Life partner 6 special note-pg 103,april 7,2013 - Page 76

Originally posted by: Mayamaan

One of loving & funny ff i ever read

Enjoy a lot its just wow

& i always remember this life partners 😊

Originally posted by: ANI0

lovely ff

awesum work

Originally posted by: sarita21992

Dear Palin,
You have always seen me singing praises for your work. about how much I loved your writing and how awesome I find you. But this time I am going to be different. I am so hell disappointed with you. You literally broke my heart with Life Partner! I have always been very touchy about Maaneet and I have hated every single person like Dev, Naintara, brij, shasha..anyone who had brought even slightest discomfort to them. So how can I ignore you. Kyu kiya mere Maan ko itna pareshan epilogue me 😆 [you can't imagine what relief this "LOL" smiley has brought for me..Above lines gave me a heart attack almost..I was like,oh god,what mistake i did ???😆well dear sarita..mere maan jijaji is not that "bechara " and "poor"..He has taken his revenge perfectly. Read this..you would come to know everything..

LADDU'S CONSPIRACY

KYUUU!! Here the man was considerate enough to give you a lift (even when he hates you) and you made his fun so obnoxiously? No wonder he calls you chudail. He is taking so gud care of ur frnd..and this is how you treat him. You are so pathetic..I sincerely hope your root canal hurts u like HELL!! Kse cartoon bana diya mere Maan baby ka ek chote se traffic wale k samne! is sey acha to fine de deta. U are so argghhh..and btw madam SHaram word ka naam suna h?? Tamiz and all??? here ur frnd is living the best moment of her life by SOLVING the Mystery and u had to poke in ur nose LIKE THIS?? Mamta aunty ko call kra..incorrigible. No wonder u are best frnds of sm1 called TheBrat 😆 Bhagwan bachaye yar tum jaisi dost se.

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Writing this I realised, penning down smthing comic is nt EASY!! so wow madam..what an awesome story! I am glad i read it. You know if we think of it..what is the plot of Life partner, NOTHING!! two strangers get married, fall in love..HUH!! Isnt it what happens in almost other second FF! so what makes life partner special? Firstly You...you are the one that makes it impossible to not read any Maaneet work from u. Secondly the work itself. A simple plot like this actually leaves us spell bound. I have noticed this thing about your work. Its very calming, soothing (especially Beauty)..I dont know how to explain you this (given I am no writer like you) but I would try to. There are absolutely no dark characters in ur work, no villains. Not even grey people. Yes I do not even consider Maya to be a vamp. She was more of a result of generation gap and lack of communication.There are no 'over the top' twists and turns( leaving obsession, even those those twists were powerful but not over done) Your work is more about feelings, calm feelings, no jealousy, no dark feelings, very humane, innate, chaste, platonic feelings! Its relatable..its impactful. you know I went through so many emotions with the bhole bunch of chapters.[THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THESE KIND WORDS DEAR..THEY REALLY MEAN ALOT TO ME..😊] The first couple of chapters hardly interested me. It was all geet.I missed Maan a lot. And then as i read on, I could see myself in geet. Never in any FF, I have related so well to character.[ALMOST EVERY READER HAS A LITTLE OF HER IN THIS GEET..MAY BE THAT WAS WHAT MADE THIS STORY EARN MORE READERS..!!! ] Her memories with her father, the way she is being brought up her thoda sa spoilt nature, the way her parents fear how it wud be after marriage. So grounded reality. I think this part was something every urban girl from a middle class family can relate to. I did. Though smtimes I did feel..she was just way ahead in her pagalpan, her cute stupidity.[CUTE STUPIDITY...😆] And then scene shifts to Maan and his house. Tell me why you have to make Maan so ADORABLE? Is it actually possible to find some1 like him? I am seroius in asking it. He is an epitome of true Life partner, a man of girls dream. So in love with him. [I DON'T KNOW DEAR WHETHER SUCH MEN EXSIST IN REAL OR NOT..BUT I KNOW CHANCES ARE VERY LESS BECAUSE THIS MAAN HAS COME FROM A GIRL'S MIND,ACTUALLY HE HAD A GIRL'S {PALIN'S} BRAIN ACTUALLY..MEN DON'T THINK LIKE HIM IN GERNERAL,I GUESS..BUT STILL,I HOPE YOU WOULD GET A LIFE PARTNER LIKE HIM...😊]Thats why I dont like you know, u irritate ti\he hell outta the guy I love 😊 He was so understanding so loveable. Even though I feel The story was more about geet, Maan left an equally powerful impact.Some really wonderful emotions woven so easily. One I had to mention specifically was when Maan said she will never be his priority..I was you know hurt. But when she explained her front saying if he asked her to chose btwn him and her family, she would choose her family. Realization dawned upon me that he is right 😊[I HAVE LEARNED SO MANY THINGS WHILE WRITING THIS STORY..I HAD TO THINK LIKE BOTH MAAN AND GEET AND IT ALWAYS HELPED IN SEEING OTHER SIDE OF COIN TO ME...] I actually saw life from a Man's point of view for the first time. I so love him. You know you have built their relationship so well, u left me blushing with their first peck on cheek, I had tears streaming down my face when he slapped her and his gnawing guilt. And No I am not a cry bay to cry in every FF or be excited abt every kiss.It was so engrossing that i did. Though I was a tad disappointed with their 'mystery solving'. I wanted smthing more elaborate. Do I sound besharam 😳 ??[NO YOU DON'T BUT WRITING "THAT" IN ELABORATED MANNER IS NOT POSSIBLE FOR ME..MUJHSE IMAGINE HI NAHI HOTA KYA KARUN..ONE OF MY DEAR FRIEND AS WELL AS REDAER "DIVA 7" CALLS ME "AMOL PALEKAR" OF GF...🤣] Its not about the act, we all know it, read two such scenes every ff almost roz. But this Maan and Geet were different. Every new touch, a boundary bng crossed was described so beautifully thru out d ff, the walls melting, the welcoming of new feelings. I really loved whatever glimpse of culmination though. How for a moment Maan dominated, not being his sweet self, but still being him. How our sherni was shy. the ice lolly. Impactful. So dont blame me if i wanted more[NO I DON'T BUT I LEFT ALL THAT FOR YOUR IMAGINATION...😆]

