THE LOCKET (1) - Page 32

Originally posted by: dqno1

Mannu...😊

Confuse mat ho re...

Me going after my name and showing DQ-giri😆

Bohut seedhi story hai...

Glad you came 🤗

me going to miss the story..😔
me going home for holi and after that i'll be inactive till june..

but will come back in june and read the story...🤗

Edited my comment on pg 29. ... On my reserved 2nd spot...

congrats...
sorry for the late reply...

prologue
nice...
oh ho painful start...
hope its Maan and Geet together FF else i will make u write another FF that too a HAPPY waala...

part 1
awesome dear...
so Maan and Dev are twins...
Dev seems to be interesting...
hope Maan is not hurt...
who is this girl?
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: dqno1

I would like to thank all of you for reading and commenting on my story...

The love I find on Geet forum drags me here to share my stories with you...❤️

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Late Late Late...

its pretty confusing i vl read once again... And cmmt

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash

😭

Kyun?

Originally posted by: Onir

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You know for some reason I'm liking this way of presenting the story. It has me hooked on, & all this unrevealed names has me looking into the characters deeper to figure it all. So whether it is lead or not, or it's Geet, Maan or someone else it doesn't affect much, as I'm trying to look at everyhting from a neutral view. (See it's just trying cause of the style of writing but still human wanting it to be something I look forward to...)

You are the best Onir! Thanks for the faith in me. I can only ask that you enjoy the trip and hope I can make it a pleasant one..

Dev here is quite charming, & easy go lucky guy. His approach to life is quite casual, yet he knows accepts his lifestyle & shortcomings. He also knows the taste of succes & yet strives to be better for his loved ones. The level of bonding he shares with his twin elder brother shows how much important Maan is to him. If so then I suppose Maan must be knowing about Dev's love interest. He must have confided about her to Maan.

Abhinav is so charming that I had to put his personality in. Maan here resembles the HP wala Maan not the office wala.

The girl in question is someone I'm liking very much. She is so head strong yet grounded. Knows well where her priorities lie yet is happy with the succes of her co-worker. She has spunk & at the same time knows her bounds & can very well limit others approach towards her.

I like this girl. She is based on someone's personality that I had guessed on IF. I am having fun writing her and she will be the mirchi in the story to follow.

I'm not going to predict anything, as I will wait for the story to build.

Maan wasn't there during the period Dev & this girl met, also this girl in question was known to Daadi even before Maan went for further studies. I can't seem to put together theses puzzle pieces. So for now I will just enjoy it all as it comes, & wait for it all to unfold as you have planned.

No, yeh assumption is not true.