silent.

Maan felt frustrated and came near her in swift momnt. He cupped her face.'look at me Geet and dont u dare talk to me like this. Stop cribbing and cursing urself. You aint weak ok? Abi tak apni life handle kar rai ho na then why you need him? He dont deserves you. Samjhi tum.'Maan scold her to boost her courage. He wants her to be come out of her shattred state. Geet glance in his fire emitting eyes.

'Geet he never loves you but only using you to get higher rank in KI. If he does then he never move on so easily. Come out of ur trance and face the truth',he added.

She again stat sobbing and Maan freed her. He asked why she crying now?'tum mujhe itni zorse kyu dant rae ho? Aramse b to yai baat bol skte ho. Ek to mera sar dard ho raha hai uparse tum mujhe dante ja rae ho'.

She complaints cutely and Maan glance her amusingly. What she is actually,he asking from himself.

'ok,i m sorry,i know i behave so loud.but tume meri baat samjh aai?'

she nodded and he looked satisfied. He offered lime juice to broke her hangover.

'Maan tum raat bhar yahi the?',she asked him.

Maan nodded and her gaze automatically turn all around.

'hello kuch nai kia maine?',he read her face and felt wiered.

'Tumhara kya bharosa.pehli meeting me kiss kar skte ho to kuchh b kar skte ho',she said without thinking. Maan grinned on her cuteness.

'hmm so u still remember our first kiss,'he raised questioning brow.

'First and last',she said sharply.

'r u sure',he meant about the last.

Maan get more closer to her and his warm breath fanning her lips. She gulped hard and felt as her breat struck in her lungs.

Both glancing each other till her phone broke their moment. Maan leaned back and she sighed. Geet talked for two mins and drop the call.

'maan good news hai',she said innocently.

'itni jaldi?abi tak to maine kuchh kia b nai?',he is best in teasing her.

Geet gave him a deadly glare and he sealed his lips,not with her. 😉

'proceed',Maan only said.

'tumhare liye rented house ka arrangement ho gaya hai. Now go back to hotel and meet me at this address.maine sab discuss kar liya hai abi adhe ghante tak mujhe keys mil jayengi firr tum posession le lena. Now common fast',she orderd him bossily and he chuckled. Maan feeling good watching her normal after last night.

He moved from there to pack his belongings. Both reached to a definate address. It was an old house,not looking cool from any side. Paint of walls had been dig up from many places. Many spider webs are decorated. Walls are moist. Maan gave detest look after scanning all around. Geet noticed too.

'koi baat nai bas thodi der me jagah rehne layak ho jayegi.',she said meekly.

'thodi der matlab 5-6 saal me?',he taunts.

She glared him,'nawabshab agar aap help kar denge to abi kuchh ghanto me hi ho jayegi.'

'tell me kya karu?',Maan asked annoyingly.

She passed him a broom and asked to remove all spider webs. Maan glanced broom shockingly.

'main jhadu maru?',Maan asked weakly.

'nai princeji abi apki naukro ki batalian aayegi ye sab karne ko. Koi kaam aata bhi hai tumhe sivaye muje chhedne k? Useless',Geet taunts.

Hearing word useless his ego hurts and after giving her a deadly glare he moved with his broom. Both start doing their works. Maan removed all webs and Geet collect unnecessary scrap and sweep the whole house quickly. Afterwards she bring paint colour. Both clenched brush and start painting like perfectionist.
All the time Maan only adoring her. Geet wears loose top with baggey jeans. Even in her clumsy state,she attracts him beyond imagination. She looks delighted to him all the time. Suddnly Geet noticed him and to cover up him he splash paint on her. Her mouth open wide and she look at herself,which rosed her anger. She ans back and splash paint on him. Maan too look at himself and repeats his action. Geet too repeats. Then again Maan. This time when she she about to splash Maan hoverd over her and tagged her against the wall. Geet wriggles so Maan clamp her both wrists and pinned besides her head
He pressed his hard frame on her and obstuct her moments. Geet glaring him and trying to shoved him away,but its not possible for her. Maan gazing her only and she too settle down and stop wriggling. Seeing his intence dark brown eyes,she found drowned herself in them. With this position his body touching her in very arousing way. Maan blew on her sweat beads and Geet clenched her eyes ad fists in anticipation. He effects her and today she showed it to him. Instead of stiffing her body responding in a way even she cant think of. Her arousals wants him,wants him more than he wants her. Maan buried his face in her neck and brushed his lips on her neck line teasingly. Geet moaned. Maan leave her left hand and she instantly grasped his nape. Maan's hand slippped inside her top and stroked her curve above her inners. She moaned more and grasped his nape hard. They loosing themselves in each other. Suddenly his phone start ringing,intrupting their passionate moments. Her hand fell of off him as she had suddnely awakened and her eyes looked away. She felt ashamed of herself for what she had done... Geet covered her mouth with her palm. Tears pouring from her eyes and Maan gently removed from her. He was too in shock how to react as both loosing control today if his phone not buzzed. She shoved him away and ran outside... Maan ran behind herand called her sevral times. Ignoring his every call she just sit in her car and ran away from there. Maan came inside and threw the phone on wall in fir of his anger. He kicked off the paint boxes in frustration...

PRECAP:- LIFE IN DANGER? Abi kiski wo to next me hi pata chalega😆
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Pls updt soon...wanna read more n more...unknowingly geet is coming closer to him...Sam u stay away gadhi...

Loved d updt...geet is cutie n so is maan...


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