Lastly I am going to sue you soon. You hooked me up when I should be studying. In a way I am glad that I wait to read till a story finishes. Atleast I am saved from the trauma of waiting. but then it snatches me the opportunity to tell u every single thing that touched my heart, made me say awww, made me burst out laughing alone,in splits, making ppl wonder if I am lunatic.[NO PROBS DEAR..I CAN FEEL THROUGH YOUR WORDS HOW MUCH YOU LIKED THIS TALE..AND I AM REALLY LUCKY TO GET SUCH ADMIRATION FROM YOU...] Mujhe chhup chhup ke padhna padta hai! So even after bng a stranger to me. whose name is even unknown to me, u gave me a beautiful gift of laughter and contentment. A heartfelt thanks.[PLEASURE IS ALL MINE DEAR...🤗I CAN'T ASK FOR MORE AS A WRITER ] Keep writing more and more and sharing it with me 😊

PS: why do u love shinchan so much?[WHY DO YOU LOVE MAAN SO MUCH????🤣 OK..I KNOW THERE IS NO COMPARISON BETWEEN MAAN AND SHINCHAN..AND I CAN'T PUT IN WORDS WHY I LOVE THIS CARTOON CHARACTER..I JUST LOVE HIM...😃]
PPS: the quote in ur signature: Makes me wonder if its time for the reader in me to emulate![DO LET ME KNOW WHENEVER YOU START WRITING..I WANT TO BE YOUR FIRST READER..😊]

Originally posted by: Onir

Hey Palin... its me again on one of your threads... 😆

LIFE PARTNER! 😳 I loved this story for the simplicity, comic timing and such beautiful way of making me aware of how even simple aspects of life mean to be so awesome when woven together through the view of a well conceptualized writing. 👏

As usual I was recommended this SS long back but then due to time constraints then I could never read it when it was in the continuous updating stage. Then came the time when I read that OS:Curious case of unsolved Mystery by Noodles... and I enjoyed that so much that I so wanted to read the real source to that OS.😆😆.. and so started reading this SS... I read the first 20-22 parts in one go on a weekend.. but then couldn't read it all further but this weekend I made it a point to finish reading LP... And I'm so glad I did cause I really enjoyed the whole journey of Laddoo and Hemamalini... 😳

I have laughed so hard, felt for each character, smiled with those small touchy moments, clapped for some awesome portrayals of day-day tasks, relived some moments that each girl goes through in the different phases of life... thanks Plain for writing this story ... its just so good. 👏 🤗

