Pyar ka dard The pain of love MG OS

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This OS is inspired by the Malayalam film 'Chitram'.I dedicate this to Pari_Jyothika because she wants me to write a Maaneet FF on 'Chitram'.I am sorry'I have no patience to write it as a FF.So I wrote it as an OS.I wrote this as I also felt that Chitram's climax should have been changed.


Why this is always happening to me?Why love is only giving me pain?First I loved Dev.I trusted him completely.My dad who was in London was against it.But without listening to him I decided to marry him.My Mamaji who looked after me after my dad went back to London also supported me for my happiness.But he broke my heart by cheating on me.I don't know how much pain I underwent.I stopped talking to others.I forgot to smile.I became a restless lonely bird who wanted to fly away to another world to escape from pain.


The news of my dad's return shocked me.He had changed his mind for my happiness.He had loved me that much.He thought I was already married.He was coming back to spend a few days with his son in law.I was broken completely.He would be shattered to know that I was not married,I was dumped by my lover.I went mad.But my mamaji gave me strength.He came home along with the man he found on the street.He was Maan.Mamaji brought him to pretend as my husband in front of my dad and the other family members.He wanted money very badly.So he acted as my husband.My dad was happy to see his handsome well mannered husband.My dad hugged me shedding tears.

"My dear daughter'.your selection is the best.I regret opposing your marriage with Maan.He is a gentle man".

His words pierced my heart as I was cheating him.I was guilty.But if the truth comes out it can even harm my dad's health.So I had to continue the drama.

Though I and Maan were the most romantic couple in front of others inside the room we fought like hell.

I hated his presence.His talk irritated me.I longed to kick him out of the house.

He was greedy of money.He demanded more and more money.He blackmailed us for money.But he was Angel before my dad.I did'nt leave any single second to irritate him.He also irritated me to the core.Vicky who was my cousin over heard our conversation and informed this to my dad.I got scared.But Maan managed the situation very well.Unexpectedly he caressed my face looking deeply at my eyes.I really felt that there was love in his eyes for me.For a moment I forgot everything else.I was lost in his magical eyes.

Maan's acting made my dad believe that we are a loving couple and Vicky's efforts to expose us went in vain.I could not forget how he touched me'how he looked at me.I was not able to name my feelings towards him.I was confused.But whatever the feeling was it was beautiful.Again I was feeling happy.

Mamaji refused to give him more money.So he decided to leave.He took his luggage and went out.My heart broke.I did'nt know why.I used to wait to kick him out of the house.But finally when he left my heart started bleeding.Why?But in a few moments he returned making me and Mamaji smile.I jumped with joy.My face glowed.

Mamaji smiled:Why Geet?You look really happy when he returned.

I blushed.

He said:It is love Geet.You have fallen in love with him.

I was surprised.I never thought that I would fall in love again'that also with Maan.

I asked Maan:Maan,why did you come back even though Mamaji refused to give you the money you demanded?

He kept silent.But his eyes spoke something.His expressive eyes contained a lot of meanings.

M:I did'nt feel like leaving'.

G:Leaving whom?

He smiled calmly.I smiled back.I knew that he did'nt want to leave me.

I don't know how to express how happy I was that time.I felt happy to be loved.

Seeing me blush he smiled which showed his silent love for me.

But there came a storm again breaking my happiness again in the form of Maan's Uncle Ram Kapoor.We all welcomed him happily without knowing what his intention was.

My dad went back to London happily blessing us.I decided to make our drama real.My heart desired to marry Maan in real.I proposed to him.

"Maan,I don't know when my hated towards you turned into love.I really love you Maan.I can't think of a life without you.I know that you also feel the same for me.That's why you are not able to leave this house.Shall we get married?"

To my shock Maan burst into tears.

I had'nt expected that:Maan,did I say anything wrong?

M:No Geet.You are right.I also have started feeling for you.But I don't deserve you".

G:Why do you think so?Because you don't have a proper job.You are not wealthy?

She held his hand:Then don't worry about that.I have no problem with that.Your heart is enough for me.

M:No Geet.It's not like you think.I had a good job.But I lost it.I needed money for my sick son's surgery.That's why I agreed to act as your husband.

My heart was scattered into pieces.Sick son?

M:Yes Geet.I have a son.I am married.

My head spinned.My dreams shattered.

M:Mr.Ram Kapoor is my wife's uncle.He only supported me to marry my Aarti.i was madly in love with her.We were so happy when we got married.

She gave birth to my son Ravi.But our happiness was short lived.There was a guy named Shyam who used to trouble her even during the college days.He came home when I was not there.He tried to molest her.When I reached there I saw him attacking my Aarti.Without thinking anything I took a knife and tried to stab him.But by mistake it was Aarti who got stabbed.I killed my own lovely wife.She died crying in my arms.

Maan cried bitterly.

M:Shyam tried to escape.But I killed him too.Ram Uncle is a Police Officer who has come to take me back to the prison.I am sentenced to death.I am going to get capital punishment.

