Roothe Piya-Manaoo Kaise #5 Link# 6 nd note PG 163 - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
poor geet maan ki payback chakkar mein phas gaye .😆😆
maan taking geet on date oo geet so xcited😳.
awee finally maan man gaya👏👏.🥳
soo hot nd romantic date🥳☺️.
roothy piya maan gaya

is ko read karke koi nahi tired hoga 😃.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Reading dis was torturous...wasn't sure if maan was gng for payback or not...god n after reading it I was ☺️ 😳

Dis is a very special story for me...I love reading ffs bt few r close to my heart n dis will b one of dem...loved d outcome coz geets efforts finally gave her maan back...

It was very slow, passionate n awesome...nothing was rushed n I loved it...

Maan likes bold geet wow...den he will get bold geet for sure in future...m really happy n smiling coz I so badly wanted dem to accept each other...maan don't fear, she is urs n never gonna go away...

Hugs n loads of love to u Anu, for dis amazing n outstanding updt...will b waiting for more...

He was thinking abt payback so seriously n geet was cursing him...tent n rain added beauty to d whole scene n feel...m very very happy
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww i didnt get bored while reading the update...;);)
infact update wasss..;);)
fginallyyy ourr MAaneet became one..:D:D
n yeah Maan ka payback style toh ek dum unique tha...;);)
first two days hw geet immensed in his office work n than third day..omg DATE Shate hummm...;);)
Geet toh full to flat ho gyi thi...woh barishhh hayee ek dum prfect for our MAaneet...n aftr that their Lovely Moments in tent house..;);)..n naughty Maan...he wants his BOLD Geet back..ahaa..;)

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Posted: 12 years ago
That was an awesome one anu..

I was wondering when maan asked Geet to manage all the work if that was his pay back... but alas, he had totally a different way of planning her pay back...
The cribbing Geet in office was so cute... and her anxiety on the date... everything was so awesome...
First date at campsite reminded me so much of GHSP's confession...
Maan wanted to control his desires coz he thought she might expect more for their first night together.. yet again here, Geet just proved herself to be his mishty who preferred to be in his warmth than any other fancy thing or comfort... her thoughts and emotions at that point was so much of bliss of winning her husband ...
And finally they became one after so much of hardships in their relation and Geet finally manofied her hubby...
Loved it anu.. eager for the next
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg finally roothe maan maan hi gaye ...phew ...what a lovely update it written so beautifully ...
i am going to read it again ,,,
loved it amazing update
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow superb update...
loved it...
finally maaneet became one...
waiting for the next part...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Now u should change d title😆
Piya to Maan gaye
I loved d update
It was Geet's dream which finally came true
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update from starting to the end
omggg maan's payback was this
I could never think of maan going to this bold😳😳😳😳
may be he was always holding back but u really surprised me
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I just can't find the words to say how wonderful update is
finally geet was able to manafying her husband😳😳😳
and that tooo in this bold way
love the way he kept on saying payback and making geet frustrated first but then the payback was really amazing and out of world for geet

love this bold geet and her blod answers😆😆😆😆 even maan tried here to hold as well but she didnot let him🤣🤣


now waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally Roothe piya maangaaya..

Excellent update dear

First date leads to SR

WOWWW

Maneet love is awesome

Ur writing skills are just awesome dear...

Plzzz ek request Maneet ka love scenes ded Saara dikhayiyena


Plzzz update the next part ASAP

Plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing beautifull n romantic update...
ufff naughty maan... teasing n afraidng geet again again by mentioning pay back...
love da update... beautifully decribtion of dere 1st love making ...
love da update..
w8ng eagerly 4next...

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