The whole start with the arranged marriage thing with the boy's family coming to visit them and Maan's behavior then and Geet getting apprehensive was so beautifully described.👏 My favourite Shinchan made a great appearance.❤️ 😆. he was almost the second lead in this story so it was like a cherry on the cake for me... 😳 His bummies wala shirt, the affection and adoration By Geet loved it... I laughed so hard reading it all that my Mom started staring at me for my reason of insane moment. 🤣

The most treasured scene was the one when Geet just before her wedding, the day before reminiscences all her childhood and memories with her parents... you touched me deep with that whole description of her crying in the washroom, going out for a stroll in the night and siting by that bench, her cycle ride, her memories of the pole near her bus stand how her father made her learn those tables..❤️❤️❤️ I can't explain what you stirred deep inside me and how much I have loved those scenes, I just felt for Geet and treasure those scenes. . I just felt so awesome and so touched by those scenes, the beauty in the way you described it was beauty personified... so pure, true and untainted feelings and emotions every girl must be going through but you brought it all so well... I loved it and I am now a big fan of your writing. 👏

Aarav, aaravi were so cute, especially Aarav. ❤️ He was cutie pie.. When you showed those scenes of sibling insecurity and all his issues dealing with it and all along with Maya Aunty's discrimination was so mature kind of writing,

You're multifaceted girl with ability and talent to write extremes with such flawless capability turning it all to be excellent. 👍🏼 One end you write something so hilarious with Maan acting like that dacoit in front of Maya, acting like a wife and Geet his husband with Maya catching them in that act, with all of Geet's antics ; and then the next extreme you show awesome maturity in your writing with the way you dealt with Aarav being explained and putting to rest all of his insecurities, Maya coming around by Geet writing that letter to Jiju and he coming and explaining it all to his mother, Geet and Maan's fight and the slap incident with final resolving of it all just by the understanding of having right on your loved ones and the difference of view making the change... 👏 Take a bow girl for just and splendid portrayal of both extremes as well as the in between range.

I loved each of the characters as well as their build up you gradually led us through the various parts... Be it Maya, Adi, Aarav, Maan's Nani, Mom, Geet's parents... or even the two life partners... ❤️

Also loved all of the gradual progression and journey of these two leads towards love... it was so believable, real yet all so sweet & dreamy. The way Maan had made her aware of his intial priorities, she reciprocating it with her love for her parents. Him understanding her, she getting in tuned with his likes and dislikes... Awesome description of varied human characteristics.

Loved all the sweet & love & building moments in their relation... her loving rajma chawal and asking him whether he likes it or has an allergy with it, sleeping with him with kicks and throwing of blanket, pic of Aravi and her with soothers in mouth, them enacting as role reversals... 🤣 that kiss and taste of ladoos... 😳😆 him becoming aware of her serious side with the rejection of her dream job and then getting her mantra towards happy living... 😉😆

Geet's moulding into a woman in love was so awesome & Somewhere I could understand it all of her fears ... the way she was bugged with extra care of ladke wale, her being sickness ki dukan, her fear that she so innocently confesses to Maan that she has started becoming like her mother caring and getting concerned for him, his eating, health, his clothes... those 3 stages 😃 her not being able to have her kheer just because he was hungry, her jadu ki jhapis to him and understanding his love for his sister and then becoming a part of his life and family with Aarav and Aaravi being her first kids. 😳 👍🏼

And the last chapter and epilogue.. was too good ❤️ With Palin making an appearance loved her entry and she was there to stay between these two... Peda singh..🤣 police ko speech and maan being the driver 😆 Poor maan.

Loved all the special mentions and codes specifically meant to be copyrighted by LP. "Mystery" 😳😆 Post mystery solving glow. 😳Google search by girls and boys 🤣 Maan's mystery solving by Adi's interpretation. 😆 Geet's love for Shinchan and his bummies... and wanting to know the cream to make her cheeks smooth as Aravi's bummies... 😆😉

I laughed the most of my whole life while reading the epilogue... 🤣 🤣 🤣

Thank you for writing such awesome mature, comic, hilarious, true to self story... 🤗

I won't continue more as the length just seems to increase... but be rest assured now I will be stalking all your writings here onward to bug you for more...from one of my now most favorite writers... 😃 I will not miss out to be a part of any of your stories while you are writing them not waiting for them till they end... Will soon be catching up with "The parent" 😊

Love you and Shinchan too... ❤️