I realized that my life was burnt and it has turned into ashes.My Maan is going to be killed.I felt like dying.I ran away crying.Mamaji tried to console me,but I did'nt get relief.

Maan did not feel like leaving me.He asked Ram Kapoor:

Uncle'I know that I cannot escape from the capital punishment.But still I am asking you simply'Is there any hope to escape from it?

Ram felt sad for him.He was helpless.

Maan burst into tears:I have started loving my life again.Geet made me fall in love again.That's why.

Ram Kappor was very upset.

He tried to give him false hope:You pray Maan.God might hear your prayer.


But Maan had no hope.

Before going away with Ram Kapoor I held Maan's hand:

Don't worry about your son Ravi.I will take him for the surgery.He will be fine.I will take care of him.

Maan became very emotional:Thank you so much Geet.I can't thank you enough for this.And thank you for loving me also.Your love healed my wound.

I felt like crying.But I controlled myself.But when he was taken away by Ram Kapoor I cried loudly.I felt like Maan's widow though I was not married to him legally.For me he is my husband.

Later unexpectedly Mamaji came and gave me a good news.It has been proved that Maan did'nt do the murder purposefully.So there is no capital punishment for him.But he will be getting a life long imprisonment.I knew that Maan will suffer for years in the jail.But I was happy that he was at least alive.Only if he is alive my heart will beat.

Ravi's surgery was successful.He is with me.I brought him up as my son.My dad passed away before he came to know the truth about mine and Maan's relationship.In a way he escaped from a shock.

Years have passed.Ravi is a grown up a boy.

Today is very special for us.Maan is getting released today.We are going there to pick him up.

Maan got released from the jail.

Ravi shed tears recognizing his father.He remembers his face only because he has seen Maan's photographs.Maan recognized him seeing the tears in his eyes.

M:Ravi?

Ravi nodded his head shedding tears.

R:Dad!

Ravi hugged Maan.Both of them cried a lot.

R:Dad'mom is waiting for you.

Maan looked at him with surprise.

Ravi led Maan to the car parking area.Geet was standing near the car.

R:Mom'dad has come.

Geet turned back to see Maan.Maan was surprised.He could'nt believe his eyes.

M:You?

Geet was very emotional.

Ravi held Geet close to him:Yes dad,she is my mom.She only brought me up.

Maan became very emotional.

M:You are a Goddess Geet.

Maan and Geet walked to each other.


Do, pal ruka, khwaabon ka kaarvaan

Aur phir, chal diye, tum kahaan, ham kahaan

Do pal ki thi, ye dilon ki daastaan

Aur phir, chal diye, tum kahaan, ham kahaan

Aur phir chal diye, tum kahaan, ham kahaan


Geet's lips shivered.He put his finger on her lips:Don't say anything Geet.I know how much you waited for me.I know how much you prayed for this moment.Because of your prayer only I got saved from death.I know what you want from me now.



Tum the ke thi koyi ujli kiran

Tum the ya koyi kali muskaayi thi

Tum the ya tha sapnon ka tha saawan

Tum the ke khushiyon ki ghata chhaayi thi

Tum the ke tha koyi phool khila

Tum the ya mila tha mujhe naya jahaan

Do pal ruka khwaabon ka kaarvaan

Aur phir chal diye tum kahaan ham kahaan

Do pal ki thi, ye dilon ki daastaan

Aur phir chal diye, tum kahaan, ham kahaan

Aur phir chal diye, tum kahaan, ham kahaan


Aa... aa... aa...


Ravi took out a small sindoor box and gave it to Maan.Maan opened it and took a pinch of sindoor from it and filled the parting of her hair with it.Ravi smiled to see his parents' wedding.

Maan and Geet looked at each other deeply.Their hearts became one.When they embraced each other they became one soul.The tears of happiness and love flowed from their eyes.


Tum the aa khushboo hawaaon mein thi
Tum the ya rang saari dishaaon mein the
Tum the ya roshni raahon mein thi
Tum the ya geet goonje fizaaon mein the
Tum the mile ya mili thi manzilein
Tum the ke tha jaadoo bhara koyi sama
Do pal ruka, khwaabon ka kaarvaan
Aur phir chal diye, tum kahaan, ham kahaan
Do pal ki thi, ye dilon ki daastaan
Aur phir chal diye, tum kahaan, ham kahaan
Aur phir chal diye, tum kahaan, ham kahaan
Aur phir chal diye, tum kahaan, ham kahaan(VeerZara).



Ravi who was the witness to their love was overwhelmed by their deep love.

Ravi said in his mind:This is the pain of love.But this pain gives pleasure to the lovers.

The end

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superb emotional OS ~! Well written! Y no pm?
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bolte hai na pyar ka dard hai meetha meetha pyara pyara...magar woh dard jitna bhi meetha ho bahut hi tadpati hai...

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awesome & beautiful story thx a lot for pm.
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its really nice and heartoching yar
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emotional yet sweet
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LOVELY OS
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