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December04

@December04

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#1191

I hav started to read this story today 😊
first part : thought geet was the girl dev was swirling
2: dadi's thoughts abt maan and others thought really geet and dev 😲
3& 4: lift scene so its naintara and dev
then thot maan lvd naintsra
agn twist the girl swirling n devs arms s geet
geet self talk cleard all confusns
nw maan misunderstood everything
Gng to second thrd 😕 ⭐️

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deekshasaxena02

@deekshasaxena02

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#1192

The song is quite old..n just asked my mom about it she instantly liked it..now gonna hear her humming daily..

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#1193

Originally posted by: deekshasaxena02
The song is quite old..n just asked my mom about it she instantly liked it..now gonna hear her humming daily..

The songs were picked for a reason. They express the thoughts of the character.

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1194

Hi avi
Jaisa aapne kaha har thread pe ek comment hona chahiye
Mujhe aapki tarah likhna nahi aata lakin mai try karti hu
Your concept is very nice
All chap are awesome har carecter ko aapne itni achi tarah se define kiya hai jo dil ko chhu jane wala hai

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aachal20

@aachal20

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#1195

I love ypir ff please send the limk of your blog

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kshubhangi

@kshubhangi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#1196

Your note about comments at the start is interesting😉😆

After reading the first 4 chapters I got some idea. Actually the third chapter gave some clues but the fourth chapter cleared the air. So Maan misunderstood Dev and Geet to be in relation. I'm continuing to know further...