THE LOCKET (1) - Page 117

hey good work dear... nyc start rEAllieee...

Originally posted by: bina_a

gosh!!! how come i didn't read the prologue before only when i read part 8 about adi n pinky did i realise. so now i realise maan's misunderstandinigs... well adi-pinky we got to see a different version of them too good yaar. sujal a great brother who wants his sisters happiness. totally understandable but isn't he suppose to speak to adi-pinky about his doubts!!! well written

Read all the 4 parts in a go
Each character was explained beautifully along with their past memories
which is full of love and life

I m new 2 dis forum..i hav registered myslf jst to read dis ff..
Dis iz bst 1 i hav ever read..
Thnx

Originally posted by: ppriyanka83

I m new 2 dis forum..i hav registered myslf jst to read dis ff..
Dis iz bst 1 i hav ever read..
Thnx

Welcome to my story.

Hello avi !
Finally my exams r over and i m here to comment. Strange it is one f my favourite stories and it took so much time to comment . Never mind better late than never.:)
the prologue was such an eye catching one . You write emotions very well dear avi. Every character seemed to have been given equal importance. Let me read again and come back and i ll add more of the details
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ha...u liked already then toh there r minimal chances u come back here to read it again ok but let me tell u what i felt reading the story.
Avi to tell u the truth the first time i had read it and i was glued neither i knew u r something like geet forum it was just that once i had been surfing fr a story and shika web of love i had come across trying to read more f such stories i typed something and it showed me TL in its option and that nite i culdnt sleep reading ur stories. I wasnt a member so culnt like it r comment . I tried numerous tyms to register frm my mobile but culdnt fr my mobile's browser wasnt allowed. And i did feel guilty but culdnt help becoz i wuldnt be getting a laptop before i get through my entrances and it was then that i had asked shika to convey my appreciation if u go through her blog u ll get it there i guess under dichotomy f love. Then one fine day u stopped allowing non members acess i was heart broken :( becoz i had been so glued addicted to it. But then it was fair i had promised myself once exams get over i m coming here. Ok my ram katha is over.
So basically first accept my apology fr not being able to comment earlier.
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ok now why do u have to write so well?
My heart has never felt so many emotions at a time until i read this work.
When maan had been sad i had shared his grief , when he had been jealous there was some feelings in my heart i know not what..dev and naintara thanku fr not making them evil everybody should have their own importance and i like u fr giving them their space and the totally opposite charactrs f the girls one strong outspoken while the other on so gentle shy soft spoken loved the combo and dev aur maan ke kya kehna bhai they r my all time fav only the misunderstanding is what made my maan sad and me as well. The song selection is awesome. Thankyou fr writing this story avi.:)

Originally posted by: ardentfitzcy

Hello avi !
Finally my exams r over and i m here to comment. Strange it is one f my favourite stories and it took so much time to comment . Never mind better late than never.:)
the prologue was such an eye catching one . You write emotions very well dear avi. Every character seemed to have been given equal importance. Let me read again and come back and i ll add more of the details
*******
ha...u liked already then toh there r minimal chances u come back here to read it again ok but let me tell u what i felt reading the story.
Avi to tell u the truth the first time i had read it and i was glued neither i knew u r something like geet forum it was just that once i had been surfing fr a story and shika web of love i had come across trying to read more f such stories i typed something and it showed me TL in its option and that nite i culdnt sleep reading ur stories. I wasnt a member so culnt like it r comment . I tried numerous tyms to register frm my mobile but culdnt fr my mobile's browser wasnt allowed. And i did feel guilty but culdnt help becoz i wuldnt be getting a laptop before i get through my entrances and it was then that i had asked shika to convey my appreciation if u go through her blog u ll get it there i guess under dichotomy f love. Then one fine day u stopped allowing non members acess i was heart broken :( becoz i had been so glued addicted to it. But then it was fair i had promised myself once exams get over i m coming here. Ok my ram katha is over.
So basically first accept my apology fr not being able to comment earlier.
******
ok now why do u have to write so well?
My heart has never felt so many emotions at a time until i read this work.
When maan had been sad i had shared his grief , when he had been jealous there was some feelings in my heart i know not what..dev and naintara thanku fr not making them evil everybody should have their own importance and i like u fr giving them their space and the totally opposite charactrs f the girls one strong outspoken while the other on so gentle shy soft spoken loved the combo and dev aur maan ke kya kehna bhai they r my all time fav only the misunderstanding is what made my maan sad and me as well. The song selection is awesome. Thankyou fr writing this story avi.:)

Thanks Nivi 😃 Looking forward to your responses.

just got a hold of this FF and wanted to share my view about it,so here it goes (i hope u don't dose off reading it 😆)

Originally posted by: sessy

just got a hold of this FF and wanted to share my view about it,so here it goes (i hope u don't dose off reading it 😆)

prolouge-it was a very interesting part.so maan has a twin brother and the girl he likes and brother are together.i really liked the song which u used,it does justice to the update.excellent choice.it's one of my fav songs.

part 1-i really liked this update,because not a lot of writers will dedicate a whole update in describing the other charecter feelings.i believe that by adding all charecters feelings we can get a clear picture . lol i loved the word pink powder-puff girls 😆.looks like dev was hell bent on impressing her which did not work , may it be his looks or showering her with complements(bechara).i am really curious to know who she is who made a party going, fun loving guy into a responsible and sensible guy.love the song u chose to potray dev's feelings.

part 2-i felt really sorry for dadi.it is very painful to see u r kids die.she is a very stong person, she not only took care of 3 grand kids but also the business.hats off to her .felt very sad when maan was playing the piano.he was very close to his mom,unfortunatly she is not with him to share his heart break and give him the support which he desperatly need.excellent song choice.

part 3-lol dreaming about hrithik ,seriously who doesn't.looks like naintara has a past and i wonder who the guy is who asked her to marry him.some thing must have happend in the past that made her angry at the male species.the bus scene was well written.lol kya first meet hai yaar,no hi or hello seedha thappad 😆.excellent choice of song.i don't know why,but i am really looking forward to read more about her.

part 4-omg so it was geet who dev was carrying and maan saw them and felt heart broken.our geet is truly jhalli.she loves maan a lot but scared to say it first.i love the bond which geet shares with dev.lol geet describing that dev and tara's love story is like MI 1,2 and 3 all together.excellent song choice.

thx for the updates dear,loved it.

To curious to cment... Its awesm!!