FF...Feelings#2...UPDATED PT 30/31 PG 93 11/11/ 2013

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

I am feeling bit weird with Maan's room scene...

he is obsessed with Geet...and this obsession is very dangerous...it shows his mental state and his mental balance...he filled her maang with blood even in photo...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...

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swetha10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

congrats on the new thread..

awesome update..

luved it... continue soon

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dreamymishti88

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

superb

fantastic update

liked a lot dear

very nicely written

continue soon

waiting for more

waiting

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lehr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

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singh24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

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priyal12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

still waiting please give update soon

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Mdworld

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

**CREDIT FOR BANNER@--Rashu-- **

**PART 22**

# @tiakashyap...i love songs...so put a lot of songs in my ff...
will defo put this song...
@ Ru_21...aww...i loved your dp...
#@ singh24...@lehr....sorry for making you guys wait!!!!

her back was towards him but he could make out who it was!!!
she was dressed in a red suit...
hayee...he actually felt numerous violins being played at the background...
and felt like singing "chand mera dil...chandani ho tum"
bending on one knee and opening both his arms just like shahrukh from mai hoona!!!!LOL
just as he was about to proceed in her direction...
he saw her turning around and leaving...
he quickly went in her direction and held her duppatta...
bina mile ja rai thi geet...hmmm....he spoke in his husky voice
and pulled her duppatta a bit...

SHE CLOSED HER EYES FEELING HIS HOLD ON HER DUPATTA...
her one hand went to hold her dupatta on her place
while other hand trembled in nervousness...
she was in no ways ready to face him right now after
all what she saw...
as she felt him charging towards her in small steps...
she quickly wiped her eyes...

you didn't answer me geet...
he spoke as he took another step near her...
she didn't know what to reply...
she felt his breath on her shoulder...
she quickly turned around and saw him standing so ...so near to her...
she took a step back to create some distance...
wo wo...i didn't find you...
so thought you may be outside....she spoke all the while looking at the ground...
as she couldn't muster up the courage to look into his eyes...

jhoot bol rai ho geet???...he asked taking a step towards her...
she didn't answer but just stepped back...
jb jhoot bolna nai ata to bolti kyun ho??? he spoke while a smile adorned corner of his lips...
nai maan...wo mai...
wo mai kya geet?? he spoke caging her with her back towards the wall...
maan please...she tried but couldn't leave as left no space for her to escape...
geet...he held her chin and made her look towards him...
you were crying????he asked looking into her eyes...
bolo na...kya hua geet...are you hurt somewhere???? he spoke checking her
with worry...

maan...maan listen to me am fine...
nai you lying...if you not hurt then why you crying???...he asked all worried...
maan please...why you making things so difficult for me!!!! she asked looking dejected...
geet...am i making things difficult for you...or is it other way round...
maan...please meri baat suno....she spoke cupping his face...
maan...i want my maan back...i want my maan who was my best buddy...
i seriously dont know this maan...
geet am your maan only...am the same maan.....he spoke turning around...
nahi maan...you yourself know that...its not that true...

then you know the reason for this change geet...
it was you who left me alone...
it was you for whom i kept waiting that you will come back someday...
but you didn't....he let his tears come out...
i couldn't voice out my feelings to anyone geet...
first my mom left me and now you...
geet...didn't you know i couldn't live without you...
adat ban gai thi tum meri.....he spoke falling onto his knees...

maan...geet rushed to him...
why do you love me so much maan....she spoke cupping his face lovingly...
i don't deserve this love of yours maan...i dont...
you should punish me maan...you should hate me...but dont love me so much...
mujhe apni ankhon me itna mt girao maan...please.....she begged...
kash...ye mere hathon me hota geet...
kash i could hate you geet...but i could not...
this heart didn't let me forget you...
not even a single memory of yours.
..this heart only knows loving you geet
...he spoke looking into her eyes...

