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Posted: 12 years ago
Me first... Yayyy!!! Finally... Let me first do A Happy dance... 🥳

I Loved this one for all the revelations here, & the sorting of so many issues. 🤗

His mom met with an accident & here I was guessing it to be something relatedYayy. His anxiety was so perceptible. His anxiety, fear & helplessness of not being there for his mother when she needs him the most and moresoever for himself to be assured that his Mom is safe & secure. I so loved to see the bonding between the four friends, they all three did whatever little & to the best fo their capacities to support Maan in his time of grief when he went completely balnk to all things happeneing saving the fact that he has to reach near his Mom & be beside her as soon as possible.
Her small gesture of reaching out towards him to soothe him & remove him from the trance he was in from the time of the call was so sweet & showed of the effect they have on each other. Loved Ayush's quick thinking of keeping the car ready & making sure to usher all four of them together to reach Maan's mom to the earliest. Also how Ayush -Anya kept their own issues at the side while completely concentrating On supporting Maan, just showed the depth & uniqueness of their friendship.
Maan being all vulnerable & weakend by the fear of lossing on of his precious relation or to say apprehension of harm of any sort on his Mom was all so well brought forward.
It is always said that adversities make you realise who is the one you can always bank upon. & this accident made this to come true for all characters here. Everyone irrespective of what relation they shared with The Khurana family did thier tit bit to be of help to them. Be it Maan's friends, G, neighbours or even Zara. Even if it was as small as spending sometime with Maan's mom to lighten her mood or to cook food for the boys as their Mom was told to rest due to her injuries.
Loved how you showed that Maan has come to be one having unique & special place in Geet's life, she hasn't completely accepted it, but nonetheless is slowly being aware of it & getting accustomed to it. How AA's issues seem to be huge & without any salvation for Geet in absence of Maan but the day he came & his presence was felt she came to feel that all those issues weren't one they can't tackle.
Specially beautiful culmination to how everything about AA was revealed to Geet in the way of destiny slowly that too without Maan having to do much to clear everything out. This method was so much better than all that I had ever wondered & imagined it to happen. Finally everything is set in its place with Geet as well as us all knowing that There is no love quadrangle or triangle here but just straight cupid lines between two people who are meant to be together & like each other ( Can't state it as a general one as Geet madam is still in early stages of it all.) Also tahnks for including the part where Geet does show some sort fo reaction as of relief on knowing that Its AA together with Maan not involved in it...
Hopefully AA will soon sort it out & after they being the couple in love will somehow rub on their two other tortoise freinds who are palying their own game of luka chupi... 😉
Zara... interesting. And this Ranbir is one whom I'm coming to like very much. He is such a smarty .
Thanks for such a lovely long part... waiting for more... 😃
Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Who's going to mark 'U'? 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just realized I never edited this comment. Shoot me.
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So, Ranbir didn't run away after all. I don't know why we thought him to be a run away groom but oh well seems he's smarter and faster. While Maan blushes at the mere mention of Geet or teasing by his family, Ranbir on the other hand seems all the more eager to be a part of teasing which by the way never comes his way. 😆
Maan should be whacked on head, situation ka faida utha ke thoda leg pulling karna bhi aata nahi isey, buddhu kahinka.

The anxiety he felt at the mention of his mother's accident was palpable. Though knowing that the other person is fine, you still wish to see them once, and have them around to make sure, and that feeling is portrayed beautifully here. I loved when he snuggled next to her and slept. That made me aww.

So at last we have Anaya and Geet talk and yay yay yay, I am right all along. And guess what I am surprised to see Anaya not even able to complete love word. Trust me had it been one of my friends they would be happily and freely talking about these things, and worse things😆 but maybe that's us besharams😆


I'm only happy because Ayush won't have to face a heartbreak, I tell myself. There's no other reason. Or... is there?


No wonder I was grinning like a stupid fool like always😆
Now at this point of the story I am really glad that you continued this story not leaving it as a OS, or not posting at all. You see this story, more than a story would always be a learning lesson for me. How fiction isn't far away from life, and how things can be kept realistic and kept beautiful at the same time. The way you showed a slow progress in their relationship, the way she bonds with his family and friends, being a major part of his life in every way, is beautiful. Thanks for writing this Yummy yum
Edited by .Maggie. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Trip started quite happily, 😊 Maan n Geet walk at night was adventurous 😆
Adventurous? They ran and that was adventurous? 😆
Lift hmmm 😉 Shareef larka 😆 okay Mayyam I agree, Avi ne kaha ek chipka deta lift me, yew said awkward lagta, fit nhi rehta, agreed ! But kuch to likhti jo word 'Romantic' ki definition k andar aata
Romantic aur main likhti? Bada mushkil hai! 😆
Anaya worrying for Ayush n all, like Geet I too thought Anaya also has feelings for Ayush 😕 But if she does , then y did she react lyk that ? Was it becoz they were surrounded by Ppl ? 😕
You'll know soon why she reacted like that...
Geet shut Jess up 👏
Yeah! Go Geet! 😆
Phone call 😕 Kya Ranbir did something ? 😕 May b its his mother's call to inform him that Ranbir ran away wid his girl 🤣
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Sab logon ko aisa kyun lag raha hai ke Ranbir ran away? 😆
Kitni wild assumption hain 😆
Beshak! 😆
Khair, the chapter was awesome 😃
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Glad you liked it Naureen! 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Koolsmile



Unhen jo naaz hai khud par, nahin wo bewaja,
K jisko hamne chaha hai wo khud ko aam kyun samjhey ❤️ 😳


❤️❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Mera 200 th post in my fav thread. Yay!


Yayy!! Azaadi Mubarak! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13


Yayy!! Azaadi Mubarak! 😆

Aazaad parinda ... 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Who's going to mark 'U'? 😆

Tu rakh le...😆
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


😳Mera hai mere paas...😳
Tu rakh le...😆


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Posted: 12 years ago
Yayyy!!!!!!! 🥳

Finally Me 1st. 😳

*Aaj main upar tum sab neeche ... Aaj main aage tum sab ho peeche * 😆

Sweety dekh maine second spot nahi first spot liya ... 😛
*hum hogaye kamyab aaj ke update mein* 😆

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