FF...Feelings#2...UPDATED PT 30/31 PG 93 11/11/ 2013

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: PaintedSky
I was waiting for the 1st part. And here u r in 2nd thread!! Aur mujhe khabar hi nahi.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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**PART 21**

outhouse?? geet felt weird...han wo maan stays in outhouse away from everyone
ever since his...but geet didn't let her complete...
am sorry dadima....she spoke...
koi bat nai beta...nakul take her to maan....she winked at pammi...
as geet left in a hurry she collided with a hard frame...
as she was about to fall...he held her...
madhubala...ahan...she heard him saying...
rk??? she opened her eyes shocked...
tum yahan????

BOTH WERE SHOCKED SEEING EACHOTHER...
what you doing here?? she asked...
i asked that first and secondly you standing at my place
and questioning me...
not a good move madhubala.....he spoke giving his signature smile...
first of all stop calling me madhubala!!!!
for heaven sake am not madhubala...
my name is geet...
and secondly am here to meet maan......she answered back looking in his eyes...
wait a minute you just now mentioned my place...
what does that means??? she asked confused...

well that means i live here.....he smiled sarcastically...
and for whom you have come here is my elder brother...
waise class me tumhara dhyaan hota hi kahan tha...
hota to you would have known...that mere naam ke sath
bhi khuranna juda hua hai...
but hmari aisi kismat kahan.....he spoke in a flirty tone...
waise kamal ki baat hai na...both are khuranna...
phir bi totally opposite...
he s so down to earth and other s attitude ki dukan......she commented

ahan...not bad...you didn't change a bit...
same goes for you too...self obsessed person....she spoke rolling her eyes...
waise bahut bade actor ban gae ho but abhi bhi dhang ke expression dene nai ate tumhe!!!!
taarif ke liye shukriya...he bowed...
waise mere bhai ki badi taarif ho rai hai...kya bat h....he winked
wo kya hai na...hr koi blind nai hota jo sirf tumhare piche bhage!!!! she gave a sarcastic smile...
kash tum bhi unme hoti...waise koi bat nai...ek khuranna nai to dusra sai....he spoke...
whatever...now if you allow me...can i complete the work that i came here for??? she asked...
sure...waise you didn't tell me why did you left all of a sudden....he asked...
am getting late rk...will talk to you later....she spoke leaving from there without looking at him...
he smiled and left...

as geet entered outhouse it was exceptionally silent...
does he live alone here....she wondered...
nakul showed her the room where maan was
no one s allowed to go further and after speaking this
turned around and went back
arrey suno to...but he was long gone!!!...
she slowly went upstairs and thought how to enter...
she knocked the door but no response...
this time she knocked harder...and the door opened...
the room was brightly lit...
as she entered she looked at the bed...
it was messy as if he was sleeping and just got up...
as her eyes moved upwards it got struck there...

her heart skipped several heart beats...
she covered her mouth with her hand in order to stop the whimper...
her eyes roamed around the entire room...
each and every corner...
she felt chocked...
her head felt like spinning...
she held the wall for support and pressed her eyes tightly...
as she felt a bit calm...
she opened her eyes...
and saw where her hand was...
it was her enlarged pic...
she was laughing while talking to someone...
but didn't remember whom...

she looked at the other pic...she most probably angry...
her nose was red...
but she didn't remember when those pics were clicked...
may be much before she even became friend with maan...
then how come he got these pics...
her eyes welled up seeing the entire room filled with her pictures...
her smiling...her laughing...her blushing pics...
oh god.....
just then her eyes got struck to one pic where she was dressed in a saree...
she went near that pic and caressed it...
what got her attention was that her partition was filled with vermillion...
she caressed it and found it strangely rough and hard...

just then it strikes her that it was not vermillion but his blood...
she pressed her lips to muffle her cries...
but tears were freely cascading from her yes...
how can someone love her so much...
this can never be a mere crush...
he was doing things that were scaring hell out of her...
she didn't know should she be happy knowing someone loved her so much...
or should be scared that he loved her insanely!!!!

she felt more guilty...
she thought herself responsible for all this...
if she wouldn't have run away at that point may be things would have been different...
may be maan would have been her older maan...her buddy...
he wouldn't have been living alone like this!!!!
she wiped her tears but soon more tears came up...
oh god what did i do!!!! she cried...
not able to take it anymore she turned around and ran out from there...
as she was about to exit she felt a tug at her dupatta ...
and stopped in her tracks knowing who it was!!!!

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here maan was in washroom...
just then he felt some movement in his room...
this enraged him as no one was allowed to enter his room...
he quickly opened the knob and rushed out...
but the sight brought a smile on his face...
her back was towards him but he could make out who it was!!!
she was dressed in a red suit...
hayee...he actually felt numerous violins being played at the background...
and felt like singing "chand mera dil...chandani ho tum"
bending on one knee and opening both his arms just like shahrukh from mai hoona!!!!😆

just as he was about to proceed in her direction...
he saw her turning around and leaving...
he quickly went in her direction and held her duppatta...
bina mile ja rai thi geet...hmmm....he spoke in his husky voice
and pulled her duppatta a bit...

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#GUYS I TRIED ANSWERING ALL YOUR DOUBTS IN THE PREVIOUS THREAD!!!

PRECAP: geet aj mat jao...please aj yahi ruk jao mere pas!!!!

PREVIOUS:~~THREAD 1~~ (PARTS 1-20)

NEXT:PART 22
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Edited by Mdworld - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

superb update dear

maan really loves geet a lot

precap is awesome dear

continue soon

Edited by lehr - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Part-21

yay...Me 3rd..!!!

This update was crazily awesome...Rk's back...totally flirty...😆

Maan is hayyeee...so dreamy...!!!kinda scary...but dreamy...u fantasticly expressed geet's rection while seeing his room...anyone would freak out...!

me loved when he pulled her dupatta...!

Precap..!!wow...Plz make it a H-O-T one please...pretty please...???

I know babes ur feeling low...start brooming ur buddy list babes.

Edited by Temporary99 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

finally geet came to know that how much he lv her
gosh kaash koi ladka mujhe pyaar karta
my heart is singing that song 😆😆
n me lv his one n only dialogue
bina mile ja rai thi geet...hmmm.. HAYEE LVD IT

precap- one more song yaar
abhi na jao chod ke
ki dil abhi bhara nhi

WAITING 4 MORE

Edited by tiakashyap - 12 years ago