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dqno1

@dqno1

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#661

What an explosive update!!!

Finally the reason or sort of for Naina not being with them out in the open. She made him leave her. That was physically difficult to read. The way you described it, the dark night which hides so much, the pain, the promise, the unwanted spectator to something so raw. The rain lashing around, water pouring from everywhere as if nature crying with the breaking of their hearts. The wind sweeping them away from each other. I cannot swear on you... stole my heart. No one can, when their heart is involved.

Tweesha in a sea of pain now of a different kind. The one who was left out. The bereftness of finding herself not part of them must be so cutting for her. I admire her guts to go about in every way possible to find Naina.

You my friend deserve a hats off salute... Awesome writing skills, amazing web that you have woven, I can't get enough of it. Sometimes Geet, sometimes Twisha, Maan or Vicky or even this Sameer I can't even begin to say who I love more.

Thanks for updating...

Regular updates...jumping now..

❤️u

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KittuPratzz

@KittuPratzz

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#662

B2B updates aa?? 😲

22 ee kaale..23?? ill comment by night 😃

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kirti

@DevilClan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#663

Awesum and well-written part.. Who was that boy whom Naina loved? So now Tweesha know everything. I know how she must have felt that her best friends kept her in dark about a secret of their life.

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#664

Edited my comment on page 91... 😊

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dqno1

@dqno1

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#665

Originally posted by: Onir

Your writing takes me through a path that I would love t travel always.

What i loved the most was... the boy's gesture... of forming the girls' fingers into fist ... very symbolic. He gave her the whole world into her palms by just being there in the periphery & not within the circle of her hands/palms... as they say you hold your future & life in the lines of your palms but he detached himself from her by being the outsider covering her palms,,, and then giving her the world & promising not even his shadow to her... 👏

I loved the gesture too but could not express it this well... Lovely...

brings me back to another great memory: NYT2 and the scene on the swing with the child Anshu between them.. and the explanation of Karva Chauth... Even though the earth thinks that the moon is gone it still keeps circling round and round it...like a love obsessed fool...then all the fingers being all her links and the bite being fed to Anshu..you did a palm analysis(not the right term, I know) then and I loved that comment too..

Somethings in life are memorable and Shika's writings are such... they stay with me

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#666

What did I ever do to get you girls in my life, now don't joke like dreamer for that 😆
I lub you girls🤗

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#667

Originally posted by: dqno1

👏👏👏
I loved the gesture too but could not express it this well... Lovely...
brings me back to another great memory: NYT2 and the scene on the swing with the child Anshubetween them.. and the explanation of Karva Chauth... Even though the earth thinks that the moon is gone it still keeps circling round and round it...like a love obsessed fool...then all the fingers being all her links and the bite being fed to Anshu..you did a palm analysis(not the right term, I know) then and I loved that comment too..
Somethings in life are memorable and Shika's writings are such... they stay with me

Avi... you know when I was reading this part and then while commenting I was so reminded and taken back to that NYT 2 karvachaut chapter... yes the whole finger-palm analysis and earth moon love... Those parts as well as Shika's this part just are so beautiful that I'm left with a sweet feeling for more and formed a memory in mind... ❤️

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#668

Originally posted by: .Maggie.
What did I ever do to get you girls in my life, now don't joke like dreamer for that 😆
I lub you girls🤗

I love you too... 😉 with the whole package... 😆

🤗

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#669

thanks shikha for back to back wonderful updates

geet is really an amazing writer just like u😊

and she was so right

writing before people u know...

they would unconsciously map everything to you

for the people who don't know geet

the story would just be a love story with sad ending

but for tweesha

she could join some dots and

she got answers to some of her questions

and as for geet's story

again dear

poetry flows in ur writing

and the way u use nature in ur writing

rain, water, wind , night everything

it makes ur writing so serene so beautiful

and ur descriptions are so clear that ur readers can feel the wetness of rain or cold of wind or the pain in the hearts of two parting lovers

awesome dear shikha

the mute spectator of the parting lovers lost the trust in love

but some day her trust may get enhanced even more when she realises that whatever the lovers did was out of immense love for each other only

waiting for more questions to be answered

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#670

I honestly don't know what to feel..

I was just witnessing "Naina Sameer's" love story blooming in "TPOD" and suddenly I am aware of how its gonna end..and "what" is left in the middle of this "start" and "end" is going to pain me alot...!!!!!😭

It was a beautiful and painful chapter..It had pained three souls in the past and It is paining one soul in the present just because she was refrained form this pain in the past...!!!

I am glad you did not put any music in it..because you can't imagine how does this combo of your music and writing affect me..Whenever I listen to "Theme of Ashiqui 2",All i imagine is Maan holding Bandaid with his pinky finger and cool breeze ruffling his hair...!!! If you had chosen some music for this chapter too,I am sure,I would have always cried listening to it..

Thank you for writing it so beautifully dear...!!!🤗