he stood up and made her sit on bed and sat himself besides her...
you must have known by now why i didn't let anyone come to this room!!!
i had preserved all your memories here...
whenever i missed you i could actually feel you here geet!!!
maan dont do this maan...why you spoiling your life like this maan...
you deserve much better!!!!
you can get your true love maan!!!! come out of this...
i myself will help you to choose one for you maan!!!! she tried convincing him...
then why not you geet????
maan you know my answer...its not easy to love someone for me now...
not after loosing two loved ones who were everything for me maan...
maan you know this and you know i can not spoil your life knowing that i wont be able to love
anyone.....she spoke getting up from bed...

why cant you spoil my my life geet???...he asked as he held her wrist and pulled her on him...
she landed on his lap while her head on his neck...
why do you care for me so much....he spoke tucking her hair behing her ear...
she raised her head and gazed deep in his eyes...
she couldn't move her eyes away from his...
she was like some spellbound...
bolo geet he whispered...he spoke while rubbing his nose with hers...
maan you know i can not hurt you...she spoke very slowly but was audible to him...
kyun geet.....he spoke closing the gap...
bolo...his breath fell on her lips...
she closed her eyes as a reaction...her heart was beating very fast...

just then there was a knock on the door...
Maan baba apka soup....nakul spoke...
geet's eyes snapped open and quickly got up and corrected her dress feeling conscious...
while maan cursed nakul kaka under his breath for his wrong timings...
geet quickly went towards the door and took the tray from his hand...
after closing the door she turned back and saw maan lying on bed...
maan soup....she spoke as she kept it near him...
hmm....and he again closed his eyes...
maan have it...please...
hmm...
maan...
kya hai...he snapped...
why you not having it??? she asked getting irritated...

tum pila do....he winked...
she shook her head knowing how stubborn he has become...
she made him sit properly...
and slowly made him drink it...
he smiled looking at her...
while she smiled looking back at him...
as the bowl got empty...she got up taking the tray when he held her hand...
geet aj mat jao...yahi ruk jao......he spoke looking at her like a kid...
she didn't expect this coming...
she didn't know what to reply...

please.....he spoke again...
fine...she muttered closing her eyes...
sachi...he spoke feeling so excited but let me keep this bowl first...
he nodded and she went downstairs...
as she came back she saw him waiting for her...
she went and sat besides him...
waise maan...hows your fever??? she asked looking towards him...
its ok now...he spoke adjusting his head on her lap...
maan you know i can't love you but still you love me???
she spoke caressing her hair...

geet i never asked you to love me back...
but just let me love you...you can not stop my feelings for you...
and it is what you believe that you cant love me...
but believe me i will make you love me...
and yes you dont have any option...
if you remember this week s gonna end and you have to say yes to my marraige proposal...
he winked...

why you so sure i will say yes...she asked...
i know...because you have to marry me only...
if not like this then may be forcefully am not not leaving any option...
maan...she was shocked...
shh...end of the disscussion...
let me sleep now...he closed his eyes and soon sleep overtook him...
while her eyes were void of any sleep...
her mind was busy thinking what to do now...
on one side she felt so guilty that she felt like surrendering to him for doing this to him...
on other side her heart which denied the fact of loving him...
she thought even if she married him...it would be devoid of love!!!!!
and her thoughts went on and on!!!!!

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# sorry...was busy with my farewell...didn't get time...
precap dont know!!!!!

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Edited by Mdworld - 13 years ago

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vrinda22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

nice part..

loved maneet interactions

geet feeling guilty for leaving maan

seeing him loving her so much

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

wow lovely emotional update.. te my maan holding his geet and te way geet controlling herself but my maan breaking her and trying to pour her heart and te way my maan confessing his love and crying was so lovely emotional.. his tears speaks how much he loves his geet.. te way my maan melting his geet and wrong timing nakul baba.. te way my maan was admant and geet feding him was lovely scenes.. te way my maan asking her to stay with him and te way he is saying he will marry her at any cost devil maan..te way my maan lying on his geet ki lap and te way geet caressing him was so cute scenes.. i love te update so much