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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#641

Originally posted by: gudmeet

U must be charming dear onir
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and why did u ask this dear

yes I love this emo

I find it so cute

hope u did not mind my using this

u know I did not even read that it says toungue

I thought its for sweet smile

😳

Thank you 😳
I guessed it as every post had them in abundance... 😉 I don't mind them at all... and if you felt it sweet smile then toh all the very good... 😊 But its for teasing... 😊

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#642

Answers to so many questions... but then led to so many more questions in its wake... Again very beautifully written 👏 The whole description & Involvement of nature is so intricately woven that it appears to be so mystical while I read. There's this secrecy yet simplicity very similar to nature that surrounds us. It's up to us which aspect we embrace the secrecy or the simplicity.

Your writing takes me through a path that I would love t travel always. There's connecting link in each part. The previous part's Dreamer- believer part was given a mirror here in the Broken love & trust. Geet has lived a nightmare & has been under its daze & effects since last four years with none to share. The push that Dreamer gave her was needed for her to at least make an attempt to lessen the effects of the guilt that she's been baring since years by sharing it through writing that incident that changed everything between tow lovers, three friends & even many lives which was under wraps.

Not only Geet but I feel each of us readers are actually mute spectators in others stories ... it takes root & flourishes in front of us yet even if it breaks apart we can do nothing but hope for better. It must be all the more painful for Geet as it was some people she knew who were crumbling due to circumstances.

Geet must have felt so disintegrated when she must have seen that relation crumbling down due to which her trust & belief in love was founded on. There was love that was defeated but also a belief was shattered... which has now started building again after years through this small attempt at writing it down.

What i loved the most was... the boy's gesture... of forming the girls' fingers into fist ... very symbolic. He gave her the whole world into her palms by just being there in the periphery & not within the circle of her hands/palms... as they say you hold your future & life in the lines of your palms but he detached himself from her by being the outsider covering her palms,,, and then giving her the world & promising not even his shadow to her... 👏

I don't know what should I feel for Tweesha. Her being aware of it all now after so many years must be painful. She must be so hurt.

Looking forward for more on this story as A Mute spectator... who can comment what ever I feel but still not enough... 😊

Edited by Onir - 12 years ago

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#643

Thanks onir for pointing this to me

and thanks also for understanding my mistake

but kya kare yaar kisi ke chere par nazar tik gayi thi

ki bas wo hazoor rukh se zara naqab hata de

ki aur sab kuch dikhna band ho gaya😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😉😉😉😉😉😉

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Tyro

@Tyro

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Posted: 12 years ago

#644

Originally posted by: Onir
Jyoti Hi5 ... hum dono ka haal same hai... 😆

true...same haal hai...😆

n the culprit is roaming freely...

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#645

Originally posted by: gudmeet
Thanks onir for pointing this to me
and thanks also for understanding my mistake

but kya kare yaar kisi ke chere par nazar tik gayi thi

ki bas wo hazoor rukh se zara naqab hata de

ki aur sab kuch dikhna band ho gaya😉

Oh no need to thank... 😊

oh my open compliments... 😳

Or is it a tease... 😆