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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: Onir

😆😆

Tera haal bhi mere jaisa hai... late latiff hai hum dono...

Ae lo phir se second!!! 😆

Sweety sahi keh rahi thi...

Tere aur second post ke beech main kaisa hai yeh bandhan purana...

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: .Maggie.
DQ ji: Bang on! I am an Engineer🤣
@Onir: Ye kya sab log mujhe foodies ke naam deying, oh btw just so as you know you guys were bang on about chubby cheeks and cuteness UNpersonified part🤣🤣🤣
Edit:
Onir ji Kick chahiye? Poetry toh side business rakh dijiye but dare you even think of stopping writing😡

Hai O Rabba... hope ki civil engineer nahi hai...😆

Acha laga humara extra curricular activities... see that's why we dragged you to IF

so we can use your threads to chitchat...😆

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

funny it is.. first i read ur part... then i thought what i shud comment. let's read other comment.. and then mayyo's comment..

she left me more confused.. i read both prologue and part again...

or mai or confuse ho gayi...

mujhe ye bin naam wale character guess nahi kiye jaate...

now on dev..
he is typical nice guy--first fun loving but can't say anything to the lady he loves..

the girl he loves is definitely a strong girl... not fallen easily...

Edited by mannubhardwaj - 12 years ago

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Superb Update Meri Dosht Avi 😳
Lovely Song But I cant see the Video 😆

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ramya sree

@.ramya-gurtian.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

one of the best

luved it

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Lajawaab hojati hun main teri har baat pe aksar
Kahan se seekhi hai tumne tarjumani mohabbat ki ❤️

tarjumani kya hai?

Lovely pic...

superb shaiyari...

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: dqno1

tarjumani kya hai?

Lovely pic...

superb shaiyari...

@Bold- Representation

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

First of all,I kept on staring at the picture you have used as "banner"for a pretty long time avi..This was the second and last genuine hug of Maaneet in the almost 400 episodes..I really really loved it alot... and finally "locket" has made its appearance...😃

Now coming to the chapter,,The woman Dev is talking about,whoever she is,I have fallen for her{not in that way ofcourse😛}..If i could be like her even 10 percent,my life would have been much better...alas,its easy to wish and very very hard to do...!!!!

I am loving your new writing style, avi..Your heroine has not made her presence yet and all your readers are already aaawwweeed by her...Its totally the magic of your presentation..Chapter was entitled "Dev" and it was actually about "Dev" but his girl stole the lime light...Dev seems quite genuine to me..He is certainly not a "villain"...😊..

You know,I personally love a certain "thing" in your writing and I don't know how to name it..umm..I can call it the "artistic streak"..or "Avimism"...There were certain "sentences" in this chapter which were full of "avinism"..for example...

He smiled to himself again as he realized that his ship that was floundering in a sea of wealth and cronies, had found a direction when he found her.

Being used to drooling females and feminine pink powder-puff girls, she came as a shock to his system.

Thank you for giving us this wonderful story and sorry for late comment..

eagerly waiting for next...😃

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: dqno1

Hai O Rabba... hope ki civil engineer nahi hai...😆

Acha laga humara extra curricular activities... see that's why we dragged you to IF

so we can use your threads to chitchat...😆

Rofl Nope. Not a civil engineer. It's Electronics and Communication. 😆
Oh yeah I do miss this chatting, it's fun. And right now I am sticking to chatting because I am blank about WOL 😆

Oh btw updated comment in P 30