Waiting For You#6 (Thread 7 link on Pg 150) - Page 27

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

aaj ka tho phir bhi teek hai... at least i was able to come here for some time... but i really hope i get the new one tom ... nahi tho mera kya hoga? it is in these circumstances that i understand how addicted am to gf... mere jaisa koi ar hoga na yaha?

Originally posted by: singh24

Really me too so much addicted...

Babaji!!! kya kya sunna padta hei mujhe...🤣 🤣

Outside home i use phone...😆 😆

I don't want food ..but my GF is must...😛

me too yaar ghar mein kya kya snna padtha hai iske wajaah se

and after gf has come, no reading, no tv, no day sleeping. raat ko bhi kam sothi hhoo...

sometimes i too feel that this is too much bt cant help it yaar

iske bina nahi hotha

Part 50 Continues ...

One of them called Brij. His phone was ringing but because of deep sleep Brij did not hear. After many tries when Brij did not pick up his call, men decided to catch Geet and take her back to Brij. They came out from jeep and started to go inside where they had seen Geet was hiding. Though owner tried to stop them but failed in front of their power. They tried to open door but it was locked from inside where Geet was hell scared with all these happenings.

She tried to find any escape but there was nothing to go out, leaving alone door which was already occupied with those men from outside.

"Babaji please show some way! Please Babaji!!'' she begged. It was so difficult for her to bear everything. The fear of taking back to that haveli, took half of her gathered courage.

"Maan where are you? Please aa jaaiye!!'' screaming she begged in silence.

"Open the door!! Geet!!!'' men shouted. They were not ready to move nor could go leaving her here otherwise Brij would not leave them if comes to know.

Then a car stopped on entrance. Dev, had reached as Brij had told for him to meet his men outside of HP. He looked around for any person and found same place where those men were presented.

"Perhaps Brij was saying about those both!'' he thought and pressed car horn to get their attention.

Both turned and saw a man was gesturing them to come.

"Paaji seems he is dev as Brij had told!!'' One of them spoke and both walked to him.

Here Dhaba owner who was a mute witness of all these saw both leaving, he walks toward room, tip toeing and knocked.

"Open door Beta, I'm here!!'' he whispered loud to here by Geet. Inside Geet who was trying to hide herself, sitting miserably on floor heard owner voice and recognized. Hurriedly she came to door and whispered back "Kaka is they gone!!''

"Beta they are not here. You do fast Beta run from here!!''

Geet slowly unlocked door and peeped out and saw both were talking with a third person. Due to distance and dark she could not see Dev face, came out and runs to opposite direction. Owner closed door again like before and came back to his previous place.

"Listen, you take Dev to Brij and I will wait here till Brij Paaji comes!!'' One man said to another. He nodded and left with Dev while second man came back to door and started waiting outside like before, but didn't check was she inside or not as it was closed as same.

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Geet runs from there and stopped reaching quite far when after being sure no one was behind. She was hell tired and exhausted but could not stop for longer and started to walk again but with slow steps. After many minuets she found a bus and without thinking caught it.

Night was not ending. It was looking longer than ever and she could feel it readily. She was looking out of window where everything was black.

"Babaji why doesn't the night of my day ends. Why it always make me suffer in various ways. Why my life feels like alighting flame of candle. Alike a candle burns thinking her life is full of lights, full of happiness but at end her own light ends her aliveness. Does my happiness also want to take my life Babaji. Is it so wrong, to wish happiness that you always keep me away from it?"

She wanted to cry, cry loud in Maan's arms. She wanted o bring out every fear of her life before him but when! She was asking but could not get answer from anyone.

"Geet you can't be fail. You have to reach Maan I know, he is also missing me. My heart can feel it!!'' she wiped aside her thoughts and started looking around. "I should call him again. Shayad iis baar baat ho jaaye!''

"Bhaisahab do you have phone?' she asked the man sat to next. "Wo its very urgent I have to call my husband. He is to come to take me on stoppage''

Her tried succeeded and man gave his phone. Geet again dialed Maan number first thinking if this time he doesn't take then, she will call in Mansion.

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Maan felt his phone vibrate. He in semi-unconscious could sense. His body unthinkable started to react on every ring. His hands moved then his head. He was feeling like something strange pull was overpowering him but till he could awake completely, ring stopped but he had been come in conscious.

"Geet!!'' he whispered, looked around and found himself still in same place. His head was paining, body was aching but now nothing could stop him. He remembered everything and anger rose but this was not the proper time to react. He had to leave somehow, without any failure this time. He came out from hospital secretly and started his parked car..

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Again disappointment covered Geet mind when Maan did not take her call. She started feeling unusual. "Why he doesn't take call!!'' she worried. She decided to call mansion but bus already had come on halt and all came down, Geet as well.

"Bhaiya how far is Delhi from here?' she asked to same man. "I have come from HP''

"You have reached half way bahanji!''

"Sirf aadhe raaste!!'' her heart sank. She asked for another bus which was difficult to say when she would get at this night.

"Bahanji you should stay somewhere for night. In morning only can get any other vehicles now!''

Geet did not reply, she had nothing. She knew it was not possible to stay or wait knowing Brij could come any time to catch her. She walked ahead.

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Maan reached outskirts of Delhi. He stopped car for a while and checked phone. Two missed calls from unknown number. He redialed recent one and it connected to the same man who was in bus with Geet. Maan had been told that a girl had used this phone saying she was to talk to her husband.

Maan shocked. "Husband'' he guessed it must be Geet but what she was doing there in bus, in this night!! He scared more when knew she was asking way to Delhi.

"I know something is terribly wrong. Kuch hus hai tumhe Geet!!'' his heart started beating in unusual way. Though he was not a weak hearten man but when it came to Geet, every strange feeling come to embrace him. From the same man Maan knew where Geet had been seen at last time. He speeds up for there.

Geet legs were trembling, paining, she escaped many time from fall but did not stop. She could not. She had to reach to Maan before leaving her life if it happens. Her throat dried. The water she had taken in bag was already finished. Her condition could take her life out from body any time, she felt.

"Maan!!'' her heart was crying, cocking up like thorn inside. "I can't run now, can't walk!!'' tears was veiling her eyes and making everything blur. In dark in blurriness she stopped at last. She had failed. She had not energy to go more. In mid road her body was standing like lifeless. Her head was spinning due to weakness and tiredness. She closed eyes feeling daze. She did not see a car was coming toward her in fullest speed. She did not see car had such speed she could be crushed anytime if doesn't move side. Car was in hurry that it was looking impossible to stop. The man on driving seat was looking a girl was stood on road, she was not moving. He pressed horn. One time second time then numerous times but Geet was not hearing. She had lost the ability of hear or see or even to think anything and suddenly with loud screech sound car stopped mere few inches away from her and gasp came out from her mouth' she fell on road covering her face between arms'

"Geet!''

A stunned whisper came out from Maan lips when saw her enfolding in her own arms.. Shivering and panting'

Precap: And Finally Maaneet Met ...

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o my dearest mona... jo sab meine plan kiya tha tumse badla lene ke liye every thing is cancelled... time for celebration... maaneet met ... and thank you for upating early...

u have portrayed them as real hamsafar... geet ne aadha raastha paar ki and for remaining maan have come...

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hope i get my battery tom itself, then will come back and comment more as abhi mera dll nahi bhara!!!

me leaving now... 15 min bache hain ... kal ke liye reserve... hope to meet all tom... if then will definitely celebrathe the REAL DHAMAKA...

awesome nice part

Wow! Awesome, at last Maan found Geet. Now she will be safe in his arms.